Falling
An edited version of a little poem/song that I wrote recently.
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s-a
Take me away
Into the night
Were your face is etched in a light I can’t see,
And your hands pass through my skin
Like sweat
Take me away
To the edge of existence
Where your face meets mine (with those bright green eyes)
Take me away
In the quiet of darkness,
And rip open every sinew you can find
To see what’s inside
And take it in
Take me away,
From the edge of reality
I balance too barely, I could fall into you
flower68
this is really beautiful.teenagers,I love ya on here.So far my experience with teenagers o here is that they are talented beyond their years mostly.This writing proves no exception.
kossimarsalsa replied
why thank you, i try. :)
i’m glad you liked it so!
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s-a