My errant heart...
Thoughts inspired by a loss…
My errant heart... belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Everyday Life, Feminine Intent (LIMIT TWO IMAGES PER DAY), Freedom In Words & Art, Lifeline, Live, Love, Dream: , Midnight Ramblers, THE SISTERHOOD, Tuesday Afternoon and Who are YOU to Judge?Memories of days gone by
flow over me in waves
life’s vagaries a restless current
keeping time with the beat of my errant heart…
adrift with disillusionment,
the detritus of loss
foundering against the uncertainty
of a course yet uncharted
compass spins
helene ruiz
oooooohhhhhh!! moving and emotive words! ....... u should come read some of this stuff at Hard Hearts! we open on july 17th, wish i had met ya while the project was in the making…but we can always add poetry/spoken workd!
KNGodin replied
LoL! I would love to be in NYC on the 17th, Helene! One of these days… ;)
Renate Dartois
Your Poems are wonderful and moving Karen.
KNGodin replied
I’m so glad my words touch you, Renate…that makes me happy!
Leon Walker
This is a very touching piece Karen… Well done!!!!!!!
KNGodin replied
From the heart, Leon… ;)
Impassioned
Very nice one Karen, beautifully written…
KNGodin replied
I appreciate that, Mark…thank you!
Erika .
oh this is just beautifully written. x
KNGodin replied
Thank you, Erika – I’m pleased that you enjoyed it! :)
oneperfectkiss
This is really beautiful! xx
KNGodin replied
Thank you, opk…I’m glad you like it!
oneperfectkiss
.....and i’m really sorry for your loss. xx
KNGodin replied
:)
skinnyman
inspiring stuff K:)
KNGodin replied
Thank you, Skinny :)
Patricia Anne ...
LOVE the last line Nice one Karen :)
KNGodin replied
Oh, I’m glad Patrish – it felt right to me!
Christopher E...
very nice writing
KNGodin replied
Thank you, Chris… the words were there, today! :)
Shoaib .
you are a sculptor of words too ;)
beautiful work young lady
KNGodin replied
Thank you, honey!