The rain fell on my day,
I sat and watched the cars go by,
Hiding my tears away,
As I asked myself why?
As I sat alone, just me,
Looking to the heavens,
It was plain for me to see,
As the pale sky darkens.
It wasn’t me that I needed,
He was all I longed for,
But how had he succeeded,
Breaking me to the core.
The rain stopped falling on that day,
No cars went by,
Their tears were here to stay,
It was the day I said goodbye.
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Well, this is a piece of crap.
Your rhyming pattern is totally off, there is no consistency and whats more – the concept is over done and cheap.