The day the rain stopped

The rain fell on my day,
I sat and watched the cars go by,
Hiding my tears away,
As I asked myself why?

As I sat alone, just me,
Looking to the heavens,
It was plain for me to see,
As the pale sky darkens.

It wasn’t me that I needed,
He was all I longed for,
But how had he succeeded,
Breaking me to the core.

The rain stopped falling on that day,
No cars went by,
Their tears were here to stay,
It was the day I said goodbye.


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The day the rain stopped by

I needed to let my feelings out, I was feeling pretty confused at the time. I just wrote what came to me, and yes this is another one of my depressing pieces.

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Comments

  • BadassUkeUK
    BadassUkeUKover 2 years ago

    Well, this is a piece of crap.
    Your rhyming pattern is totally off, there is no consistency and whats more – the concept is over done and cheap.