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Wow, Kirrill, I was dragged into the story… just saw all these dark strong pictures, the fast movement of the camera, all these camera angles, all theses close shots, the fear in Mr. Hoyels eyes, the big grinning coolness of Barlow, his feeling of superpower… than the fucking surprise even for him. For god sake, they didn’t release C-9 until today, but who knows, those ill minded pinstripe-suited people don’t respect anything in their unlimited imbecility ;))
The part with the equipment failure and when the actors changing the role of Hoyel and Barlow was just to much… what a shocking moment :))))) In that moment the viewer would become so irritated, what a clever idea!
“Barthin’ up hot dogs at the back end of the ship – the captain taps me on the shoulder and tells me – if somthing hairy is coming up my throat – it’s my asshole.” ……haven’t finished reading yet but this line absolutely cracked me up ;>D …..back to reading now ….
Really really amazing…..I will have to read this again….this would be a wondeful idea for a novella……really had me in suspense…and I so loved your humor in this….cracking good tale of a perhaps ghoulish nature tinged with James Bond meets the film crew for smoko… Xx
Oh and to add one more thing…. I really enjoyed reading this…the pace stops and starts and races you off when you least expect again….:)))
you should be a director or something….but you’re a really good writer. xx
… Thank you for your thoughts … !
BRILLIANT! A POSSIBLE FILM NOIR / PHILIP K DICK MASTERPIECE….IT WAS WORTH THE EFFORT…HAVE YOU APPROACHED ANY INDEPENDANT FILM MAKERS WITH THIS?
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