Two as one

kimie
Author: kimie
Word Count: 199
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Two as one

Feeling in a sloppy mood lol ( a rareity for me ) But true words for hubby and me.
Thank you for taking the time to read my writing, hope you enjoy.

Two as one, as close as we can be
You respect my freedom, you respect me
A bond like our,s is a treasure to behold
Always warm, never cold.

They said at first it would never last
Such negative talk, but thats in the past
All these year,s, and still such love
Our love was sent from Heaven above.

The years go by and the bond is strong
Remember our wedding day, remember our song
A song of love, a lovely soft tune
Sitting in the park looking up at the moon.

We,ve had our share of troubles, the high,s and the low,s
But the stronger we got, we both stood the blow,s
United together, together as one
They never thought we would last this long.

They say that opposite,s never attract
We are so opposite and thats a fact
But compromise has been the name of our game
And as it is now, we are pretty much the same.

We have blended well, over the years
We have stood strong, we ironed out our fears
Our love is destined, destined to be
We are now so together
Together, you and me.

  • Rhenastarr

    Rhenastarr

    Well written. Sounds as if your love is blessed.

  • kimie replied

    Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Married for 25 years x

  • saseoche

    saseoche

    Beautiful written love it!

  • kimie replied

    Thanks for your lovely comment Saseoche x

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Beautifully written ….......... to see such love with two souls at one…....... gives pleasure thats so true and second to none. you have experienced True Love Such beautiful loving words Kimie – David

  • kimie replied

    Thanks so much David, a lovely comment. Just read your,s, beautifully written x

  • kalaryder

    kalaryder

    Lovely words

  • kimie replied

    Thanks Kalaryder, thanks for taking the time to view my work. A lovely comment x

  • scoob29

    scoob29

    Very very good writing Kimie.

  • kimie replied

    Thank you so much Sue, a beautifull comment x

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    very nice poetry you have here..

  • kimie replied

    Thank you Shoaib, a lovely comment x

  • cebrfa

    cebrfa

    Beautiful!

  • kimie replied

    Thank you so much Cebrfa x

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