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He felt it as soon as he walked in the house..THE EVIL..yet one look at his new brides face wiped that feeling away..she loved it, and all he wanted to do is please her, and please her he did when she turned to him with “I Love it” on her lips..he turned to the real estate agent and said “We’ll take it”…from that day his world was turned upside down..The voices started not long after moving day, telling him that “she was no good” his beautiful wife…convincing him he would be better without her..whispering those terrible things he should do to “Fix” her..Now he sits at the top of the stairs looking down at the bottom where she lays crumbled and not moving..flashes of remembrance coming in and out..her running with him on her heals, screaming for her to “come back”…her slipping..reaching for him, tumbling..and now all he can hear is the voices again..claiming him, he knows now he is forever here in this evil house..IN ITS GRIP..

Nikon D90
18-200 mm VR lens

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abandoned, house, old, scary, kim calvert, eerie, horror

Comments

  • Marie Van Schie
    Marie Van Schiealmost 5 years ago

    GASP! You really do freak me out sometimes Kim! ;-) I saw the image and you know how I love those forlorn looking houses you do so well…and then I read the story! WOW! I didn’t know you could write! And boy can you write! You should do that professionly if you don’t do already. I got tortally sucked into that…AWESOME! Just great! Now I did favorite the lil house but it is never going to look like it would have before…I guess that’s good? ;-)

  • lol..I didn’t know I could write either..lol..sometimes I sit down with an image and I can just hear a story..so I start writing, never knew I had that in me until recently..I really enjoy it :) Thanks so much Marie for such encouraging words.

    – Kim Calvert

  • Joanne  Bradley
    Joanne Bradleyalmost 5 years ago

    Wiched awesome! Your prose is so visually stimulating and a perfect match to your shot!

  • Thank you so much Joanne, I love this house, I have gone back to it a few times..

    – Kim Calvert

  • Peter Denniston
    Peter Dennistonalmost 5 years ago

    Excellent

  • Thank you so much Peter for the visit and the compliment.

    – Kim Calvert

  • grimduke1
    grimduke1almost 5 years ago

    Your best yet!…The photo is terrific, and the story you should enter into a short story competition. Well done!

  • Thank you for the awesome compliment Grim :)

    – Kim Calvert

  • billfox256
    billfox256almost 5 years ago

    Read your narrative – Does this mean the place is available? Terrific photo and story!!!!, Bill

  • You can move in right away :) Thanks Bill..

    – Kim Calvert

  • wendyL
    wendyLalmost 5 years ago

    ok…I am blown away! congrats! you are FEATURED!

  • :) so cool..thanks so much Wendy!!!

    – Kim Calvert

  • wendyL
    wendyLalmost 5 years ago

    you are sooooooo welcome! I added you to my watch list….Your images are not only scary (which I love) but brilliantly shot and created! well done!

  • TrishMarrs
    TrishMarrsalmost 5 years ago

    Your story had me from start to finish, an excellent and descriptive piece of writing. Nice work on the photo.

  • Hi Trish, and thank you so much for the awesome comment.

    – Kim Calvert

  • enchantedImages
    enchantedImagesalmost 5 years ago

    Wow! You’ve done it again, Kim!
    Eerily beautiful shot and wonderful writing to accomany it.
    – Bobbi

  • Thank you Bobbi for all your wonderful encouraging words :)

    – Kim Calvert

  • cherylc1
    cherylc1almost 5 years ago

    Ohhhh so cool!!! Awesome!!

  • Thank you Cheryl :)

    – Kim Calvert

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