On Your Own
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When your sad and low do you weep
Do you shed your tears in solitary
Weep in silence
On your own
Close the doors
Bury your face
If no one else hears
They where not shed
No one hears your pain
The sadness
Hurt can not be seen
The lonelyness
Fear
Your happy
Seen smiling
Jesting
Life is good…..............
Play
Act
Control
lonely
lonely
Yet not alone
Deep down you are
No way forward
No End
On your own
Dont suffer on your own
At least not always
dawndavies
wonderfully written kim,dawnx
poupoune
Beautiful, simply beautiful!!
horseman
Sad but tru we have to over come the lonelyness, I think all of us go thru this a time or two especially now so close to the holidays when every time hits you. great writing!!!!
Ingz
very touching beautiful work Kim xxxxx
Nala
That is so beautiful and sweet. . . . I can hear and feel that well done
Sean Farragher
that is so true,,well done
adgray
Bravo Kim!
we all hide from the sun sometimes!
Or is that we shelter ourselves from it’s harshness?
either way your words stir the deep fears of being unaccepted in all of us!
BRAVO! ☼
SharonAHenson
Beautiful
redcordial
true very true, on the outside ur happy but deep within ur crying…
merlin67
So very true. And there are a lot of people like us out there. Usually the life and soul of the party but when home – it is a different story. I love your poem. Thank you for sharing it.
Kimberley Davitt replied
Thank you so much
tc kim
Tainia Finlay
I find myself alone after 19 yrs of my darling son now gone. This truly resonates with me Kim. You put into words what I am unable. Beautiful writing my friend.
Kimberley Davitt replied
Thank you, sorry for the late comment I have only just seen this
:~)
George Swann
Very insightful Kim…have you been inside my head!!
Kimberley Davitt replied
No sweetie, but in my experiences many feel this way.
peer preasure can play a very big part, and its usually unconsious so.
Thanks george for the honesty
Heavenandus777
Beautiful Writing Hunny
Kimberley Davitt replied
Thanks Anna :~)