ode to kali.

mister khan
Author: mister khan
Word Count: 315
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ode to kali.

flesh hunting mouth

look in your eyes you look in mine
i am alive you are alive
i’ve come on you; you come to me,
dressed in your sweat, my sweat and me.
My hands pull your hair,
your head back towards me

mouth hunting flesh

Your sweet sweat
met with mine.
Your sweet meat
tastes divine
You dance in my arms.
Hard little body raking and shaking.
Pushed down, you rise with your tide
Pulled up, you ride pink waves inside.
And reaching down
your feather fingers find me hard.

flesh

Merciless nails down my back
Make me harder
for you,
then on you.
then in you
“She’s yours,” you whisper, “it’s not me
she wants you- she tells me she wants you”

gift

“She’s yours.
Take her.
Do what you want.
Want what you will.
She’s not mine.
If you want to, you can kill.
Tie me gag me choke me fuck me
crush me bend me break me smite me
But whatever you do please come inside me”.

deeper

“i will feel your pleasure,
and you will feel my pain,
And baby when you come again-
I will watch your final breath.
Because you are fucking me to death.”

harder

“When you come it’s like you die.
When you come i watch you die
I want to see you die.”

sacrifice

the current rips across my spine
And through eternal darkness i dive
Down and down and down,
As you scream and cry and cry,
I leave my body, and yours,
bent and crushed and bitten;
Broken beaten twisted kitten

resurrection

I go. I’m gone.
don’t know where, nor how long
nor why?
But always back to the living i fly
Turn over like a lazy tiger,
open an eye,
and see you sit, content,
smoking a fucking cigarette.

You scare the fuck out of me

ode to kali.

she’s out there.

  • clone42

    clone42, 5 months ago

    Quit fucking, make love.

  • Ange

    Ange, 5 months ago

    wow.
    well written indeed.

  • kathleen

    kathleenCollaboration Queen, 5 months ago

    kali is the hindu goddess of destruction am I right… I’m sure it was the greater evil she was trying to get to, how much of that is in you?

  • deliriousgirl

    deliriousgirl, 5 months ago

    JFC! I’m speechless! I knew you had it in you!

    jen

  • Danny Minisrty of bad spelling

    Danny Minisrty..., 5 months ago

    ........another Saturday night gone bad,,,,,,,,

  • mister khan

    mister khan, 5 months ago

    it is a description of the energetic exchange that occurs in left hand tantra, which classically employs the deliberate manipulation of energy for pleasure or gain (mantras, yantras and pujas), and the use of red meat and drugs. as opposed to right hand tantra, which involves being like ‘sting’.

    there are two hoffs- good hoff and bad hoff. but it is the same hoff.

    clone42 is quite right when he says “quit fucking make love”- ‘making love’ is the direction that we can follow to a tantric sexual state- a right hand path. but there is an opposite path that follows the same energetic rules. the ultimate at the other end- also a tantric state, but bad hoff indeed.

    good hoff and bad hoff. it’s in us all. one can’t exist without the other, or everything would be still. and we’d have never got that knight rider episode where the hoff’s got a moustache.

    bad hoff.

  • kathleen

    kathleenCollaboration Queen, 5 months ago

    where are you getting all these pics… doh…

    what happened to the original night rider guy, the one that’s face got transformed into that above… remember that secret identity thing… where is HE now…

  • mister khan

    mister khan in reply to Danny Minisrty of bad spelling’s comment, 5 months ago

    i believe it was a wednesday morning.

  • Mummified

    Mummifiedworks here, 5 months ago

    amazing.

  • Lucan Industries Unlimited

    Lucan Industri..., 5 months ago

    This is a true story isn’t it?

  • Lawford

    Lawford, 5 months ago

    So that’s how it’s done.
    I have to go away and practice now.

  • kcallow

    kcallow, 5 months ago

    where have you been all of my life

  • Ange

    Ange, 5 months ago

    that blooody moustache! makes me smile:)

    indeed rabbitollah what goes up must come down
    night cant exist without day
    good & bad are one and the same…arghhh, dont get me started!
    this is why i love, look fwd & embrace to some serious chaos in life
    chaos (never fails) to balance life out superbly.

  • Chanel2

    Chanel2, 5 months ago

    You are quite the writer Rabitollah.
    I don’t remember the moustache Hoff, perhaps that episode was banned in NZ.

  • Lolo Lost

    Lolo Lost, 5 months ago

    Your sweet meat
    tastes divine

    haha! i knew it!

  • EvangelosGazis

    EvangelosGazis, 5 months ago

    there are two hoffs- good hoff and bad hoff. but it is the same hoff.

  • flower68

    flower68, 5 months ago

    hi honey I’m home.hoff hoff.
    :-D

  • GladysTwaddle

    GladysTwaddle, 4 months ago

    FUCK HOFF!!!
    keep on shining for JESUS!!!

  • JenniferB

    JenniferB, 4 months ago

    hahahaha, I love the ending you twisted shit. ...And I thought that I was fucking crazy… Would someone please show me the way outta here???? (A simple “Fuck Off” will do fine…) ;-)

  • lolowe

    lolowe, 3 months ago

    Man, this was crazy, but I liked it lol. I don’t know what else to say. You kept me reading. This was hot.

  • Larasolnishko

    Larasolnishko, about 1 month ago

    deep thinker, deep poetry, deep artistic observation of senses, well done, that piece remind me a Jewish lover. I think not many people can sense all pallet of feelings and senses when they practice love making…..lol

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