ode to the blue rose of ashkhabad, 29 minutes ago

mister khan
Author: mister khan
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ode to the blue rose of ashkhabad, 29 minutes ago

after two weeks of holding hands, last night i kissed the blue rose of ashkhabad.

Before I lost myself in the ocean of your eyes
I had lost myself in an ocean full of lies

Before the voice of your soul opened up my heart
The poison of my soul had ripped my heart apart

Before your gentle, guiding hands found their way to mine
I had carved a path through life, dumb and deaf and blind

Before your lips so tender, touched, mine, touched, yours
I knew you were the goddess I was sent here to adore

  • Juilee  Pryor

    Juilee Pryor

    you are in love….. lovely…...aaaaaaahhhhh …..:)

  • mister khan replied

    yes. i cannot argue with this diagnosis.

  • deliriousgirl

    deliriousgirl

    The part I can’t believe is that you actually held hands for two weeks.

  • mister khan replied

    yes. and there was one month of just trying not to hold hands.
    i love her so much.

  • Cathryn Swanson

    Cathryn Swanson

    Awww, Rabbitollah. Good for you.

  • mister khan replied

    ...and not bad for her either, in my estimation.

    there does seem to be something of a deficit of voices echoing ‘lucky girl’, however…

  • Danny

    Danny

    I don’t know what to say?
    I’m touched.

  • mister khan replied

    i knew you weren’t a virgin, but there isn’t need to be so open about it.

  • Mummified

    Mummified

    Did you shower at any point during the handholding ? I am concerned about the hygiene factor.

  • mister khan replied

    thankyou for your concern.

    no there was no showering, but we were wearing latex gloves.

  • Lucan Industries (© misterkhan 1995)

    Lucan Industri...

    I have been concerned about his hygiene factor for years. Never made any difference,

    This is quite beautiful. I’m chuffed for you.
    And I have an erection.

  • mister khan replied

    it’s nice your chuffed for me, but won’t someone please be chuffed for her?

    you’ve had an erection as long as i can remember.

    personally i don’t think it’s anything to be proud of. infact, if i was you, i would pretend that you’re not excited at all and try to give the impression that it’s merely idling, as opposed to redlining, at four and a half inches.

    unless you were talking about your new shed. in which case, i’m sorry.

  • Ange

    Ange

    love…
    enjoy:)

  • mister khan replied

    thankyou

  • Mummified

    Mummified

    glad about the latex gloves and jolly pleased for you….

  • Lawford

    Lawford

    Have you asked her her name yet?

  • mister khan replied

    i didn’t have to ask. i already knew

  • Larasolnishko

    Larasolnishko

    Oh dear me, you have to write poetry every single minute than, It will pass soon, summer romance don’t last long….smiling, i hope you appreciate my fine seance of humor. one more smile…

  • SilverQueen

    SilverQueen

    SImply beautiful -

    Blessings
    SQ

  • EarthquakeBee

    EarthquakeBee

    Must have been a glorious kiss if it made you write this. Better than my happy childhood allegory.

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