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~ Take from me my pen ~

Take from me my pen
and I shall mourn as though love is lost
as though my bed lay empty

Take from me my pen
and I shall be stripped of my very soul
left flailing where no love can tempt me

In a world where night and day both draw a line
disabling one from entering the other
where broken dreams are buried deep
in the heart of every lover
I must take my pen so true and treasured
and delve into a realm fit for no sobriety
and find within all the hope imagination brings
and paint with ink a blessed fantasy

Take from me my pen
and I shall fall at your feet
a vessel void of life and passion

Take from me my pen
and place a knife unto my breast
if such malice be your weapon

For to walk the path of this life called Mine
would neither bring me peace, purpose nor happiness
if the ink within my heart and soul
can never be found, brought to light, given, or spent…

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A writer’s fear… Well, mine at least…

Writer’s block; no time to write; interruptions; distractions; frustrations; fears; insecurities; doubts… so on and etc… often come to steal my voice and I have to struggle to take me pen back, a lot…

Poem competition: http://poets.com/donna-driver/take-from-me-my-pen

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ink, pen, poetry, poet, writer

I take photos. I write. I sing & dance. Ok, I DON’T sing & dance. Not in public, anyway; & usually 2 my own beat. But I have fun, & that makes life a little more tolerable -for me. Maybe not 4 my kids. But, hey, if they can’t laugh at their mum then they’re probably the only ones who aren’t. So turn up the music & let’s boogie! (Do they still boogie these days? Gosh, I’m getting old. Best be careful not 2 throw a hip while throwing a leg!)

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Comments

  • Donna19
    Donna19about 3 years ago

    Really like this Donna.

  • Hey, great name. ;) Thank you so very much for reading and commenting, Donna. I greatly appreciate it. xxxx

    – Donna Keevers Driver

  • Michael Matthews
    Michael Matthewsabout 3 years ago

    Wow .. that is what I call passion. This one gave me goosebumps. Great work Donna.
    I might write one called ‘Take me from my keyboard’ !! or ‘Take me from my camera’
    Being without my camera would give me withdrawal symptoms big time !

  • Yes, I thought the “pen” could be replaced with what the reader was passionate about. :) I’d be like that at sunset if I didn’t have my camera with me. :) Thank you SO much for your wonderful response, Michael! :D It’s greatly appreciated, my friend. xxx

    – Donna Keevers Driver

  • labaker
    labakerabout 3 years ago

    was thinking about this very thing today only with my eyes and a viewfinder, Seriously!

    Wonderful work my friend!

  • What’s the odd, huh! ;) Well, with us, it seems highly likely we had similar thoughts! :) And I can understand how you’d feel… Actually, losing sight would be far worse than losing my “voice”, I reckon… Thank you ever so much for your great response, Larry. {{{hug}}} xxx

    – Donna Keevers Driver

  • jono johnson
    jono johnsonabout 3 years ago

    What a beautiful way of words you have Donna :-)

  • {{{hug}}} Thank you so very much for your wonderful response, Jono! :) Greatly appreciated. xxx

    – Donna Keevers Driver

  • zpawpaw
    zpawpawabout 3 years ago

    Beautiful poem! Very well written and with a lot of passion it seems!:)

  • :) Yeah, I kinda have a flow of passion every now and then and have to write. :) Thank you so very much! :) xxx

    – Donna Keevers Driver

  • Jeff Weymier
    Jeff Weymierabout 3 years ago

    You are a great writer and person.

  • Gee… How can I respond to that other than {{{JEFF}}} Thank you, Jeff. With all my heart, I thank you. xxx

    – Donna Keevers Driver

  • TonyCrehan
    TonyCrehanabout 3 years ago

    No writer’s block for you when you can pen such classical verse. I can picture this being delivered as a monologue by one of the great Shakespearean actors. Fabulous Donna!

  • wow… What a great comment. {{{TONY}}} With all I am, Tony, I thank you! xxxx

    – Donna Keevers Driver

  • highbeam
    highbeamabout 3 years ago

    You pen with beautiful ink the character of your heart… no leaves left to make the table any bigger than it need be. You have penned the poem of “a true poet’s heart” here and every poet worth their salt would recognize their own emotion in and from this. Simply beautiful and so poignant. Great writing here Donna.

  • What a humbling comment… You just stole my pen and rendered me speechless. :) {{{RUSS}}} Thank you… With all I am, I thank you. xxxx

    – Donna Keevers Driver

  • highbeam
    highbeamabout 3 years ago

    I have sudden urge to let you know just how good this is… so I will act upon this urge and grace this writing this way…

    … this is one that any poet could appreciate and one every poet should read!

  • Gee… I am so deeply honoured, Russell… So very honoured, indeed… THANK YOU!!! XXX

    – Donna Keevers Driver

  • Photography  by Mathilde
    Photography b...about 3 years ago

    Wow – I feel like this without my camera to hand – love this !!

  • Thank you so very much, for you wonderful response, Mathilde… :D Greatly appreciated. :) xxx

    – Donna Keevers Driver

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