Invitation to Hell

Felt out of place, different
Must seek those in the dark horizon
Invisible in the night
You mesmerize, you know the way to seal the kiss of eternity
Pull down black clouds will be my sanctuary
Darkness is my temple
For I will clench to your soul mock your chivalry, feign your desire
Burst beneath the skin at the throat
Proclaim your blood as my life force
For I lived knowing that time would not slip away
It is beyond reasons fall all my doubts transferred into dust
Darkness came and it was you in my mind, my love, my dearest
Come into my world and endure no pain
But make no mistake my promises are motions twisted in many ways
Cry no more for the bargain you made and promised to me
Every drop of your sweet red nectar stored the wisdom of centuries
Place me in your shelter to escape the sun gleaming from sorrow cries
Of which the lives I’ve taken
Eternity, my fate is sealed……… forever.

  • Euan  Thorburn

    Euan Thorburn

    wow
    powerful ming
    beautiful
    xxxx

  • Ming Myaskovsky replied

    Thank you for your thoughts and kind words. :-))

  • eon  .

    eon .

    Been ther Done That Met the devil and all but Im Glad I made it Back ” – )) Great Peice Ciao Steve

  • Ming Myaskovsky replied

    Glad you are here with us alive!! Thank you. :)))

  • Carol Berliner

    Carol Berliner

    sooooo powerful Ming

  • Ming Myaskovsky replied

    Thank you for your compliment, Carol :-))

  • Michael Beddall

    Michael Beddall

    Beautiful work Mingsan! You did my photograph justice!

  • Ming Myaskovsky replied

    Yay!!! glad you like it, it’s an honored, thank you very much!!:))

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Good read !!

  • Ming Myaskovsky replied

    Thank you, Gregory, I appreciate your comment and that you took time to read. :))

  • gerrardt

    gerrardt

    your writing moves me…it is PHENOMENAL, and POWERFUL, and i am incredibly taken by your mind Ming..!!

  • Ming Myaskovsky replied

    WOW!!! Thank you, I appreciate your compliment and that you took time to read, you’ve put a big smile on my face. :D

  • J-C Saint-Pô

    J-C Saint-Pô

    i see you read lots of vampire books! ;-)

  • Ming Myaskovsky replied

    Not just books;D —thank you for your visit and compliment :))

  • Spraven

    Spraven

    Wow, I read without a breath, I’m exhusted,
    that was some rush, very powerful piece Ming!!
    I love it friend!

  • Ushna Sardar
  • Ming Myaskovsky replied

    YOU HAVE MADE MY DAY!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH, I AM HONORED!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :))))

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    a poem of a lot of feeling and great depth in its magnitude !!! great poetry ming !!!

  • Ming  Myaskovsky

    Ming Myaskovsky

    Thank you Shoaib for your appreciation of my writing, you’ve put smiles on my face!!!!!!!!! :)))))

  • charliethetramp

    charliethetramp

    there`s worst places than hell ming
    but your evocative description
    makes it almost appealing

  • Ming Myaskovsky replied

    I don’t know places like that, but thank you very much for taking your time to read my writing, much appreciated!! :)))

  • Rhenastarr

    Rhenastarr

    Congrats on your well deserved feature. Powerful and emotive!!!

  • Ming Myaskovsky replied

    I appreciate your compliment and that you took time to read, thank you very much!! :))

  • John Dicandia

    John Dicandia

    Wow! Ming I can almost see what’s happening here! JD

  • Ming Myaskovsky replied

    John, thank you so much for your kind and compliment words. Glad you enjoyed it. :)))

  • Pete Costick

    Pete Costick

    Congrats…..featured work

  • Ming Myaskovsky replied

    Thank you so much Pete and everyone at The X Group. I really appreciated this!! :))

  • barnsy

    barnsy

    wow thats beutifully emotional. well done x

  • Ming Myaskovsky replied

    Oh boy, I am really way behind.
    Thank you so much, glad you like it, you’ve made my day! :) Bear Hugs!!!!

  • Kirrill D'Kainn

    Kirrill D'Kainn

    Dear Ming.

    The thought was there
    I want to let it show
    But I am afraid
    To let the feeling go

    Hopeless
    How your curled fingers
    Move
    Through your black wind blown hair

    With half shut brown eyes
    And scarlet nostrils
    Planting winter blossoms
    Bread crumbs for birds and geese

    Woman … after waiting for so long
    Intuition tells you …

    When all resistance melts away
    When all hesitation dissolves
    When all fears disappear

    Woman … what is left?
    You are sure … !

    Kirrill.

  • Ming  Myaskovsky

    Ming Myaskovsky

    I do admire your strength and that you are definitely a very intellectual artist/writer.
    I will keep this as it is to share it with other RB members and the world!
    Thank you very much Kirrill, I am very honored and humbled when I say thank you, my friend!! :))) HUGS!!!!!!!

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Brilliant….. Now I desire the memory sealed in the saliva of your kiss….

  • Ming Myaskovsky replied

    Oh My!!
    Gregory, I dont’ know how to thank you. You’ve made me blush!! ;D
    You’ve put smiles on my face, you are sweet as a candied apple!! :D

  • Trijpmaker

    Trijpmaker

    Powerfull..
    I can’t say anyting more

  • Trijpmaker

    Trijpmaker

    anything*

  • Rhinovangogh

    Rhinovangogh

    Sounds Vampirish. Dark piece, Interesting…

  • Ming Myaskovsky replied

    Hello Rhino,
    You’ve nailed it! Thank you very much your comment and that you took time to read, much appreciated. :))))
    And I think it goes very well with this, check out his link, hope you’ll like it.
    http://www.redbubble.com/people/artistmind/art/3657029-2-geisha-ming-myaskovsky

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL...

    excellence

  • Ming Myaskovsky replied

    Truly sorry for this late reply.
    Thank you very much Keith for your visit and compliment! :)

  • musbah alkbir

    musbah alkbir

    your writing has emotional depth love it very nice…good Ming

  • Ming Myaskovsky replied

    I am honored Musbath, this means a lot to me, thank you so much for your kind words! :)

  • Matthew Mitchell

    Matthew Mitchell

    This is great – All your work is great!!!!

  • Ming Myaskovsky replied

    Happy to meet another talented artist.
    Thank YOU very much Matthew, I love all your work as well !! :D

  • netmonk

    netmonk

    In the shadows I will await…. and crave to be bitten by my immortal fate. With eternal darkness there is still light!

    Well done Mingsan! Your writing is music to my ears! :)

  • Ming Myaskovsky replied

    Thank you so much for your beautiful words…I am blown away and I am honored Kennysan ! :)

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