Figure of Mystery

Richard Veal

Figure of Mystery

I took this shot in the Victorian Village at Flambards, Helston, Cornwall, UK.

Soft edge added in Picassa3.

It inspired me to write the accompanying short story which I hope you enjoy and adds to your viewing pleasure.

I hope you like it.
Thank you for looking and reading.

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The Rippers Ghost?
The winter sun is setting on a cold Victorian London. Smoke from the coal fires mixes with the fog, making it hard to breathe.

The Lamplighter is patrolling the streets doing his duty and people are scurrying around, wanting to get home and away from the dark alleyways before nightfall.

It is the year 1895, and four years since ‘The Ripper’ had last struck, but fear still grips the residents of this part of East London.

Some people say he is dead, others say alive, but some say that a Spirit from a bygone age haunts the streets, striking terror to all who walk the dark streets at night, deadly silent apart from the echoes of horseshoes thumping on the cobblestones, amplified in the fog, adding to the tension and the terror that fills everyone.

It will be another hour till I finish my work and set foot once more into the cold smokey foreboding darkness of Whitechapel, and as I put some more coal on the fire in my office, I cannot help thinking about smoke that it is now producing, I will soon be breathing, and adding to the density of the fog, which is getting thicker by the minute, making it dark, even though the sun has not set yet.

As the last embers glow in the grate, from my small office window on the second floor, I cannot see the street below, and my breath is turning to ice as it touches the window.
A cold night indeed, filled with dense smokey fog as well, some of which I am guilty of.

My day is finishing, and I put my hat, coat, scarf and gloves on, ready to brave the dark world waiting for me outside the warm comfort of my office.
I open the door and enter the foggy darkness from the fire escape, tasting the coal as I breathe, which I then put the scarf over my mouth so as to try and filter some of the filthy air before it enters my lungs. From my position, I cannot see the ground, and start to descend slowly and carefully down the now icy stairs, my footsteps reverberating on every step.
I hear a distant whistle, and the muffled sounds of people shouting, and as I get lower, I recognise the sound as Policeman’s whistles heading in my direction.

My breathing gets faster and my pulse starts to race, wondering what was coming towards me.
I reach the first floor landing of the fire escape and can see the pavement through the gaslights, and I then stand transfixed, too scared to move, as something appears in the corner of my eye.

What is it? Is it the Ripper himself, or the Rippers ghost?
It passed in front of me and disappeared into the foggy darkness as quickly as it came.
The whistles had stopped also. What happened to them? Was that a ghostly experience as well?
I will never know.

© Richard Veal. July 2009.

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Figure of Mystery by Richard Veal
Figure of Mystery by Richard Veal
  • cherylc1

    cherylc1

    Awesome capture an words!!

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Cheryl. x

  • Kimberley Davitt

    Kimberley Davitt

    A stunning b&w image, Richard. Fabulous light.
    wonderful writing
    kim xx

  • Richard Veal replied

    Thank you Kim.
    Glad you like it. x

  • Martina Fagan

    Martina Fagan

    Mysterious shot Richard lovely moody created

  • Richard Veal replied

    Thank you Tina.

  • WendyJC

    WendyJC

    wonderful story Richard,
    the vision you created in your tale was like being there :o)
    such a fitting image!

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Wendy.
    I was disappointed when I saw this at first, then I thought about the story, so all was not lost. x

  • HELUA

    HELUA

    A great image, Richard, so rich in atmosphere !!!

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Helua. x

  • Hans Bax

    Hans Bax

    How mysterious, Richard! Wonderful shot! I like the B&W.

  • Richard Veal replied

    Thank you kindly Hans.

  • Irene  Burdell

    Irene Burdell

    Are you sure there was a man down there and it Wasn’t a Ghost ???
    Brilliant capture Richard . xx We will never know . ;=)

  • Richard Veal replied

    Thank you Irene.
    Who was it I wonder???
    xx

  • Sue Buckingham

    Sue Buckingham

    Wow Richard this is absolutely fantastic, I was riveted!! Fantastic work and going into my faves xx

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Sue, and for the fave also.
    Much appreciated and glad that you like it. xx

  • Ric Alexander

    Ric Alexander

    Great image, the story is good too. Just love the mystery of this one.

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Ric, and for the fave also.
    Very much appreciated my friend.

  • brian pendrey

    brian pendrey

    brilliant work

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Brian.

  • Edward Denyer

    Edward Denyer

    Excellent work Richard. – Ted

  • Richard Veal replied

    Thank you Ted.

  • reflexio

    reflexio

    Nice match of picture and story Richard.

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks John.

  • Catherine White

    Catherine White

    Very cool image and story to match it.

  • Richard Veal replied

    Thank you Catherine.
    Glad that you like it.

  • CJTill

    CJTill

    A fantastic black and white picture Richard. A real drama in the making.

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Colin.

  • DaveReed

    DaveReed

    Crackin` shot Richard, great accompanying story :)

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Dave, and glad that you like the pic and the story.

  • JUSTART

    JUSTART

    great shot

  • Richard Veal replied

    Thank you.

  • Trish Woodford

    Trish Woodford

    Great image Richard, has a wonderful spooky mood about it & the b&w really tops it off :)

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Trish.

  • morpheus71

    morpheus71

    Excellent !

  • Richard Veal replied

    Thank you Phil.

  • Malcolm Chant

    Malcolm Chant

    Richard not only is this a great shot, well suited to B&W, the words are so suitable.

    Excellent.

    Malcolm

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Malcolm.
    Glad you liked the words also.

  • Svetlana Sewell

    Svetlana Sewell

    Excellent!

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Svetlana.

  • Scott  d'Almeida

    Scott d'Almeida

    fantastic

  • Richard Veal replied

    Thanks Scott.

  • Hawker

    Hawker

    Nice composition, great perspective

  • Richard Veal replied

    Thank you Hawker.
    Glad you like it.

  • shakey

    shakey

    Great image and narrative Richard.

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Paul.
    Glad you enjoyed reading it.

  • Lori Peters

    Lori Peters

    Stories of the Ripper still gives me a chill to this day. I can imagine how he terrorized people. The picture is perfect for the story. Great writing. xo

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Lori, and for the fave also.
    Glad you liked the story also. xx

  • PhotoAvenue

    PhotoAvenue

    Fantastic image and narrative my friend!

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks PA.

  • shanghaiwu

    shanghaiwu

    BRILLIANT on REDBUBBLE HOMEPAGE

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks shanghaiwu for you visit and comment.
    Very much appreciated.

  • dinghysailor1

    dinghysailor1

    Brilliant to see this on the home page capn!! aye aye!! smart salutes and will whistle you aboard!! well done indeed
    :))

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks #1.
    Stand easy, and get the Rum out.
    An extra tot for the ratings. x :-))

  • reflexio

    reflexio

    Congrats on the home page feature Richard, well deserved.

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks John.

  • Joyce Dickens, IPA

    Joyce Dickens,...

    I just logged on and saw this on the homepage Richard – Congratulations , so very well deserved – Awesome work my friend!!! XX JD

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Joyce. xx

  • PJ Ryan

    PJ Ryan

    congrats on the homepage feature, a stand out for me.

    Fabulous image, interesting story ..

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks PJ, and for the fave also.
    Glad you liked the story as well.
    xx

  • Lori Peters

    Lori Peters

    You made the HOME PAGE!!!! Congratualtions!!!

  • Richard Veal replied

    Thank you Lori, and for the fave also.
    Very much appreciated. x

  • Irene  Burdell

    Irene Burdell

    A huge

    So well deserved it is a great pic. The Home Page , !!! What next ? xx

  • Richard Veal replied

    World Domination?? :-))
    Many thanks Irene. xx

  • Tessa Bishop

    Tessa Bishop

    Great moody image Richard – huge congrats on your feature!

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Tessa.
    Very much appreciated. x

  • Jason Connolly

    Jason Connolly

    Well pleased for your feature mate, great shot here mate, well done..

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Jason.
    Glad you like it.

  • Wayne Holman

    Wayne Holman

    Spooky and effective image Richard and love the short story. Well done on the homepage feature mate = ))

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Wayne.
    Much appreciated.

  • Zac St. Clair

    Zac St. Clair

    love this

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Zac, and for the fave also.
    Very much appreciated.

  • Sanne Thijs

    Sanne Thijs

    Congrats on the homepagefeature

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Sanne.
    Much appreciated my friend.

  • naturelover

    naturelover

    Outstanding! what a great cover for a mystery book-very imaginative Richard- well done!!! and Congratulations! xx

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Pauline.
    Glad you like it. xox

  • NICKY7

    NICKY7

    Well done Richard especially on the home page and good writing skills looks an interesting region , It reminds me of Scarborough a bit when the mist rises up from the moor and meets the sea frith ? anyeay that stuff ,

  • Richard Veal replied

    Thank you Nicky.
    Hope you are keeping well my friend.

  • NICKY7

    NICKY7

    actually i meant Whitby well there near t each other and im not right sharp today .

  • Richard Veal replied

    No probs my friend.
    I bet you are keeping busy.

  • Rachel-V

    Rachel-V

    Gorgeous picture, love the mysterious side of it

  • Richard Veal replied

    Thank you Rachel.
    Glad you like it.

  • DebraLee Wiseberg

    DebraLee Wiseberg

    Way to go Richard….congrat’s on the homepage feature!

    Debrq

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks Debra. x

  • Danimal11

    Danimal11

    highly strange

  • Richard Veal replied

    Thanks my friend, and for the fave also.
    Much appreciated.

  • hsien-ku

    hsien-ku

    wonderful image!

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks hsien, and for the fave also.
    Very much appreciated.

  • LTPhotography

    LTPhotography

    Brilliant composition and the story too!

  • Richard Veal replied

    Many thanks LT, and for the fave also.
    Very much appreciated, and glad you like it.

  • jenseyes

    jenseyes

  • Richard Veal replied

    Thank you Jen.
    I am very honoured that you should choose this work to be featured.

  • TaniaLosada

    TaniaLosada

    Love it! Congrats!

  • Richard Veal replied

    Thank you Tania, and for the fave also.
    Very much appreciated, and nice to meet you. :-))

  • htandre

    htandre

    Mysterious

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