Figure of Mystery
I took this shot in the Victorian Village at Flambards, Helston, Cornwall, UK.
Soft edge added in Picassa3.
It inspired me to write the accompanying short story which I hope you enjoy and adds to your viewing pleasure.
I hope you like it.
Thank you for looking and reading.
Best Viewed Large.
The Rippers Ghost?
The winter sun is setting on a cold Victorian London. Smoke from the coal fires mixes with the fog, making it hard to breathe.
The Lamplighter is patrolling the streets doing his duty and people are scurrying around, wanting to get home and away from the dark alleyways before nightfall.
It is the year 1895, and four years since ‘The Ripper’ had last struck, but fear still grips the residents of this part of East London.
Some people say he is dead, others say alive, but some say that a Spirit from a bygone age haunts the streets, striking terror to all who walk the dark streets at night, deadly silent apart from the echoes of horseshoes thumping on the cobblestones, amplified in the fog, adding to the tension and the terror that fills everyone.
It will be another hour till I finish my work and set foot once more into the cold smokey foreboding darkness of Whitechapel, and as I put some more coal on the fire in my office, I cannot help thinking about smoke that it is now producing, I will soon be breathing, and adding to the density of the fog, which is getting thicker by the minute, making it dark, even though the sun has not set yet.
As the last embers glow in the grate, from my small office window on the second floor, I cannot see the street below, and my breath is turning to ice as it touches the window.
A cold night indeed, filled with dense smokey fog as well, some of which I am guilty of.
My day is finishing, and I put my hat, coat, scarf and gloves on, ready to brave the dark world waiting for me outside the warm comfort of my office.
I open the door and enter the foggy darkness from the fire escape, tasting the coal as I breathe, which I then put the scarf over my mouth so as to try and filter some of the filthy air before it enters my lungs. From my position, I cannot see the ground, and start to descend slowly and carefully down the now icy stairs, my footsteps reverberating on every step.
I hear a distant whistle, and the muffled sounds of people shouting, and as I get lower, I recognise the sound as Policeman’s whistles heading in my direction.
My breathing gets faster and my pulse starts to race, wondering what was coming towards me.
I reach the first floor landing of the fire escape and can see the pavement through the gaslights, and I then stand transfixed, too scared to move, as something appears in the corner of my eye.
What is it? Is it the Ripper himself, or the Rippers ghost?
It passed in front of me and disappeared into the foggy darkness as quickly as it came.
The whistles had stopped also. What happened to them? Was that a ghostly experience as well?
I will never know.
© Richard Veal. July 2009.


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cherylc1
Awesome capture an words!!
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Cheryl. x
Kimberley Davitt
A stunning b&w image, Richard. Fabulous light.
wonderful writing
kim xx
Richard Veal replied
Thank you Kim.
Glad you like it. x
Martina Fagan
Mysterious shot Richard lovely moody created
Richard Veal replied
Thank you Tina.
WendyJC
wonderful story Richard,
the vision you created in your tale was like being there :o)
such a fitting image!
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Wendy.
I was disappointed when I saw this at first, then I thought about the story, so all was not lost. x
HELUA
A great image, Richard, so rich in atmosphere !!!
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Helua. x
Hans Bax
How mysterious, Richard! Wonderful shot! I like the B&W.
Richard Veal replied
Thank you kindly Hans.
Irene Burdell
Are you sure there was a man down there and it Wasn’t a Ghost ???
Brilliant capture Richard . xx We will never know . ;=)
Richard Veal replied
Thank you Irene.
Who was it I wonder???
xx
Sue Buckingham
Wow Richard this is absolutely fantastic, I was riveted!! Fantastic work and going into my faves xx
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Sue, and for the fave also.
Much appreciated and glad that you like it. xx
Ric Alexander
Great image, the story is good too. Just love the mystery of this one.
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Ric, and for the fave also.
Very much appreciated my friend.
brian pendrey
brilliant work
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Brian.
Edward Denyer
Excellent work Richard. – Ted
Richard Veal replied
Thank you Ted.
reflexio
Nice match of picture and story Richard.
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks John.
Catherine White
Very cool image and story to match it.
Richard Veal replied
Thank you Catherine.
Glad that you like it.
CJTill
A fantastic black and white picture Richard. A real drama in the making.
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Colin.
DaveReed
Crackin` shot Richard, great accompanying story :)
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Dave, and glad that you like the pic and the story.
JUSTART
great shot
Richard Veal replied
Thank you.
Trish Woodford
Great image Richard, has a wonderful spooky mood about it & the b&w really tops it off :)
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Trish.
morpheus71
Excellent !
Richard Veal replied
Thank you Phil.
Malcolm Chant
Richard not only is this a great shot, well suited to B&W, the words are so suitable.
Excellent.
Malcolm
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Malcolm.
Glad you liked the words also.
Svetlana Sewell
Excellent!
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Svetlana.
Scott d'Almeida
fantastic
Richard Veal replied
Thanks Scott.
Hawker
Nice composition, great perspective
Richard Veal replied
Thank you Hawker.
Glad you like it.
shakey
Great image and narrative Richard.
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Paul.
Glad you enjoyed reading it.
Lori Peters
Stories of the Ripper still gives me a chill to this day. I can imagine how he terrorized people. The picture is perfect for the story. Great writing. xo
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Lori, and for the fave also.
Glad you liked the story also. xx
PhotoAvenue
Fantastic image and narrative my friend!
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks PA.
shanghaiwu
BRILLIANT on REDBUBBLE HOMEPAGE
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks shanghaiwu for you visit and comment.
Very much appreciated.
dinghysailor1
Brilliant to see this on the home page capn!! aye aye!! smart salutes and will whistle you aboard!! well done indeed
:))
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks #1.
Stand easy, and get the Rum out.
An extra tot for the ratings. x :-))
reflexio
Congrats on the home page feature Richard, well deserved.
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks John.
Joyce Dickens,...
I just logged on and saw this on the homepage Richard – Congratulations , so very well deserved – Awesome work my friend!!! XX JD
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Joyce. xx
PJ Ryan
congrats on the homepage feature, a stand out for me.
Fabulous image, interesting story ..
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks PJ, and for the fave also.
Glad you liked the story as well.
xx
Lori Peters
You made the HOME PAGE!!!! Congratualtions!!!
Richard Veal replied
Thank you Lori, and for the fave also.
Very much appreciated. x
Irene Burdell
A huge
So well deserved it is a great pic. The Home Page , !!! What next ? xx
Richard Veal replied
World Domination?? :-))
Many thanks Irene. xx
Tessa Bishop
Great moody image Richard – huge congrats on your feature!
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Tessa.
Very much appreciated. x
Jason Connolly
Well pleased for your feature mate, great shot here mate, well done..
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Jason.
Glad you like it.
Wayne Holman
Spooky and effective image Richard and love the short story. Well done on the homepage feature mate = ))
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Wayne.
Much appreciated.
Zac St. Clair
love this
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Zac, and for the fave also.
Very much appreciated.
Sanne Thijs
Congrats on the homepagefeature

Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Sanne.
Much appreciated my friend.
naturelover
Outstanding! what a great cover for a mystery book-very imaginative Richard- well done!!! and Congratulations! xx
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Pauline.
Glad you like it. xox
NICKY7
Well done Richard especially on the home page and good writing skills looks an interesting region , It reminds me of Scarborough a bit when the mist rises up from the moor and meets the sea frith ? anyeay that stuff ,
Richard Veal replied
Thank you Nicky.
Hope you are keeping well my friend.
NICKY7
actually i meant Whitby well there near t each other and im not right sharp today .
Richard Veal replied
No probs my friend.
I bet you are keeping busy.
Rachel-V
Gorgeous picture, love the mysterious side of it
Richard Veal replied
Thank you Rachel.
Glad you like it.
DebraLee Wiseberg
Way to go Richard….congrat’s on the homepage feature!
Debrq
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks Debra. x
Danimal11
highly strange
Richard Veal replied
Thanks my friend, and for the fave also.
Much appreciated.
hsien-ku
wonderful image!
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks hsien, and for the fave also.
Very much appreciated.
LTPhotography
Brilliant composition and the story too!
Richard Veal replied
Many thanks LT, and for the fave also.
Very much appreciated, and glad you like it.
jenseyes
Richard Veal replied
Thank you Jen.
I am very honoured that you should choose this work to be featured.
TaniaLosada
Love it! Congrats!
Richard Veal replied
Thank you Tania, and for the fave also.
Very much appreciated, and nice to meet you. :-))
htandre
Mysterious