The Roots of the Willow Tree
The Roots of the Willow Tree belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, PhilosophicalThe weeping willow whispered to me, wrapped me
in her draping fingers
and allowed me to Be for a while.
(I never could forget that smile.)
He was there; I glanced at him with grace in my eyes,
as his fingers played upon strings
and his voice offered up melodies to the sky.
I wanted to say something, but… I didn’t even try.
There were too many moments
colliding into that one October night
and I could barely decipher the moonlight
from the soil beneath my hands.
My patchwork dress wrapped around my legs;
I gazed at the ground by my side
and breathed.
I could feel the willow’s roots beneath me,
her feathery promises above me…
and quite suddenly I felt safe in the world’s arms.
He was far away, where the music was, and
I was alone with the weeping willow and the stars.
All these moments were there between us
as the moonlight danced upon the water
and I wondered how deep the willow’s roots stretched into the earth.
We drank from that bottle of wine as though it would somehow stop time;
as though the music would never end and
that tree could weep forever.
As though that tree would weep forever.
digidreamgrafix
awesome…amazing poetry!
Kara Emily Krantz replied
ahh thank you!! :) :)
jinney
VERY VERY -nice!
I looove the willow tree myself-and was inspirred to
write about it-nothing like yours!
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!
-jinney
Kara Emily Krantz replied
Thank you! The willow is beautiful, majestic and mysterious. Definitely worthy of our words. :) Thank you SO much for your kind comment. :)
Goggo
Lovely poem. ’...safe in the world’s arms.’ is the main idea but somehow this has come about by having the right partner. It’s a bit ironic that the tree might weep forever, when this person is so safe and happy in that moment…Wonderful description of feeling happy about being in the present moment alone, because this person doesn’t feel alone. Hope you don’t mind my analysis, only trying to give you an idea of what I thought it was about, and what it says to me. I loved it!
Kara Emily Krantz replied
I love your analysis, and it’s very close to the emotions I was feeling when writing it. Thank you so much…. I appreciate your words :)
LeaLoo
He was far away, where the music was, and
I was alone with the weeping willow and the stars.
Great lines!
Kara Emily Krantz replied
thank you so much! i liked that you picked those lines out – i like to know what people were drawn to :) thank you!
Pinkham
Lovely. Easy to read as it flows well. Just enough visual bait to hook us into our own thoughts as we read.
Kara Emily Krantz replied
Thank you very much for that. :) It’s good to hear that it flows well – sometimes we don’t know. :) Thank you ! :)
ufosIsee
Kudos again on some fine writing…
Shoaib .
theres something very real in ur words i connect to
i m not sure where it is
but keep doing what u do