Waiting in the dark

kalaryder
Author: kalaryder
Word Count: 159
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Waiting in the dark

A short piece from the list of lead in sentences

Waiting in the dark belongs to the following groups:

Writing Workshop

Waiting in the dark can be fun. That’s what Joe said.

It was okay for Joe to like the dark, he has eyes that can see around corners and penetrate the gloom. Me? I’m blind as a bat in the dark. I am also SCARED OF THE DARK. Oh dear, did I really shout that? Sorry, I meant to whisper it in case THEY heard it.

What do you mean, who are they? Where have you been? Everyone knows who THEY are!

No, sorry, I really don’t believe you. You couldn’t have lived here for such a long time without knowing who THEY are.

Hey there’s Joe, he’s come out of his favourite pool of blackness and is waving at us. See, jumping up and down as if his feet are on fire. Yes, I did chuckle, he looks funny. What’s he saying. Can you hear? It sounds like R U N!!!!!!!!!!

Yes, yes I am backing away. I’m………………..

  • adgray

    adgray

    heeheeheeheehee what a fun piece! lol well said lol
    Chookas! ☺

  • kalaryder replied

    Amazing what a cuppa will do to the brain :)

  • iAN Derrick

    iAN Derrick

    Ah thou art a fun lady Kalaryder…I always enjoy a merry tale although I must say I am now somewhat concerned as to what was in that cuppa.
    Does it come by the bucket full ????

  • kalaryder replied

    HAHA

  • Rosemaree

    Rosemaree

    Very good…

  • kalaryder replied

    Thanks Rosemaree

  • skyhorse

    skyhorse

    I don’t know, you mean you STILL can’t see in the dark? Reminds me of the conversation we had about nightvision … I still don’t get it that people can’t see without light

  • kalaryder replied

    Yes, but as I said before, we are normal LOL

  • jcmontgomery

    jcmontgomery

    So happy you had fun with it and shared it with us. But, hmm, to be continued? Hehe.

  • kalaryder replied

    Not sure, it was just a flash of typing :)

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