Let The Music Play Loud
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! 100% !, ! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Out Emotion, Imperfectly, Lifeline, Midnight Ramblers, On Youth, Outsiders, Shameless Self-Promotion, The Art of Pain, The beauty of poetry, Up & Coming Writers and Writing: Persuing Happinessstars are falling from the sky,
the moon’s dissected,
the pieces of the pie are crumbling.
sunlight’s gone, the sun has burnt black,
because you’re gone, and i am struggling
to get through the day,to find a way
to pick up the pieces of my shattered dreams
to repair my world, torn at the seams
where the grief crashes in
you’re gone forever, you told me never to remember
but still i won’t forget. I’ll remember
where you are now you can catch the clouds,
you can sail away on a river of dreams
because they will all come true.
so now you’ve found, or so it seems,
a place that echoes your sweet dreams,
it’s never silent, even when there’s no sound,
for in my heart the music’s playing loud
in you memory.
so let the music play loud forever more,
let all the sadness fall to the floor,
let your eternal spring day fill me to the core,
just let the music play loud…
Erika .
I love the dreaminess of this poem. I love this part:
sunlight’s gone, the sun has burnt black,
because you’re gone, and i am struggling
to get through the day,to find a way
to pick up the pieces of my shattered dreams
to repair my world, torn at the seams
where the grief crashes in
I can relate…beautiful writing, Julia!
Julialala replied
Thanks for the comment, I wish you could relate to something happier, still I’m glad you’re able to relate to my poetry at all. =]
silverstrummer...
Beautifull Writing such heartfelt words for such a loved one lost, I can feel the sorrow in your words
“so let the music play loud forever more,
let all the sadness fall to the floor,
let your eternal spring day fill me to the core,
just let the music play loud”
Your words echo …...... but your memories of your love will stay and not wash away! – David :>))
Julialala replied
thanks so much for the comment, David!! Much appreciated =]
Selkie
I’m enjoying all the writing you added to Imp, but this one really is sticking to me. It’s got a haunting, beautiful quality that is bittersweet. Lovely work, Julia.
Julialala replied
:D Thanks for reading it! Haunting and bittersweet, I like that description of it.. I’m hoping to publish some of my writing soon, so it’s really nice to get a comment like this. =]
♥Trena Sheffi...
Julialala replied
Thank you so much! I’m honoured! :D
AFogArty
Excellent again!
Julialala replied
Thanks very much, I appreciate it!!
skinnyman
sad longing for broken dreams, beautifully expressed julia x
Julialala replied
Thank you, glad you could understand it.. Xx
ricardo perez jr
this is wonderfull
Julialala replied
Thank you very much for saying so! =]
Christer Fribrock
Outstanding! I in awe over your words!
Thank you
Chris
Julialala replied
Wonderful of you to say such a thing =]
Mudsoldat
CONGRATS J. MS
Julialala replied
Thanks very much, i appreciate it!! =]
Straysod
Really nice piece, well done!
Julialala replied
Thanks very much for reading, glad you enjoyed it! =]