but we can eat each other (reply to another poet)

but we can eat each other
dialogue immediate response
doing exactly the same
being completely equal
both eating the same menu
making the same kind of noise
no forks spoons chopsticks allowed
can easily slurp the source
bury your face in ice cream
.
can finish eating noodles
sucking in the same long ones
to see who sucks in the most
see who can suck it off whom
if we end sucking the same
prize a whole plate of durians
to eat each one together
partly inside both our mouths
then we can talk of nothing
.
juddarwin

but we can eat each other (reply to another poet)

juddarwin

Joined June 2009

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