haiku himmel 6 (to their poetry: lisa jewell, gretchen cello, hsein ku, lolowe . . .)

reading you / yet am
writing poetry like hair, long
nosing prints & pores
.
line links close as if
osmosis territory
physical transcends
.
to whom i add red
violin; yvonka their poems
makes echos aural
.
but as i read ‘s truth
their wharfs having more hull bumps
extrapolation
.
now: writing, now’ve read
not food, digests, yea psychs from coccyx
(can’t move far) to brain
.
yes, she stirs my me
tapors some ‘she’ ship/country
i must needs create!
.

juddarwin

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reading you / still am
writing a poem, like hair, long
nosing prints & pores
.

line links close as by
osmosis territory
physical transcends

.

juddarwin

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  • lolowe
    loloweover 4 years ago

    This is beautiful…and so touching Juddarwin…if you feel this way about the poems that I write..then I must be doing something really wonderful. < 3 Thank you so, so much.

  • yes, lolowe, with immediacy, lisa jewell’s, gretchen cello’s, hsien ku’s, and yours. you each….‘’so much in your batteries/ reminds/ newly inspires/ teaches me, i [will] keep loving you ever more,’’ as i stated ‘neath hsien-ku’s art work, H-K230. i added my experientials / your name to the other three that became four since i read you; as the four daughters, of the nine muses, i do see as i write my poetry; recently, very much lisa’s. and, it’s thank you, very much!


    juddarwin

    – juddarwin

  • Lisa  Jewell
    Lisa Jewellover 4 years ago

    Oh my that is so flattering and beautiful,
    I’m honoured to be one of the writers that makes you stop, think, and feel.

    thank you xo

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