juddarwin --- _live!_ -poem, bit by bit, writ
juddarwin --- _live!_ -poem, bit by bit, writ belongs to the following groups:
60's GLORY, All About Your Best Work, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Atheism, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Midnight Ramblers, Something To Say, The Red Writing Room, Up & Coming Writers and WMGmission: to be st judas to/because
darwin’s deus wrought, now (somewhat mentioned with
my introductory poem to rb &
the atheism group) ‘st judas’ be
cause his ironic kiss bade it’s writ write
(mine’s never ironic: always as though
vainly attempting to knead-kiss soften
tumbledown inside wrought-space encapsuled
together rushing re dostoyevski-
country free as then you’ll never know yet
actually full of what you truely know
beng in with—live! and making it happen
that kiss: for you, sweet lass, just a kiss! said
Robin Hood market sale selling royal deer,
meaning ‘peck’ when peck is all that’s needed with
lips churned-used worked like could ha’ made
butter) the prophesy’s being fulfilled; like
the question re Darwin is open; has not
even been formulated…
Lisa Jewell 15 days ago
I see iconography is your forte…now tell me where is a girl to start?
juddarwin replied 14 days ago
thanks. your question allowed the poem to proceed. the bracket closing after ‘deer’ was off-putting. seemed to close the line; sense, of what was afore said. when you asked the question i recalled why i mentioned Robin; kiss; flirting; peck; when-worthiness of ‘little kiss’; when it isn’t sign of depleted love, taken for granted: when all this, now, is metaphor for… where bracket closes you look back to where it opened: that before and after deals with judas’ kiss keeping the prophesy re jesus going; its use, here, therefore suggesting something re Darrwin did not proceed. the matter within the brackets speaks of yearning for \ needed indulgence in raw life to trace how/when little bits can start bonfires in you suggesting where/when/if neccessary/worthwhile, what the hell for?, but feeling like wanting to feel at home with life with what/who clicks already or…
—--the poem will go on with the theme of judas ing Darwin, since it is ‘juddarwin’; what i am all about, or, i, as juddarwin.
thanks! again, Lisa Jewel. Do you, by any chance play the__ like Lisa Simpson, or get any other way jazzed up? it’s just your name suddenly, associated. i saw tracing your lines and commentators and their answers that you ken gretchen. much of her poetry plays music on my lines with new sounds i suddenly chase reinterpretation. something in yours make the world not quite study as is, or, arranged, or taken for granted. maybe it’s us. poets can’t just sense; even 5 out of five, but need rearrangement and shuffled intensities to oust! \ out, with new lines.
--juddarwin