"You shower me with words made of knives"

joyfuljoy
Author: joyfuljoy
Word Count: 93
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Cutting, twisting, turning, dissecting
Your knife-like words render me down into shreds
Deeper and near fatal
They slice me to ribbons
Opening old wounds and scars where they bled

Sharper than razor blades, keenly you place those words
Where they will do the most damage to me
Stripping away the shell
Built up protectively
Opening me up, all my tenderness to see

Pinpoint accuracy, straight to the heart of me
No defences left to shield me from pain
Triumphantly stand over me
Watching your handiwork
Opening my being to hurt once again.

"You shower me with words made of knives"

I had the radio on this morning and a song by Adele called ‘Cold Shoulder’ came on – and one of the lines in the song is
“You shower me with words made of knives”.

This really stuck in my head all day and I wrote the above to exorcise it!!

"You shower me with words made of knives" belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical
  • Olive Denyer

    Olive Denyer, 2 months ago

    Bet I know where you are coming from with this! – Love Dad

  • joyfuljoy

    joyfuljoy in reply to Olive Denyer’s comment, 2 months ago

    All water under the bridge now though, and I definitely do not have that problem anymore :)

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