You and I
Meeting on the inside first.
You and I belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, Freedom In Words & Art, The Sensual Word and WMGYou’re blessed enough to have me
even though you don’t.
I’ll be your silver sea, you my blonde earth.
I know your time-trapped beauty,
your gracious urn. Your patience
is worth waiting for.
Most couples meet in domes of flesh
and greet the sun, its naked rose.
But you and I are not like that, from inside
the temple comes the spire.
Tied to coloured stakes; immortal leaves,
shades of fire.
Astoreth
Your choice of words is always so stunningly beautiful and so fitting for the very different person that you are my dear friend. xxxx
erika15
Just beautiful. Your words just bloom when put together in poems. This is really captivating. Very nice writing. :)
Leda D
this is beautiful.
Jim Marshal replied
Thank you.
liliana
This is so deep, meaningful and beautiful ….such soulful writing
Jim Marshal replied
Thanks liliana, means a lot. x
linaji
Holy Cow.. I am in awe.. maybe you would like to meet this other fine poet.. parole
mewhile.. I will savor every moment I come over.. your so not contrived..
Gabby87
WOW …............................................. That’s so very lovely and beautiful..
And nice work too!!!!
=D
Jim Marshal replied
Cheers Gabby, appreciate your visit.
erika15
If I already favorited, I will do it again. Just love this one.
Jim Marshal replied
Thanks Erika!
natapee
lovely choice of words.
Paul Compton
Captivating. Quite delicate and thoughtful. I love this piece.
Holly Ringland
jim, i just promptly fell in love with this piece.
Jim Marshal replied
whoa really? I’m so happy… thanks, nice to hear from you :)
Kristin Reynolds
from inside
the temple comes the spire.
Tied to coloured stakes; immortal leaves,
shades of fire.
awesome. you know it. love, K
Jim Marshal replied
;)
ArcadiaTempest
A deep work on love between two….really wonderful imagery. Poetry that totally involved my emotions….I am in love with the romances of life so it is always so uplifting to read about such things especially when it is written so eloquently .X
Jim Marshal replied
in love with the romances…. that doesn’t seem remotely like tautology to me… lol thanks Karen Sue, you words are always well received.
Philosophy Lee
“Your patience
is worth waiting for.”
These words were ‘worth
waiting for’! :)
Jim Marshal replied
Ah that means a lot from you, the master of zen koans… lol
wasy35
great write jim, your patient worth waiting for, excellent.
Jim Marshal replied
thanks wasy, I appreciate your comment.
ArcadiaTempest
Hi Jim….yep tautology is one of my favorite haunts that I like to frequent as much as possible whenever I possibly can if I get the chance to ….. ;)
artyfifi
Sublime. Joy to read!
hsien-ku
passionate yet elegant. a beautiful piece of writing! any woman who hears these words from you is very lucky.
Ushna Sardar
fabulous Jim!
hsien-ku
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