I cannot wait until, ?
Your smile is upon me,
like the mist upon the vale,
like the light upon the water,
like the moon upon the pale.
Soft whispers fleeting,
like love made in the dark,
like the dead within their graves,
like your shadow on my heart.


Longing for that moment,?
When first I taste your lips,
?like a sip of a fine wine,
like a honeysuckle drop,
like a grape fresh off the vine.
Our dared kisses sighing,
like waves upon the shore,
like wildfire ’cross the plains, ?
like your footfalls on my floor.


When at last in my arms,
And our time has come,
like the sands within the glass,
like a canyon, river carved,
like an omen come to pass.
I’ll look upon your face,
and know that you are mine:
then gaze in your eyes and
watch the stars collide.

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From Pennsylvania. BS in Film. MFA in Creative Writing, emphasis on Screenwriting.

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  • GoTheMile
    GoTheMileover 2 years ago


  • IzzyGumbo
    IzzyGumboabout 2 years ago

    You are a dream to read

  • This comment made me smile from ear to ear! Thank you IzzyGumbo! :D

    – johnmiller

  • evon ski
    evon skiabout 2 years ago

    yeah me too. :)) fabulous piece here. has a hynotic sense to it.

  • Thanks yvonca! Thanks for sharing your group with me! I’m looking forward to reading and viewing some of the other members’ works! :)

    – johnmiller

  • Donna19
    Donna19about 2 years ago

    A softly flowing work. Really evokes a sigh John. Lovely

  • Thank you again Donna19! I had a bit of doubt about the flow. But if you say it’s flowing, then I’ll rest easier with it. :) Glad you like it!

    – johnmiller

  • Laurie Search
    Laurie Searchabout 2 years ago

    Wow, this is absolutely beautiful….

  • Thank you Laurie! I’m happy that you enjoy it!

    – johnmiller

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