I Dreamed I Was Sane

In my sleep I dream am sane
Then I awake to the same old game
Madness all around
When will happiness be found
Drop another pill,….I feel no pain
In my dreams I win the game
Derang the world I live
Evil spirits hold me down
Bizarre behavior is where am found
Supernatural forces jump up from the ground
Mental Illness the Doc said me
Off to the asylum goes we
Sweet dreams today,…Just a little blue pill away
A mean world drives me mad
So on this earth,…. I`ll always be sad

8/16/11
JohnDSmith

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Comments

  • Lori Peters
    Lori Petersabout 3 years ago

    It is a mean world. I don’t know what happened to civility. A good write, John.

  • Thank you Lori,….
    Sometimes I think maybe,..Am in insane,and the world is Ok,…..But that only last a second or two,….LOL.

    – JohnDSmith

  • Qnita
    Qnitaabout 3 years ago

    Wow John… This is so sad… I hope it is not real!
    Great poeming… :-)

  • Hi My Friend,….No it`s not real,….Am a very blessed person,and very happy,…THANK YOU !

    – JohnDSmith

  • Antanas
    Antanasabout 3 years ago

    great

  • Thank you Antanas,…

    – JohnDSmith

  • Qnita
    Qnitaabout 3 years ago

    That’s fine news!!
    :-)

  • Cheer`s

    – JohnDSmith

  • Ann Reece
    Ann Reeceabout 3 years ago

    This is sad and very thought provoking. I think that most of us can feel this at times, for a very short time. I was glad to read that it is not real for you, that you are a very blessed person and very happy : )

  • Thank you Ann,…I get sad just like any normal person,….LOL,…
    I was just think how it mite be for a person that was insane,…
    appreciate your comment,…THANKS !

    – JohnDSmith

  • bluevelvetrose1
    bluevelvetrose1about 3 years ago

    very emotional, I like how you’ve added that ‘little blue pill’, I hope it’s an anti depressant lol

  • Hi Rose,…So pleased you like this,…THANK YOU !

    – JohnDSmith

  • S .
    S .about 3 years ago

    nicely written, almost fooled me into thinking someone sane wrote it ! lol
    great work with this poem, very heartfelt

  • Thank you Shoaib,…Am only sane when I make Art,….LOL,…THANKS !

    – JohnDSmith

  • peaky40
    peaky40about 3 years ago

    Wonderful write John

  • Thank you Roy,….

    – JohnDSmith

  • leonie7
    leonie7about 3 years ago

    such wonderful writing John so well done lee

  • Thank you Lee,…

    – JohnDSmith

  • mando13
    mando13about 3 years ago

    KILLER RIP JOHN !

  • Thank you Mando,…

    – JohnDSmith

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