Apple Cider

Jing3011
Author: Jing3011
Word Count: 188
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“Cider,” he said, “Isn’t that just apple juice?”

“Oh, no,” I say, “Cider is wild turkeys brazenly crossing the road on the way to Percival, Iowa.
It is white sheets hanging on the line, wild plums, and falling leaves at Waubonsie Park.

Cider is old barns and old men who still wear bib overalls and talk about shucking corn and threshing crews. It is
a team of horses named Babe and Whiskey pulling memories behind a plow.

Cider is cousin to pickles steeping in crocks, fresh-squeezed lemonade, peach jam and potatoes stowed in in the same fruit cellar you hid in when the tornado took your farm.

Drinking cider is a ritual where you contemplate the meaning of gravity, the purpose of sweat bees, and the scariness of reflections that peer back from the depths of cisterns and wells.

It is murkiness and clarity as one.
It is yearning and reward. “

I give him a drink from a chipped jelly glass and wait for his response.
“Now,”he says, “I understand.”

“Apple juice,” I say, “however, is just apple juice.”

Apple Cider

Apple Cider belongs to the following groups:

Gaia - The Living Planet, Graphic Scratch, Rural America and Writers' Market
  • anaisnais

    anaisnais, 5 months ago

    Nicely written. Just enough detail to hold the interest of the reader. Well done.

  • Roger Sampson

    Roger Sampson, 5 months ago

    Fantastic writing. Being from Virginia, born and raised, I can so appreciate this.
    Very, very nice. Must fav.

    Rog

  • Rachael  Hope

    Rachael Hope, 4 months ago

    “Drinking cider is a ritual where you contemplate the meaning of gravity, the purpose of sweat bees, and the scariness of reflections that peer back from the depths of cisterns and wells.”

    Wow

  • Yasemin Sumner

    Yasemin Sumner, 4 months ago

    this was such a delight… rich and evocative and just so well contolled…

  • Silvia Manuela

    Silvia Manuela, 2 months ago

    Descriptive and well paced writing, an enjoyable read.

  • Mary Campbell

    Mary Campbell, 12 days ago

    Wonderful, loved it.

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poem, apple, cider, midwest and jing