the forgotten bride

JimFilmer

the forgotten bride

The ring is on my hand, And the wreath is on my brow;
Satin and jewels grand Are all at my command,
And I am happy now.

And my lord he loves me well; But, when first he breathed his vow,
I felt my bosom swell- For the words rang as a knell,
And the voice seemed his who fell In the battle down the dell,
And who is happy now.

But he spoke to re-assure me, And he kissed my pallid brow,
While a reverie came o’er me, And to the church-yard bore me,
And I sighed to him before me, Thinking him dead D’Elormie,
“Oh, I am happy now!”

And thus the words were spoken, And this the plighted vow,
And, though my faith be broken, And, though my heart be broken,
Here is a ring, as token
That I am happy now!

Would God I could awaken! For I dream I know not how!
And my soul is sorely shaken Lest an evil step be taken,-
Lest the dead who is forsaken
May not be happy now.

... Edgar Allan Poe

Canon 300D // 3 frame HDR/tone image

The lighthouse keepers cottage, at The Narrows, Pt Malcolm, South Australia

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the forgotten bride by JimFilmer
the forgotten bride by JimFilmer
  • Kirsten H

    Kirsten H

    This is such an awesome shot Jim. Well done

  • JimFilmer replied

    thx DB…appreciated

  • Steve Chapple

    Steve Chapple

    Such a clever addition to the original shot, gives the emotive feeling I think you were looking for.

  • JimFilmer replied

    thanks Stephen… yes while the original was interesting I think it needed the extra component and focus

  • Tracey Mac

    Tracey Mac

    Jim this is such a cool image, love how you’ve created this….I really do!

  • JimFilmer replied

    thankyou very much Tracey

  • Kim Soltes

    Kim Soltes

    This is great!! So interesting and captivating and sad!!

  • JimFilmer replied

    I’m glad that I was able to “capture/present” the emotion… thanks Kim

  • Dan Perez

    Dan Perez

    Great photo. I love the color choices, varying textures and the play of light and shadow. It gives the photo a very moody feel.

  • JimFilmer replied

    Thankyou Dan… the textures there were so interesting

  • SURYADI .

    SURYADI .

    fantastic capture.

  • JimFilmer replied

    thx SM..much appreciated

  • cherylc1

    cherylc1

    fabulous!!!

  • JimFilmer replied

    thankyou Cheryl..glad it appeals to you

  • Alf Caruana

    Alf Caruana

    a great composition…well done

  • JimFilmer replied

    much appreciated Alf

  • Paul Vanzella

    Paul Vanzellafounder

    so, so well done Jim, it all works so well… INCREDIBLE shot!

  • JimFilmer replied

    thankyou very much for the compliment Paul…apreciated

  • Geir Floede

    Geir Floede

    So very mystical and litle bit creepy.
    Keep up the great work.
    Stright to the fav.box.

  • JimFilmer replied

    thanks Geir… hopefully one day I can approach your standards

  • wdphotografics

    wdphotografics

    Great work Jim….......a very creative and atmospheric image.

  • JimFilmer replied

    thx Wayne

  • ToastedGhost

    ToastedGhost

    This is wonderful!

  • JimFilmer replied

    much appreciated TG

  • Adrian Donoghue

    Adrian Donoghue

    Fabulous colour and concept, very well done.

  • JimFilmer replied

    thanks for your review and comments Adrian

  • Melissa Ellison

    Melissa Ellison

    I love it!

  • JimFilmer replied

    thx Melissa…glad it appeals to you

  • melbourne

    melbourne

    Beautifully done Jim, congrats.

  • JimFilmer replied

    thx Melb.

  • Alf Caruana

    Alf Caruana

    impressive use of light, especially the effects. striking composition

  • JimFilmer replied

    much appreciated Alf

  • Cordelia

    Cordelia

    Wonderful idea and composition. Very eerie!

  • JimFilmer replied

    thankyou Cordelia… sometimes these shots just work out with out too much effort…then there’s the other times…....

  • Mark McClare

    Mark McClare

    Very cleaver Jim, I like this shot and the thought that has gone into it!

  • JimFilmer replied

    thankyou for your review Mark

  • Carla Broekhuizen

    Carla Broekhuizen

    Excellent work!

  • JimFilmer replied

    thx Carla… much appreciated

  • Nicole Goggins

    Nicole Goggins

    this is wonderful!

  • JimFilmer replied

    thx Nicole

  • shadowzone

    shadowzone

    wow! brilliant work

  • JimFilmer replied

    Thankyou SZ

  • Nvision Ink

    Nvision Ink

    Ohhh Wow! This is amazing the lighting and shadows are sooo interesting! And the ghost bride evokes emotion.

  • JimFilmer replied

    thx Neil

  • bluerabbit

    bluerabbit

    Amazing! Just wonderful. I started to read the poem and thought, OMG, this guy is a real poet, too—until I got to the bottom. LOL! Usually I do not even like Poe’s poems.

  • JimFilmer replied

    sorry to disappoint blue… perhaps one day I might turn a hand towards poetry writing.. but that will probably be only after my camera dies

  • bidkev

    bidkev

    This supplements Poe superbly Jim….so atmospheric

    kev

  • JimFilmer replied

    thankyou Kev

  • Barbara Morrison

    Barbara Morrison

    Beautiful!

  • JimFilmer replied

    I’m glad you liked it Barbara..thankyou, and thankyou for taking the time to visit “my bubble”

  • jewelskings

    jewelskings

    Oh yes I like it! Wow!

  • JimFilmer replied

    I’m very glad you do Jewels

  • jewelskings

    jewelskings

    Your Host’s would like to Congratulate you on being featured in the Ghost and the Paranormal Group!

  • ltruskett

    ltruskett

    wonderful image….......love the story….......

  • JimFilmer replied

    much appreciated

  • Peacefulwarrior

    Peacefulwarrior

    Just a brilliant shot…........ oustanding thought process

  • JimFilmer replied

    thankyou for your wonderful compliments PW

  • darby

    darby

    awesome jim. :)

  • JimFilmer replied

    thankyou Darby

  • jewelskings

    jewelskings

    Your Host’s would like to Congratulate you on being featured and 2nd place in the Ghost and the Paranormal Group Challenge !

  • mikequigley

    mikequigley

    beautiful image and gorgeous colours mq

  • JimFilmer replied

    thx, appreciated Mike

  • Tibby Steedly

    Tibby Steedly

    Very beautiful and sad.

  • JimFilmer replied

    thankyou Tibby – appreciated

  • BigD

    BigD

    Beautiful work, Jim

  • JimFilmer replied

    thx BigD…appreciated

  • Kazzoom  IPA

    Kazzoom IPA

    beautiful work

  • JimFilmer replied

    many thanks Kazzoom

  • Per E. Gunnarsen

    Per E. Gunnarsen

    Beautiful work

  • JimFilmer

    JimFilmer

    thankyou Per

  • MACLOVER

    MACLOVER

    This is great … and love the words!

  • JimFilmer replied

    thankyou for you comment Maclover

  • Robert Armstrong

    Robert Armstrong

    Wow! This is fantastic!

  • JimFilmer replied

    thankyou Robert…glad you like it

  • Colleen Milburn

    Colleen Milburn

    Stunning work & love the Poe poem – his musicality is to die for! You are so clever :))

  • JimFilmer replied

    thankyou so much Colleen for your kind and supportive comments…very much appreciated

  • sonjas

    sonjas

    Incredible. Well done

  • JimFilmer replied

    many thanks Sonjas

  • Eleni Hadjikiriakou

    Eleni Hadjikir...

    very imressive!!

  • JimFilmer replied

    thankyou Eleni

  • Louise Cooke

    Louise Cooke

    ghostly and spooky…wonderful work!

  • JimFilmer

    JimFilmer

    thx Louise…. an old favourite

  • BAD-HARVEST

    BAD-HARVEST

    this is amazing babe xxx

  • JimFilmer replied

    thx Karen.. just one of those moments

  • Songmistress

    Songmistress

    Excellent work!

  • JimFilmer replied

    many thanks Autumn

  • Sarah Russell

    Sarah Russell

    Ah, so sad…...

  • JimFilmer replied

    Thx Sarah…. well perhaps it worked out for the best…. lol…. how many times do we hear that from those with 20/20 hind-sight

  • Marilyns

    Marilyns

    wow this is a so beautiful image ! light colors are splendid !

  • JimFilmer replied

    an old fave that just come together… thanks

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