Dead People at a Party
Dead People at a Party belongs to the following groups:
All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, AW Welcome Center and The Healing JourneyDead People at a Party
By John Fish
I dreamed of dead people at a party. It was an odd invitation. An odd affair. We had all been at the same party the night before and it hadn’t been much fun. However, this time it seemed much more lively. Possibly because we had done it all before.
It was in a strange, dark house, next to a freeway, yet also on a secluded hill. Though it was a single family home, we had to park in a lot carved from the hillside that had impossible turns and angles. I realized my brakes had given out as I pulled onto the steep path and suddenly knew I was going to die. But the car floated to a stop and I realized I didn’t need brakes at all. The home had an unkempt quality, yet felt elegant. It was in a quite tony neighborhood and when I went outside to urinate on the side of the road, I saw glistening polyester rooms filled with movie stars wearing clothing from magazines. I realized they were all preparing to come to the same party. They just wanted to make a dramatic entrance.
The rooms of the house were filled with marvelous objects that draped in red, blue and green across walls. The air was simultaneously blurry and glittering. People surged in waves that were thick, heavy and fluid. As we passed, we connected, and blended together. But only for an instant. For a second we were thinking the same things and feeling the same emotions. Then we passed. When I looked back they were but characters in a book and I wondered where I had found them in the first place and why. And they moved on to another individual to unite and momentarily form profound globules of energy, then dissipate.
Oddly enough some brought their mothers, which I felt was an inappropriate thing to do for such a sordid gathering. Yet the mothers came in handy at moments when things got out of hand. They lent an air of sobriety and maturity to the otherwise unruly guests. And we were unruly. Like children we cried, played with our private parts, threw food and giggled when one of us fell down.
I walked out to the hillside and saw the lights of the city sparkling below. I was amazed at how everything had change without me realizing. It seemed like yesterday that everything was sleepy and small and now the vista reminded me of a theme park on a holiday. Yet, for all its charm and glitter, it was unreal. I decided to go back inside to the dead. Still I had a yearning to be in the lights that would not leave.
When I got back to the party, it had a comfortable humor about it. The rooms chuckled with rich, vibrant red, blue and gold blooms that sounded like the bass on a car passing that was playing loud music. The faces of everyone I found more interesting, though the same. I saw in each person’s eyes a deep sense of fear, confusion, pain and suffering that had melted into a passion that could only be described as joy. I felt as if we were all one. Different. Yet all one being.
Then I woke up.
Richard G Witham
This is an intriguing story John, with many interesting associations to aspects of art. I like the use of compelling opposites and blending elements. I especially enjoyed your line in the last paragraph that mixed contrasting emotions to arrive at joy, sort of like mixing all the colors on your palette to create white.
John Fish
Thanks Richard. Your comments are always so interesting.
catherine walker
Oh My God..that was GREAT!!..so you write too that’s the first time I’ve read something you’ve written and it was so good.
...amazing stuff and I didn’t want to stop reading it !!
and that dream Gosh.. I agree it was so strange
yes I’ve had some very strange ones too in the past..
though most of my nightmares and bad dreams have gone now (thank God !)
I wouldn’t be able to interpret that dream for you ..but I’m sure it’s all OK
and will be OK..maybe someone else in here can shed some light on it..?
I’m ususually pretty good at interpreting my own dreams ..but not others.
it was wonderful to read your words.
just brilliant and exciting !
xxxooo
John Fish
thank you for that wonderful comment catherine
kreesor
Fantastic tale John!!
You must watch what people put in your kool-aid though!!
John Fish replied
thanks for the comments. that’s just the way my mind works first thing in the a.m. I’m just naturally weird
seeker19
Wow, amazing dream – mine are much more of the vanilla variety!
John Fish replied
thank you. It was based on a dream but also my imagination
meltaylor
Wonderful the way you bring people into your work, John!
I felt as if I were a part of the party and I too, didn’t want it to end!
Do you think that the lights were a sign from God or some higher being, trying to tell you to “go to the white light”?
And you chose to party, instead?? (you devil)
I have dreams, but most of them do not come to a conclusion…they are just fragmented dreams!
Some wonderful and some frightening…
Strange how our brains are left to dream of anything that our minds can conjure…
Anyway, I loved the story!!
Mel
John Fish
Mel, how great to hear from you. Glad you enjoyed this and thanks for your insight. I hadn’t thought of the lights like that, which is surprising in that I love the Ghost Whisperer. Hope you are doing well as well as all the kitties.
John
Shoaib .
awesome work here john, excellent metaphor
this is superb and a favorite for me
JaneSolomon
This is a wonderful dream story John. Love it. xxx
lianne
I don’t seem to dream at all John but if I did, I would dearly love to dream such wonderful stories in such color and amazing phrasing. Wonderfully well done and a delight to read!
marieangel
this is a wonderful write John i HAVE WOKE DURING THE NIGHT TO WRITE A SHORT STORY on spirit and angel guides when I saw this i nipped in and read it…thank you i can link with this so much when my story well one of many is finished i will post it…you may find it of interest to yourself? angelx