A girl like you and boys like abandoned ship bells
You’re a weather pattern.
You’ll fall like the leaves when your heart grows cold,
hibernate until you’re ready to blossom again
and wear short skirts and attract the bees when the heat almost becomes unbearable.
There’ll be a drought and when it rains it’ll pour.
And pour it does.
They wait politely for you to take your pick and have your way with them,
while you wish they would just have the guts to push you against a wall and have their way with you.
Politeness is a killer in the tug of love and sex.
These things are never meant to be polite.
They are intrusive by nature.
And intrusion is what you want.
You want the eyes to hold your breath when hands are around your throat and your knickers around your ankles and you need a crooked accepting smile to be sent your way when you’ve opened up and exposed yourself,
little
by
little.
So you throw the reins up into the air and hope one of them will catch them.
Jeff Burns
OMG this is awesome fabulous writing. Wow Jessica
DeEtta Brown
incredible and powerful. i would expect no less from you, my dear.
Michael Alesich
Great work Jess, really well written.
kiirsti
As I have said before-
I am in great admiration of your style-so powerful, and you trully bring the reader right in-beautifully executed!!!-Keep writing so I can keep reading!!!Paul Louis Vil...
Oh Jess, your words are just drenched with visual imagery, phrases soaked with emotion and anticipation as the reader leaps towards the next sentance.
Magical and sensual! :D
MuscularTeeth
this is amazingly written…
Ozcloggie
Agree with all the above comments. So many responses come to mind but they would spoil the mood.
Alf Caruana
I wish I could write like you Jess…amazing words
Lisa Jewell
Fucking brilliant…....awesome work, Jess XO
Snapperman
Smokin! – tsssssss
Nicolas Hall
A poem that wrings the very essence out of every word. It creates amazing imagery in the mind and a deep resonance in the soul. . . to have been there. . . and to come back again.
Beautiful.
MissKristy
Brilliant Jess. Last line is an absolute classic.
clone42
just like they said.
BlaizerB
a rare insight
Firedrake
I love the last line too. Wonderful!
LittleHelen
So glad you posted this into the group…brilliant Jess xx
LostBoy1
Oh Baby!!...some of this has been on my mind a lot lately ;)
Seana Szetey
Wow, this is great!
Really fantastic work!
Darkmonkey
Fantastic!
ossieBee
Great piece. Like I say to my boyfriend: “you don’t need to buy me chocolates and flowers, just throw me down and f**k me”.
childbride
Oh. I just love this…
Ushna Sardar
great work
PJ Ryan
beatiful, talented writing Jessica xx
KEITH R. WILL...
very seductive, and powerful poetry
Ushna Sardar
its fantastic!
Getch
Obvious
gutterhubris
Totally effin’ perceptive and beautiful…it’s the anger of needing.
sydculture
very nice.
Dwayne Boyd
Yor insight is a gift
Martin Anski
Vivid and so true of many. Well crafted Jess.
courtneyklein
i love this, i can relate to it a LOT
Youngone
Thats hot, makes me happy to be a man
sydculture
best description period.
FrankjII
The true propietary of ones self is his or her own imagination, this is very good writing. Thanks