It's hard to breathe when you're choking

Jessica Tremp
Author: Jessica Tremp
Word Count: 178
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Have you ever thought about what it would be like not to feel physical pain or know the concept of it?
How liberating it would feel to punch that wall without hesitation?
To aim your knuckles at his face guilt free, thinking the only pain anyone would feel would be your sorry heart?
To whirl on a rink of ice on your skates without fear and run down that hill so fast, tears welling in your eyes, tripping over your undone shoelaces, the concrete smacking your teeth, getting up and just keep running?
To pat a shark and tell him it’s o.k., you get angry too.
To break your bones by landing badly, after you jumped from so high, but didn’t worry, just contorted yourself in the air, your mind at one with the wind and air licking your body on the way down?
You could just get back up, snap your limbs back into place and walk off in front of that green car,
just to take a better look at its driver through the windscreen.

It's hard to breathe when you're choking

  • Hien Nguyen

    Hien Nguyen, 4 months ago

    It’s a good thought Jess. I’ve been in situations where I’ve been in so much pain that you just don’t feel it anymore…but you know it’s there (especially the next day)!

  • PennyEdwardes

    PennyEdwardes, 4 months ago

    Wow Jess! Really well written…..you have me thinking!

  • shall

    shall, 4 months ago

    God Yes! How fabulous to fall without fear!

  • Kristy Lee

    Kristy Lee, 4 months ago

    Oh hell yeah…I do wonder about it..and try to imagine it. But cannot even concieve of it somehow. Oh…to smack someone in the face and not feel a thing….physical OR mental…how glorious it would be!! RARGH!

  • LostBoy1

    LostBoy1, 4 months ago

    A couple of times i`ve owned vehicles that accelrate so hard that i initialy got choked up when using the power…an amazing sence of invincibility…heavily laced by adrenalin

    no doubt why a lot of younglings kill themselves on the road :)

  • greeneyes

    greeneyes, 4 months ago

    I know that pain – and yes an instinct to run usually accompanies it!

  • Nicolas  Hall

    Nicolas Hall, 4 months ago

    I do love this. . . and in truth, isn’t life, at it’s essence, very much like this? A free fall. . . a retaining wall at 65. . . an out of control sprint? The only difference is that you can’t see the result so easily. . . no bones broken, no teeth shattered, no flesh missing. . .it’s internal. . .and excruciating to bear witness to. Not physical. .. but leaving us just as broken.

    You write, create and think beautifully.

    nicolas

  • Jessica Tremp

    Jessica Tremp in reply to Nicolas Hall’s comment, 4 months ago

    I like your comment Nicolas…thank you…yes, I think I’m with you there

  • karldenton

    karldenton, 4 months ago

    Well written Jessica…

    I know the concept of it, have the memory of it I mean, MS took the sensation of feeling away on my right side a few years ago. Can’t feel a dam thing… Sounds like fun until you discover your burning yourself on a hot plate because of the smell of something cooking… you!

  • Jessica Tremp

    Jessica Tremp in reply to karldenton’s comment, 4 months ago

    no, that doesn’t sound as fun…sorry to hear Karl…

  • Yasemin Sumner

    Yasemin Sumner, 4 months ago

    Oh YES!
    nods and nods and nods.
    ‘To pat a shark and tell him it’s o.k., you get angry too.’ my fave…

  • cisco

    cisco, 4 months ago

    Jess you release such vivid and provocative imagery through words..

  • karldenton

    karldenton, 4 months ago

    Don’t be… life is what it is, learned not to use that side as much. I’ll get really pissed when it makes me give up photography…

  • Karen Cougan

    Karen Cougan, 4 months ago

    If only we didn’ have that dam fear barrier…..... I came off my quad bike last weekend and thought it was going to kill me when it landed, luckily just missed, however scared the crap out of me and now and the hesitation….......food for thought for sure Jess
    xkc

  • Loren Ioppolo

    Loren Ioppolo, 4 months ago

    i’m sure many a women would be popping out babies left right and center !!

  • Paula Delley

    Paula Delley, 4 months ago

    I really needed to hear (well read) that today, so thank you :)

  • Jessica Tremp

    Jessica Tremp in reply to Paula Delley’s comment, 4 months ago

    pleasure…x

  • eclecticmind

    eclecticmind, 4 months ago

    Without knowledge of pain, wouldn’t the pleasures lose all significance?

  • canxerart -graphicanada

    canxerart -gra..., 4 months ago

    wow, such a wonderful world we are living now! if so, there would be no more cry you see!

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