I can see
your shoulders already know
the way they slump a little
in your sleep
while I kiss my secrets
into their freckles
oh, and they are
hard working freckles
draining all my urgency
and worldly worry out
through my fingertips
until all that is left
is patience
all-accepting arms
that could shield from
the most potent of ogres
and the thoomp thoomp
in my chest
deliriously bursting with love
falling all over itself
in its tipsy wonderland
aglaia b
there is that beautiful word,
patience
and many other wise words too! ;-) xox
natapee
what a fantastic title.
Jess Andrews
sigh...how lovely love can be
dimsim
magnificent! :D
gretchen .
speechless – like love. xox
Solar Zorra
Soothing, like a lulabye….......very nice! :) SZ
Reynaldo
great work
Genevieve Robey
So beautiful.
Lisa Jewell
Soothing like drops of rain flowing down a pane….
Love you xx
“while I kiss my secrets
into their freckles”
sigh…..
ShotbyJessica
Love this, its really remarkable. Good work.
PJ Ryan
beautiful jess
... and they are
hard working freckles
x
BiographyofRed8
this is really beautiful to read.. thank you
micklyn
loved this
Paul Grinzi
Beautiful, just beautiful
kathibook
Very sweet. Flows very nicely over the tongue. This is going to sound absolutely stark raving mad to you, but it feels like popcorn in my mouth. Any chance anyone knows what I mean? :>)
kathibook
OMG!! I just looked at the title of this little gem!! The irony!...given my bizarre observation above.
berndt2
sigh (wait… I’m a guy, what’s the appropriate equivalent??)
berndt2
grunt – that’s what it is! (but a satisfied grunt!)
Geoff Coleman...
So lovely to read you happy in love. Perfect title and your usual exquisite rendering of the intimate moment.
Natalie Willemse
Beautiful…