Sweet and Sour, Salty, Bitter

I don’t know you at all but I think that you must be the prettiest thing ever.

Love it, Jessica. I like the physical structure, too.

Drink my lady…. Drink your fill!.... Ahhhh bugger it!... Take the cup and run… run like the wind!...

This is great! I love it!

Mushroom juice!!!.....YUM.

niice. such vivid descriptions, i could picture it all. fill me up!

i like the imagry references to velvet and rainbows, it’s lovely.

xx
s-a

Lap it up.Great piece.

I love this…...I’ve such a lovely image in my head…

Thank you babe,
XOXOX

I adored every word, but

a mad fountain,
a leaky tap,
a hungry dog’s drool and dribble.

is just pure joy.

Also, strangely enough, I almost called you at 2am this morning to read this wonderful line from a Miranda July short story… That day I carried the deam around like a full glass of water, moving gracefully so I would not lose any of it.

true story. I really thought of you when I read that. xx

*dream

well, it wouldn’t be the first time we did spooky same-y things that leave our little mouths agape in awe at our mutual shared insanity…x

keep filling the cup despite it running over!

This is gorgeous!!

It flows in dark velvet.
It cascades in rainbow magic.

Keep rolling, smiling, laughing under the sun.. guzzle, guzzle, gulp…

absolutely in love with your mind jess!

awesome work, it’s inspiring.

You’re a bit wonderful, you know that?
I loved this
xo

i loved “thick, bubbling, overflowing passion” the most and “it flows like dark velvet” the second most. the rest is only great.

sweeeeeeeeet

love the methaphor for life … and art .. xx

Hehe. I feel like rolling on my back and kicking my feet in the air too!

I put my laptop down and did it. Weeee!!!

I nearly kicked the cord out though. That would have been your fault.

EAT LIFE!!

Mmmmmm…you make me thirsty for Jessiness…

That was squirting with visions I could picture.. Lovey read.

Love it,Jessica. Nice persuassive.

Very nice!

I love the last three lines. To me they indicate a moment before surrendering to one’s most passionate whims.

Very

very

great.

Love it! ......wonderfully written! ♥

a wonderful piece. – Dennis

“for some the cup is empty”

Image after evocative image…I really like this.

Yummy… you seem to have quite a following, I’m glad I stumbled across this. Great imagry, flow, and concept. Fabulous!

yum….suddenly I’m hungry and thirsty again…. xx

what an intoxicating read, nice flow and use of adjectives!

very sensual! must… abstain…

I like it. Good work.

I love this. It is so descriptive and is a such a fun read!

What a fabulous cocktail recipe…...I’m ready for a refill :))) This puts a smile on my face tonight. :))))

formatted well, has great flow.

Very well done,has a nice flow.

oh my…you’ve got me blushing…this was done with class

Happiness found. Rare and perfect.

your words drop from a beautiful place. ;o)

You have excelled again Jessica. This is a wonderful, evocative piece. Such sensuality and precious present-momentness. Dare I say that these words form something of a paradox in that they take us on a journey but it is really all about a moment in time? So well done. I liked:
and we giggle
as we guzzle,
It could have been wriggle and that’s what I imagine…like a third harmony. Simply lovely and lovely simple. G

Nice write!

Love your usage of metaphors..awesome work.