Jessica Tremp

Spinning

We are all endlessly turning around ourselves, winding up, winding down, then up again. As we are chasing our own tails in this fashion, it is impossible to see (a vision constantly blurred), our twisting spines, hurting more and more now, the longer we spin and so we spin some more, because the pain is so thrilling.
My stomach is starting to convulse, I think it’s time I got off this ‘joyride’.

  • Kristy Lee

    Kristy Lee, 4 months ago

    Roller coasters of life…exhilirating, fun, scary…and can get a bit too much to take at times.

    I hear ya.

  • Jeff  Burns

    Jeff Burns, 4 months ago

    Somebody stop the ride I want to get off.
    I completely follow you.

  • Daniel  Rarela

    Daniel Rarela, 4 months ago

    “I think it’s time I got off this joyride”

    sounds like something a baby might say before it leaves the womb…. i’ve been twisting and turning about… can’t see a darn thing and it hurts cause its so cramped in here… and now the walls of my 9 month home are starting to shake…. guess i’d better leave ;)

    (no offense meant, of course, Jess – i’m not sure if you wrote this because you were stressed or something, but if you were, I hope what i said could lighten you up a little)

  • LisaG

    LisaG, 4 months ago

    You won’t be alone when you get off….

    XOXO

  • Murray Newham

    Murray Newham, 4 months ago

    stop that train….I wanna get off..

  • atomikboy

    atomikboy, 4 months ago

    Ride it till ya Throwup….me thinks!!!

  • atomikboy

    atomikboy, 4 months ago

    Ride it till ya Throwup….me thinks!!!

  • halftone

    halftone, 4 months ago

    Please do not exit until the ride has come to a full stop!

  • Paul Louis Villani

    Paul Louis Vil..., 4 months ago

    My cuuriousity is sparked by the hidden meaning behind the metaphor “joyride”.
    Let the dust and motion settle… just till the view is clearer before leaping into the future!

  • GlennRoger

    GlennRoger, 4 months ago

    We all only have a one way ticket and if you try to get off too soon, you may never get back on to finish the ride. Sometimes you just have to sit back and enjoy the view and let some one else steer.

  • Craig Shillington

    Craig Shillington, 4 months ago

    Sometimes the thrill of the ride is too much to release … sometimes we think we know how the ride end, but it rarely does end there. I would suggest watching others on that ride for a while, before taking it again. Have a break and catch your thoughts :) Let the head stop spinning a while.

  • LocoCow

    LocoCow, 4 months ago

    It all started with my dad spinning me around like a helicopter on his shoulders, soon it progress to an arms length away, before we knew it we were saucer cups and berries twirling in the dusk lights, after it was said and down I let my feet dangle from the chairs and chains which spun my world, the “Hell Holes” floor left from beneath my feet I was stuck to the wall, God let me off, I can’t see anymore… DIZZY…

  • Meach

    Meach, 4 months ago

    Beware of jumping off; cenrtifugal force is powerful and indiscriminate – who knows who you might land one

  • Meach

    Meach, 4 months ago

    Land one? Land on I meant

  • rest

    rest, 3 months ago

    nice i like it

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