Asian Tsunami - Bathing in the Aftermath

JenniferB
Author: JenniferB
Word Count: 139
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Asian Tsunami - Bathing in the Aftermath

This poem was written in response to the Asian Tsunami.

Bathing in the Aftermath

Mother-fucking
leg-spreading
earth-shaking
crack-opening
catastrophe

of

orgasmic
proportions.

Mother nature
cracks up
spurting white,
foaming cum
all over the mainland,
her deep throat,
swallows it all whole,
spitting out
excess fluid
leaving it
to stagnate
in mass graves.

P-utrid

M-alaysian

T-ragedy

Bodies lie,
wet and rolled up
in her menstrual, blood-stained
blankets,

cremating,

burning from the
venereal disease
that mother nature,
promiscuous, laughing whore
in all her
fucking splendor,
has inflicted
upon them.

Post-coitus cigarette,
rolling over
she basks in the
after-glow,
after-shock,
post-orgasmic tremors
shake her,
sighing,
inhaling deeply,
slowly she
takes it all
in…

Meanwhile…

Humanity fights
to catch it’s breath
cursing her infidelity
and unpredictability,
desperately seeking ways

to

reach

out…

we are the human fault line…

  • LostBoy1

    LostBoy1

    Hurro!

  • LostBoy1

    LostBoy1

    Every fucking tragedy and hollywood starts rubbing it`s hands together…

    Some things i don`t want reproduced in high definition…the original was enough!!

    Every fucker that slows down to check out a car crash…their the ones!...morbid fucks got no life.

  • LostBoy1

    LostBoy1

    hey!...now that comment looks like a rant now you removed yours…oh well…guess it is ;)

  • JenniferB

    JenniferB

    sorry, I can’t remember what I said, I just decided to shut the fuck up for a change instead. :-)

  • flower68

    flower68

    Love this.

  • JenniferB

    JenniferB

    thanks flower68

  • lolowe

    lolowe

    Damn Jennifer! I loved this piece, the intensity, the symbolism…it’s really creative.

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks lolowe, it was written straight after the Asian Tsunami, such a tragic event, which kind of stole the limelight away from another tragedy which happened around the same time… You can’t beat Mother Nature hu? She’s a real Prima fucking Donna! ;-)

    xox

  • lolowe

    lolowe

    She definitely is. The way you captured it though, very nice, explosive writing! Sometimes you’re moved by something and you got to let it out

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