I Want To Fuck You With Words
Mmm… I just wanted to make the alphabet seem sexy. ;- )
Inspired by THIS VERY HOT POEM which was recommended to me by STEVE.
:-)
I want to fuck you with words…
Take every vowel and consonant
and rub them gently over your skin
hear you gasp in the spaces between letters and words
as the language devours you
and sucks you back in
grasp every soft sounding letter
to lightly stroke you in all of your sensitive spots
tease you and please you with the gentlest of sounds
until you feel as if your stomach is tied up in knots
I want to trace every word with the tip of my finger
from the top of your lashes down,
carve every letter with my fingernails along your spine
as we surrender and both fall to the ground
I want to lick you and suck you with soft sounding syllables
from the top of your naval to the tip of your cock
and then I want to slowly savour your essence
as i take you down deeper to that place you forgot
twenty six fucking glorious letters
seduce you when I’m down on all fours,
I succumb to the smell of your sex and surrender
to the sound of you groaning
I’m yours…
Words, reaching out beyond the walls that contain them
breaking free of the binds and the ties that restrains them
there is no pause for breath nor punctuation
as the strokes probe your body for deep penetration
I want to delve deeper and deeper
into the language and vocabulary of sex
breathe life into every smouldering letter
giving movement and feeling to cold hard text
And as the letters whimper, sigh, fall
and go down on their knees before you
silent submissive and giving they’re yours
to use as you please
They adore you…
Each syllable and sound softly sucks you and fucks you
and reminds you of why you are living
as every infinite letter carresses you eternally
loving, selfless and giving
Words…
Sensuous, seductive limited only by
the language we’ve yet to learn
breathing oxygen into the fire that causes
our bodies to tremble and burn
Words…
are the reason
the meaning
the purpose
and essence
closing the gap between time and distance
they fall and sigh in your presence
Words…
are the spirit
the feeling
and soul
Words…
will devour you
and swallow
you whole
Words…
I want to fuck you with words…
Mark Ramstead
You put the dick in dictionary…
JenniferB replied
Guess what’s been on my mind? ;-)
Matt Penfold
I hope you use a french letter…
JenniferB replied
Lol… It couldn’t be safer. ;-)
Mark Ramstead
Are you feeling like your self lately? The word “old” does not apply here…
JenniferB replied
Slowly but surely. ;-)
Astoreth
WOW Jen….THIS LEFT ME BREATHLESS…....incredibly and deliciously SEXY!!
JenniferB replied
Thanks Astoreth, I like to please the ladies too. ;-)
Astoreth
muhahaha!! I’m laughing at that top comment….. ;-)
JenniferB replied
Lol… ;-P
brandon k jenkins
so was this an oral exam?
;P
JenniferB replied
well it can be a practical one also if need be… :-P
Faizan Qureshi
Hahaha you’re a genius! =P
JenniferB replied
nope, just insane… ;-)
RumPunk
i little B+D for the mind :P
JenniferB replied
Just a few lil ole lubricating letters. Will they ban me? :-P
jacqleen
Hey Jen….Whoever He is, He is one LUCKY guy…..... :) :) :)
JenniferB replied
There’s more than one letter in the alphabet haha. ;-)
brandon k jenkins
off to take a cold shower
JenniferB replied
May the words be with you. ;-)
Sticky Flower
lol @ Matt…
I’m horny now…and I’m having some really weird visuals.:-D..
JenniferB replied
Hahaha! Horny is good. ;-P
poeticgenius
nicely done Jen
JenniferB replied
thanks, I just felt like a little (fore) play. ;-)
Lisa Jewell
OMG I’ve thought this….but OMG woman, you’ve written it…so fucking finely, seductively…
Tantalising to put it mildly. HOLY WOW….........
JenniferB replied
Lol… Thanks Lisa, I told you I rarely think before speaking, my mouth engages before my brain. ;-)
Lisa Jewell
Personally, I’m glad it does – this is a wonderfully powerful result….
xx
JenniferB replied
Thanks! :-D
aglaia b
you’re the best hehe
;-) xox
JenniferB replied
Aww… Thanks aglaia, just having a little fun. ;-)
colorblind
whoa jenn i see you still pushing at full force
and i’m loving the joy ride your words put me on
you already i kno i had to fav this one
best wishes from daz …..
JenniferB replied
thanks colourblind, yeah, I’m a little anti rules and authority today. ;-)
Vivian V Mairo
Regarding ”...my mouth engages before my brain. ;
)” I will add “How should I know what I think until I here what I say?” ;)Cheers,
and this Poem is so physically arousing!
Whooii
JenniferB replied
Ha! So true! Thanks Vivian. :-)
Cassey
Thank god for the alphabet….when you run out of words and letters, there’s always symbols, Chinese, Japanese, (dirty knees, look at these ….oops that slipped), sanscrit…..
Really cool. Like this a lot.
JenniferB replied
I was going to add a multicultural/multilingual flavour to it! Thanks Cassey. :-)
Matt Penfold
Gives a new meaning to the term “fucking oath”
JenniferB replied
hahaha, I guess it does. ;-)
ambient-1
Yes, please! Effective piece of writing. Thank you!
JenniferB replied
I’ll keep you in mind… Thanks. :-)
Matt Penfold
You really are a cunning linguist ;-)
JenniferB replied
Very clever Mr Penfold, I see you’re on a roll, LOL
KiwiAna
Beautifully crafted. I loved being pleasured by your words.
JenniferB replied
It was a pleasure to pleasure you. :-)
Oh, and hi from another kiwi.
Phil Threlfall
Well…. you have
JenniferB replied
I have? I hope it felt good. :-)
KiwiAna
Woot! another Kiwi!
JenniferB replied
Sure am! :-D
martinilogic
don’t skip any periods….. hey, great work….. nice concept
JenniferB replied
lol, I wont martin, and thanks. :)
Jess Andrews
wow, what a piece…left me a lil hot under the collar to be honest with you :-p
JenniferB replied
honesty is fine with me, I’m glad you got something out of it. thanks. ;-)
sandraellen
Lovely…..........words and what we can do with them.
This is wonderful Jennifer….......sandra :)
JenniferB replied
Thank you Sandra, it was fun to write. :-)
grarbaleg
will devour you
and swallow
you whole
So fabulous Jen
JenniferB replied
thanks grarbaleg. :-)
Outdoors2
Oh you metaphoric whore You…xxx….;-)
JenniferB replied
hahaha! I just felt like having a little fun with letters and language today. :-P
Leon Walker
Work it baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JenniferB replied
It’s all play. :-) xox
Louise. C. Thomas
Sexy sexy dirt dirt dirt!!! And sooo pretty, I love it. I want to do rude things to it! :)))
JenniferB replied
Lol, thanks loulou, rude things can be fun. :-)
Dwayne Boyd
This makes me want to dangle a participle…
JenniferB replied
Lol… Thanks Dwayen. :-)
Swingthetrapeze
omg, that was awkwardly amazing.
JenniferB replied
Lol… Thanks. :-)
Outdoors2
I just felt like having a little fun with letters and language today.
Really good to see you writing again Jen, regardless it’s something to get those juices flowing and patching the words together…..;-)
JenniferB replied
Oh I’m still trying to warm myself up and get back into it. ;-)
woof
mmmmmmm, love it!!! words can be so sexy when you use them the right way!!!
JenniferB replied
thanks, yep… words can be sexy and fun. ;-)
lolowe
I will never think of the alphabet in quite the same way… ;}
You make the ordinary seem so wonderous.
JenniferB replied
Aww… Thanks lolowe, it’s always a great feeling to see you dropping by. :-)
mstrace
YOWZA! This was some ride...and I enjoyed every letter slash word slash language slash stroke of it.
I’m getting back in line – to ride it again.
JenniferB replied
hahaha… ride on by any time mstrace. ;-)
joshuapie
wow! As the poem writes I’ve just been fucked by your sexy words …
Thankyou…
JenniferB replied
Lol… You’re welcome Joshua, I had fun writing it. :-)
lazydaze
LOLLLLLLLL sooo well written !!! awsome…love it ! :))
JenniferB replied
Hahaha! You make me smile, glad you liked it. :-) xox
lazydaze
ur smiling?? hahaha GOOD !!! :-)xox
JenniferB replied
Yep… Sure am, see
—-—-—-—> :-)xox
Druidstorm
“Your words are acumen for the sexual mind!” Please again in Latin and break the taboo of the soul! You write like the Goddess speaks! PERFECTION!!!...)o(
JenniferB replied
Oh I can’t speak in Latin, but I’m orally proficient in other ways. ;-)
Sinéad Costello
omg this is brilliant!
JenniferB replied
thanks Sinead, I was trying to draw the analogy with cyber sex, I think it kinda worked. :-)
Druidstorm
“I bet you are friend!” Cheers for the thought!!!...)o(
JenniferB replied
you’re welcome. :-) xox
MistressZombie
Delicious! I think that I am now pregnant.
JenniferB replied
LOL… Impregnated with words, now there’s and idea for another poem… Thanks MZ. :-)
linaji
GooD God.. this is an amazing write…cause I do this every day and did not really know how to put my tongue ‘all’ over it along with my fingers doing the walking and… well…. wheww.. completion at last!!!
You are incredible.
JenniferB replied
I think we all enjoy a little play on words every now and again, thanks linaji. :-)
MistressZombie
Glad to be of service madam.
H M Bascom
I want to fuck you with words…
I think you just did. :-) Seductive, erotic writing.
JenniferB replied
Thanks Helen, ‘twas my intention to tease with words. :-)
JDNarts
A perfect bit of aural sex; think I need a cigarette now… ;)
JenniferB replied
Hahaha! I’ll take the necessity for a cigarette as a compliment. :-)
Shoaib .
Top NOTCH
wow
this is worthy of my favorites ;)
thank you
JenniferB replied
Thanks Shoaib, I love reading your poetry too. :-)
Shoaib .
thanks… i like to make love to people with my words because i believe in releasing all of me deep inside you
JenniferB replied
Haha, you should try writing an erotic poem, something tells me that you’d be very good at it. ;-)
Shoaib .
haha, awww thats sweet of you, but i dont write really erotic stuff
I’m not saying I can’t i just choose not to
but that means so much cumming from you
it feels good
JenniferB replied
Hey… When you get a sexy, erotic moment, just pen it…You might be surprised at the outcome. :-)
Vellu
You naughty, naughty girl Jennifer. This is amazing writing. I wish I could have been so aroused reading Shakespeare in year 12 Enlish Lit., I may have passed.
You are a very talented woman.
JenniferB replied
Lol… I’m glad you got something out of it, thanks Vellu. :-)
Kirrill D'Kainn
To J.B.
( Please open your bubble mail ) ... !
Kirrill D’Kainn.
JenniferB replied
I have nothing there from you Kirrill.
Kirrill D'Kainn
My apologies … in my EXCITEMENT – I have pressed some wrong button … !
Please try now.
Kirrill D’Kainn.
JenniferB replied
Gratefully received, thank you. :-)
TheWanderingBoo
erotically beautiful…words to stimulate and tease the senses…
JenniferB replied
thanks Thewanderingboo, it was fun to write. :-)
Gretchen O'Donald
clever
JenniferB replied
thanks. :)
TheArtistMario
My god…. how have I overlooked this! I have been so drawn into your visual art that I have not ventured the halls of the mansion… I will be in this bedroom for some time
JenniferB replied
lol… you’re welcome to stay in my bedroom any time. Thanks. ;-)
Peter Evans
Awesome Jennifer and I’d be honoured to give you an exclamation mark :-)
JenniferB replied
heehee… twas a little teasing and pleasing with words, thanks Peter, exclamation mark gladly accepted. :-)
KristineNora
you is that not enough
JenniferB replied
hu??? okay…
Mark Wolter
Absolutely amazing
JenniferB replied
Thanks Mark, Language and words can be fun to play with. :-)
CORA D. MITCHELL
amazing!!!
JenniferB replied
Thanks Cora, I was feeling pretty horny when I wrote it, as you can probably tell. :-)
Rex Inkpen
it’s all been said… phew..! well played.
JenniferB replied
thanks Rex, it was fun to write. :-)
Tracey Mac
Lordy….............open a window in here!!! How fucking hot is it?
That almost got me reaching for the v….............oh never mind….....jesus…...........love your dictionary babe…......can you do a thesaurus next?? ;)
JenniferB replied
hahahaha! Thanks for the laugh Tracey! :-)
Earhart Chappe...
omg! fab!
JenniferB replied
thanks Earhart, gotta love the power and seduction of words. ;-)
Tracey Mac
Well I love your words…...........I’ve never dreamt of using the alphabet that way…..........
I’m printing this out and gonna share it with my Rabbit LMFAO!!!!
(delete this when you’re done hahaha)
JenniferB replied
Hahaha! Do you really want me to delete it? Sometimes the comments are the most entertaining part of a post. :-)
Tracey Mac
Did you watch? Hell no….....leave it then PMSL!!!
They’ll probably have a surge in sales now hahahaha…....
(they got my vote!!)
JenniferB replied
Yep! That’d be the most stimulating rabbit that I’ve seen in a while! LOL :-)
jacqleen
Hey U…..I had read this when you first had written it…..and I Faved it THEN….......but I just noticed more people just had discoverd it…......and you know what I STILL LOVE IT …..........your words are way way way TOOO HOTTTT !!!! xo a FAV again…...............! :)
JenniferB replied
Lol… Thanks jacqleen! I was having a joke with someone about cybersex once and this poem was the result of that conversation, words can be such fun! ;-)
hillbill
Brilliant peice, even though it`s a visual, it seduces the minds eyes but i must say
” i`m all ears”
well done
Hillbill
JenniferB replied
Awww… Thanks heaps for your kind words hillbill :-)
zabcoloma
so sexy and erotic, great!
JenniferB replied
thanks so much zabcoloma! :-)
thndermnky
Well, this made my morning. Off to a cold shower
JenniferB replied
Hahaha! Thanks thndermnky, enjoy your shower! ;-)
Impassioned
Wow! love this ;)
JenniferB replied
Thanks impassioned! :-)
Paul Rees-Jones
...and whew…that was a great read…I think I am going to read that again, but slower.
: { )}
JenniferB replied
lol… thanks Paul, it was fun writing this one. :-P
Erography
This is delicious. Not much poetry out there in this world revolving around “word fucks”. Beautiful poem. Wonderfully written.
JenniferB replied
thanks so much Erography! :-)
jimofozz
Finger licking good your words paint a thousand pictures
JenniferB replied
Lol… Thanks jimofozz! :-)
jim marshal
I think the Arabic alphabet has 29 letters, should we convert just for those extra 3? lol
Seriously, that was one of the best things I’ve read on here, intelligent witty and hot. Loved it!! “Fuck me with words”.... a woman after my own heart lol
JenniferB replied
hahaha… well out here in the crazy land of cyberspace, words, images and energy are all we really have… So we may as well make the most of them! Thanks Jim, I love your work too! ;-)
poeticsoul
wow i see all the above love this one got i guess i’ll just add my name to da pot
what more can be said u have said it all this got me….... i’ll leave that to the imagination lol can’t wait 4 part 2
JenniferB replied
i never thought about doing a part 2, but it’s a good idea, I might give it a try some time! Thanks poeticsoul, I appreciate you dropping by. :-)
Selkie
Shit…talk about hot!
JenniferB replied
lol… thanks Selkie, did you take a look at the erotic poem in the video linked on the right? Now THAT’S hot!!! :-)
poeticsoul
yeah no problem i thought i may hint at it that way lol we would love a part 2
JenniferB replied
lol thanks! I’ll give it a go some time. :-)
Selkie
Dios fucking Mio, lol…that is hot. Yay for erotic poetry :)
JenniferB replied
Ha! ‘twas the inspiration for this piece, I might try to write more in this vein some time. :)
Selkie
Fun, innit? I have a lot in this vein…probably too much, lol…:)
JenniferB replied
You do? I’ve just added you to my watchlist so I can take a look at it as soon as I have time! :)
Selkie
Just added you too :). Yeah, in fact i wrote another yesterday, i’m about to put it up. Must be Spring or something eh? Lol…
JenniferB replied
Ah… It’s cold and Winter is about to hit us in the southern hemisphere here, which might account some for my current writer’s block. Yep… Spring will always do it! :-)
XavierMordant
What I thought was a tease of a title ended up being perfection. You should taken on numbers next.
JenniferB replied
Ha! Now there’s a thought! Thanks Xavier. :-)
4242
I don’t get it,
can chicks actually orgasm?
JenniferB replied
hahahaha! That’s most probably why you ‘don’t get it’ 4242. :-P
4242
Love you Jen.
Some things never change…
JenniferB replied
;-P
xox
MrHill
the magic of words…....fine job…
JenniferB replied
Thanks MrHill! :
))Sorry about the late reply, somehow I missed seeing your comment! :
Delphine de Noire
MMM…Enchanting…
A very sensual lesson in grammar…
Mx
JenniferB replied
thanks Medusa! :-)
BiographyofRed8
well I think everyone has summed up what my response was going to be! So, I thought this was so sexy especially seeing writers are.. the most sexy people on the planet.. brilliant and cleverly written!!
JenniferB replied
thanks Biography red! And I agree, writers are sexy, sensual creatures aren’t they? :-)
DarKarsean
mmmmmmmmmmmm – keep talking
JenniferB replied
lol… I can’t… my mouth’s too full! ;-)
Tron
Love this so much! Had to come back and read it again…Thank you!
JenniferB replied
Wow! Thanks Mark, I really appreciate your supportive comments. :-)
EDGYONE
DAMN,IF YOUR THIS SEXY WITH WORDS ,MY IMAGINATION RUNS WILD,
JenniferB replied
haha! Be careful with that imagination Edgyone… You could be opening a whole new box of trouble!!!! :
P)Thanks! :
MichaelBr
Absolutely wonderfuck and hot
JenniferB replied
heehee, great word that! wonderfuck…Thanks Michael. :-)
fixxxer
Man!
I wanna do to you, what the august wind does to the cherry trees ;)
JenniferB replied
hahaha! I’m afraid my cherry was both popped and blown a long time ago! : -P
fixxxer
If not cherries, raspberries will have to do! :P
JenniferB replied
I cum in many flavours… :-P
fixxxer
seems like u have already laid down for me :P
JenniferB replied
oh… I’ve laid down and a variety of other positions for many. ;-)
fixxxer
U need a shooter not a saint :)
JenniferB replied
I have both. :-)
fixxxer
Seems like a slide. Can’t stop commenting! :)
JenniferB replied
oh, I have this compulsive obsession, I have to get in the last word… : -P
fixxxer
Okay, then lets take this to my page :P
JenniferB replied
any particular reason why?
fixxxer
You wanted the last words to be yours? Be my guest :)
JenniferB replied
nooooooooo! the last words on my comment script! :)
botticcelli
A+ ...writting exercise …
JenniferB replied
Thanks so much Rafael. :)
madvlad
so? read any good books lately?hahahaha lord—this reminds me of last friday-in the tub
JenniferB replied
hahaha! I wont even begin to try to visualise what went on in that tub madvlad. ;-)
sketchesofcoop
This is F**kin awesome! I can’t begin to describe the thoughts running through my head right now, but im sure you can imagine having wrote this. Just fantastic!!!
JenniferB replied
Thanks sketchesofcoop! It was my first attempt at writing something sexy and erotic and was a lot of fun, I must try it again some time. :-)
candycat1
Anticipate, beautiful, chant, devour, excite, feel, give, hold, intimate, juxtaposition, kindle, lust, moments, need, open, pure, queen, reveal, soul, transcend, unending, virile, wanton, x-rated (bit lame there), yearn, zealot.
To have, to want , to need, to give, to take, all of these words are within me and yet pale in comparison to your words.
Absolutely beautiful.
JenniferB replied
wow… Your comment itself read so lyrical and poetical! I haven’t been able to write for ages, I must psyche myself back into that state of mind some time. Thanks Cat. :)
rubyjo
oh my, its as if you knew about this thing i have about words… this pretty much, ummmm, does it. love it.
JenniferB replied
words are both sexual and sacred… in cyberspace, they’re all that we have… :-)
CLiPiCs
Jesus Jen
that was HARD to read ! !
Love ‘N’ Laughter Kriss
JenniferB replied
Hahaha! Thanks Kriss, hope Life’s treating you well… :-)
CLiPiCs
it was certainly treating me pretty nicely while reading this babe
Love ‘N’ Laughter Kriss
JenniferB replied
hahaha! Now be careful Kriss… Or I might be tempted to tease out all of the juicy details… ;-P
CLiPiCs
wanna start at A ?
LOL
Love ‘N’ Laughter Kriss
JenniferB replied
Especially For You…
;-P
CLiPiCs
O my goodness Teee Heee
Love ‘N’ Laughter Kriss
JenniferB replied
;-P
Trijpmaker
interesting..
JenniferB replied
‘Interesting’ was the last thing on my mind when I wrote this…
Kendra Taber
DANG YOU GOT ME ALL HOT AND BOTHERED!lol LOVED THIS..IT SIZZLIN HOT!
JenniferB replied
Thanks Kendra, yep, I felt pretty hot when I wrote it too! ;-)
Kristin Reynolds
JUST. Fucking. BRILLIANT! damn, girl, that was HOT! amazing. not enough letters to say how much i love this!!! Kristin
JenniferB replied
Thanks Kristin, it kind of came out orgasmically. :-)
Kristin Reynolds
HA! kinf of came out orgasmically, love the word play…well…that’s kind of the fucking point, right? lol cheers, K
JenniferB replied
hahaha! Well I guess it helps to have an incurably dirty mind too! :-)
Kristin Reynolds
hehehe, um, yeah, that helps in alot of different ways. ;) I’m watchin you, girl! Love, K
JenniferB replied
thanks! I’m keeping my eye on you too! ;-)
lilgem4u
You are the WOMAN!
JenniferB replied
This was the last poem I wrote before I came down with what feels like a permanent bout of writer’s block! Thanks lilgem4u. :)
joedonovan
sounds really fun :)
JenniferB replied
a little foreplay with wordplay… is never a bad thing. :-)
joedonovan
no its not
:)
JenniferB replied
Ha! Gotcha! Made you smile! :-P
joedonovan
u did it again also
JenniferB replied
wow! twice in one day!!! I’m gonna go for a multiple orgasm… I mean Smile… ;-)
joedonovan
that doesnt sound to bad
;)
JenniferB replied
Yay!!! I did it! :-))
pop open the champaign and we’ll drink a toast to it. :)
joedonovan
i like taquila better or a nice wine maybe
JenniferB replied
tequila is nice as long as you don’t eat the worm… ;-)
April Mansilla
I typed in sex and this beautifulness came up..I love it Miss B!
JenniferB replied
Really? hahaha! I wont ask what it was you were intending to find… ;-)
Thanks April.
April Mansilla
sex of course ;) !!! and boy did I find it haha
JenniferB replied
Lol…try searching for Kama Sutra. ;-)
April Mansilla
I already have the book ;)
Mudsoldat
Shit…nah you said it all mate..MS
JenniferB replied
Thanks Mudsoldat, I want get back to writing non-rhyming stuff again some time too.
funkyfacestudio
I have read this so many times….....I can’t remember if I ever faved it. It’s such a wonderfully creative and erotic piece ! Love it Jen !
JenniferB replied
thanks funkyface, it must have milked the last drop of creative juice out of me cos I haven’t written anything since! ;-)
funkyfacestudio
I’m sure you will come up with something ;)
chugginrail
fab!!
JenniferB replied
thanks chugginrail! :)
Satyriasis73
standing ovation… if i could actually stand after reading this.. =)
JenniferB replied
hahaha! thanks satyriasis, now that’s a very hot visual you’ve given me… ;-)
masque
very, very good/bad.
JenniferB replied
ha! I know what you mean… thanks masque. ;-)
* LSA *
“carve every letter with my fingernails…” My spine tingled w/ every scratch. And no, no pause. Sexy and fun, love it.
JenniferB replied
thanks MsLSA, I’ve been meaning to try to write more of this kind of poetry, only I’ve been creating pictures about it instead, I guess it’s lazier and easier. :)
Jaimie24
I really like this…it’s so strong…hard….to read @ points lol! It make’s a story up in your own mind as you read…....it makes me think of about 8 different encounters as i follow the such mind shaking words.
I can think like this but writing like is a complete tallent, well done. :-)
JenniferB replied
It’s been the last, explosive, orgasmic release of words I’ve been able to write in a long time!!! Must have been one hell of a good night! hahaha thanks muchly Jaimie. :)
Sammyss3
V. Hot, and v. Loved. Nice 1. Ss3
JenniferB replied
thanks mr Ss3! glad this stirred a little something inside you. ;-)
Sammyss3
Female, but still gd none the less. xox
JenniferB replied
oops! sorry, I dont even know why I typed the word mr there! Bad habit of mine I think, but yes, gender doesn’t make a difference at all. :-)) xox
cathrinedp
damn damn damn… How I wish that I was the one that wrote this. Damn. This is so good, so naked, so hot, and yet, above all…..so pure
JenniferB replied
thanks cathrine, when the itch to write scratches me again I’ll have ago at writing another one along the same lines. :)
Goldenspirit
Seems i took a while to find this but well worth the wait. Terrific. :))
JenniferB replied
I think I must have blown what little creative juices I had left in me with this one! I haven’t written since! Lol… thanks again Goldenspirit. :)
Goldenspirit
Well i hope something tickles your fancy and your creative juices flow freely once again. Must be time for another wordgasm. ;))
JenniferB replied
well spring is coming to NZ, so hopefully with it, will come some inspiration to write again. :)
wordgasm… I like that! :-D
trwoody
Hot Damn, I thought I had so much fun with sounds , and words, and phrases. Never thought about the seductive power. But yes, writing poetry sometimes becomes like making love. A sensual adventure, mind arousing with messages, innuendos, intentions, and suggestions. Building in intensity to the logical culmination of the piece. That was brilliant
JenniferB replied
Oh I missed this wonderful comment somehow, thanks so much trwoody, I love your description of my poem. :-)
TrishMarrs
OMGoodness! What a wonderful way with words you possess. Words are my all time favorite artistic venue but I do not believe I will attain the level you have presented here. No matter. I will savor these words of yours and let them slowly melt into my mind over and over again. Absolutely marvelous work, dear. Expressive, creative, descriptive, emotive. It flows so beautifully within the form. Delicious.
JenniferB replied
Oh I have much more passion for words than images, I guess because with poetry and words you can interpret things as you desire and form your own imagery! Thanks so much Trish, I’ve already read one beautiful poem of yours, and I definitely intend to get around to reading many more! :-)
whiterabbit79
H-O-L-Y FUCKING SHIT!!! That was AMAZING, Awe inspiring, utterly… breathtaking. KEEP IT UP!! I will read more! BTW- You’ve got talent! And you broke my writer’s block!
JenniferB replied
Ooh, sorry I missed your comment whitrabbit! Love your passion and enthusiasm! Lol… Now I need a cure for my writer’s block! haha!
Christie Moses
Wooooo that is HOT stuff. I think I forgot to breathe all the way through. DAMN xoxo
JenniferB replied
I’d had writer’s block for ages when I wrote this, it was like one final explosion! haha! I haven’t written anything since… Thanks Christie, I love your poetry too. :) xox
MarathonMan
I have a dictionary in hand and the door’s locked… from the inside…!! Have never taken such pleasure from mere words….... back in 5 mins…. ok ok, 2 actually…...
JenniferB replied
hahaha! You make me laugh MarathonMan, I hope you packed as much into that 2 mins as possible! ;-)
MarathonMan
I didn’t even get past the ‘A’ section…. specifically…
‘Abuse’ : To cause damage or harm.
It was then I hurt myself…. off to the doctor now…!!! :-)
JenniferB replied
oh noooooooooo… don’t hurt yourself, all actions to and for yourself should be pleasurable! ;-)
MarathonMan
No pain, No gain…!! :-)
JenniferB replied
Pleasure and Pain? ;-)
Lawford
What a wonderful weaving of wordy sex. A real tongue twister so to speak.
JenniferB replied
thanks lawford, a little word-play every now and again can be fun! ;-)
aaeiinnn
well personally i liked the ref to finger nails
- lolbut each to their own huh…some years back at a regular poetry reading night there was a plethora of ‘fuck’ and no real talent in the order of words .. i wrote the following and it gave most of the younger folk a kick up the backside and they started to produce a greater variety of words in their poems
the F word
fornication
oscilation
rumination
nubile nation
isolation
consternation
altercation
titillation
implication
on
consideration
the word has eleven letters
not ten
so
i said to my fella
come on
let’s do it again
annie
JenniferB replied
ha! great poem! :-)
I’ve never read any of my work at a poetry reading, a lot of my older work contained the word ‘fuck’, but I dont believe it’s gratitious or anything as it was said in context of the feeling and content of the poetry, well a couple of editors published it here in NZ, so it couldn’t have been that bad. :)
aaeiinnn
it’s not an offensive word in itself but over used by some people
the word ‘nice’ is similarly done to death
sure there are others – but what/which?
JenniferB replied
probably more noticeable over the internet because ‘words’ are all we have to communicate with, sometimes I just couldn’t give a shit about being articulate or searching for a thesaurus inside of my head.
PeteStreet
You had me at the title.
JenniferB replied
mmmm…. I wish…. ;-P
ieneke jansen
Ahhhhhh….ahem (clears her throat) totally speechless!!!
May I say Miss Jennifer that I do believe that there is nothing that you are not capable of!!!
People dream about being able to write like you do…keep it up
—> in any format on any subject. It don’t matter girl :PWOW
JenniferB replied
I couldn’t think of anything else to write about! ;-)
thanks ieneke.
Jason Sinner
:0 heeeeeelllllllooooooo oh my dear damn.
JenniferB replied
haha! I hope that response was one of pleasure and not one of pain… or maybe a little of each, whatever the case may be? :)
Jason Sinner
Pleasure my dear…. awsomely sensual write…..need water now so much water…cold cold
water.
JenniferB replied
you make water sound stimYOUlating… ;-)
nickowen
not sure about being fucked but I am totally seduced
a poet
a real poet
JenniferB replied
thanks nickowen, I need to find my voice for words again some time, writing is a great ‘release’... pun intended! ;-)
Trenchtownrock 19 days ago
Tremendous write.
JenniferB replied 19 days ago
Thanks Trenchtownrock. I hid this one at the back because it was attracting too many pervs! haha! Oh! Not that you’re a perv or anything! :)
Trenchtownrock 19 days ago
Well, I just dug the writing….one love.
JenniferB replied 19 days ago
thanks for that. :-)
ianez 19 days ago
well now. how do i follow all those comments?!! lets see….... i’ve been fucked with words before, i know exactly how you feel. my lascivious pen sometimes liberates me jen. thank you for this one! i love it.
JenniferB replied 19 days ago
words can take you to the dizzy heights of breathless exctasy, or plunge you down into the darkest of bottomleess pits… the power in the written form of expression is so often underestimated. ;-)
JenniferB replied 19 days ago
excuse the crap spelling… my fingers are sticky… ;-P
wildwomenlove 19 days ago
man this is so cool. so many horny people in the same room. this is an orgy! loving it…
wow this poem is amazing, long, slow, deliberate, HOT, HEAVY, SATIATED, this is one DELIBERATE, PREMEDITATED FUCK. no wonder you haven’t written since, you’re exhausted! I love it, the whole thing from conception, title, to ending. you’ll be back, there’s too much in these words for you to lay sleeping. you’ll be back. and I’ll be waiting. big love x
wildwomenlove 19 days ago
PS thanks for bilingual, it is fantastic x
JenniferB replied 19 days ago
hahaha! thanks wildwomenlove, yep, redbubble is an orgy of restrained, explosive energy just waiting to blow… ;-)
ArcadiaTempest 9 days ago
Loved this Jen…clever and hitting my writers spot just perfectly!!
Bring on all those slow and then deeper,faster verbs and delishkiss, juicy ,wet adjectives….I am now yearning for a full frontal dissertation to really complete the joy of some probing prose ….. ;o)
JenniferB replied 9 days ago
Ah… a little light, lusty fun with words and the English Language, I’ve never tried to write anything since this piece, so maybe I wore myself out with it! :-)
Mick Yates 5 days ago
I love this – creative, sexy, with a purpose ..
JenniferB replied 5 days ago
Awww thanks so much Mick, and thanks for buying my poetry book! Unfortunately this poem isn’t in it, but I’m planning of writing a book of erotic poetry, and when I do, I’ll sign a copy and send you the first one as a gift. :)
Michael Scholl 3 days ago
Again!!! AGAIN!!!!
Wonderful!
JenniferB replied 3 days ago
haha! I’m not sure if this one completely wore me out or not, though I’d love to go for a multiple… ;-)
Thanks Michael.