I Want To Fuck You With Words

JenniferB
Author: JenniferB
Word Count: 388
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I Want To Fuck You With Words

Mmm… I just wanted to make the alphabet seem sexy. ;- )

Inspired by THIS VERY HOT POEM which was recommended to me by STEVE.

:-)

I want to fuck you with words…

Take every vowel and consonant
and rub them gently over your skin
hear you gasp in the spaces between letters and words
as the language devours you
and sucks you back in

grasp every soft sounding letter
to lightly stroke you in all of your sensitive spots
tease you and please you with the gentlest of sounds
until you feel as if your stomach is tied up in knots

I want to trace every word with the tip of my finger
from the top of your lashes down,
carve every letter with my fingernails along your spine
as we surrender and both fall to the ground

I want to lick you and suck you with soft sounding syllables
from the top of your naval to the tip of your cock
and then I want to slowly savour your essence
as i take you down deeper to that place you forgot

twenty six fucking glorious letters
seduce you when I’m down on all fours,
I succumb to the smell of your sex and surrender
to the sound of you groaning

I’m yours…

Words, reaching out beyond the walls that contain them
breaking free of the binds and the ties that restrains them
there is no pause for breath nor punctuation
as the strokes probe your body for deep penetration

I want to delve deeper and deeper
into the language and vocabulary of sex
breathe life into every smouldering letter
giving movement and feeling to cold hard text

And as the letters whimper, sigh, fall
and go down on their knees before you
silent submissive and giving they’re yours
to use as you please

They adore you…

Each syllable and sound softly sucks you and fucks you
and reminds you of why you are living
as every infinite letter carresses you eternally
loving, selfless and giving

Words…

Sensuous, seductive limited only by
the language we’ve yet to learn
breathing oxygen into the fire that causes
our bodies to tremble and burn

Words…

are the reason

the meaning

the purpose

and essence

closing the gap between time and distance
they fall and sigh in your presence

Words…

are the spirit
the feeling
and soul

Words…

will devour you
and swallow
you whole

Words…

I want to fuck you with words…

  • Mark Ramstead

    Mark Ramstead

    You put the dick in dictionary…

  • JenniferB replied

    Guess what’s been on my mind? ;-)

  • Matt Penfold

    Matt Penfold

    I hope you use a french letter…

  • JenniferB replied

    Lol… It couldn’t be safer. ;-)

  • Mark Ramstead

    Mark Ramstead

    Are you feeling like your self lately? The word “old” does not apply here…

  • JenniferB replied

    Slowly but surely. ;-)

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    WOW Jen….THIS LEFT ME BREATHLESS…....incredibly and deliciously SEXY!!

  • JenniferB replied

    Thanks Astoreth, I like to please the ladies too. ;-)

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    muhahaha!! I’m laughing at that top comment….. ;-)

  • JenniferB replied

    Lol… ;-P

  • brandon k jenkins

    brandon k jenkins

    so was this an oral exam?
    ;P

  • JenniferB replied

    well it can be a practical one also if need be… :-P

  • Faizan Qureshi

    Faizan QureshiAll Rounder

    Hahaha you’re a genius! =P

  • JenniferB replied

    nope, just insane… ;-)

  • RumPunk

    RumPunk

    i little B+D for the mind :P

  • JenniferB replied

    Just a few lil ole lubricating letters. Will they ban me? :-P

  • jacqleen

    jacqleen

    Hey Jen….Whoever He is, He is one LUCKY guy…..... :) :) :)

  • JenniferB replied

    There’s more than one letter in the alphabet haha. ;-)

  • brandon k jenkins

    brandon k jenkins

    off to take a cold shower

  • JenniferB replied

    May the words be with you. ;-)

  • Sticky Flower

    Sticky Flower

    lol @ Matt…
    I’m horny now…and I’m having some really weird visuals.:-D..

  • JenniferB replied

    Hahaha! Horny is good. ;-P

  • poeticgenius

    poeticgenius

    nicely done Jen

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks, I just felt like a little (fore) play. ;-)

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    OMG I’ve thought this….but OMG woman, you’ve written it…so fucking finely, seductively…

    Tantalising to put it mildly. HOLY WOW….........

  • JenniferB replied

    Lol… Thanks Lisa, I told you I rarely think before speaking, my mouth engages before my brain. ;-)

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    Personally, I’m glad it does – this is a wonderfully powerful result….
    xx

  • JenniferB replied

    Thanks! :-D

  • aglaia b

    aglaia b

    you’re the best hehe
    ;-) xox

  • JenniferB replied

    Aww… Thanks aglaia, just having a little fun. ;-)

  • colorblind

    colorblind

    whoa jenn i see you still pushing at full force
    and i’m loving the joy ride your words put me on
    you already i kno i had to fav this one
    best wishes from daz …..

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks colourblind, yeah, I’m a little anti rules and authority today. ;-)

  • Vivian V  Mairo

    Vivian V Mairo

    Regarding ”...my mouth engages before my brain. ;)” I will add “How should I know what I think until I here what I say?” ;)

    Cheers,
    and this Poem is so physically arousing!

    Whooii

  • JenniferB replied

    Ha! So true! Thanks Vivian. :-)

  • Cassey

    Cassey

    Thank god for the alphabet….when you run out of words and letters, there’s always symbols, Chinese, Japanese, (dirty knees, look at these ….oops that slipped), sanscrit…..

    Really cool. Like this a lot.

  • JenniferB replied

    I was going to add a multicultural/multilingual flavour to it! Thanks Cassey. :-)

  • Matt Penfold

    Matt Penfold

    Gives a new meaning to the term “fucking oath”

  • JenniferB replied

    hahaha, I guess it does. ;-)

  • ambient-1

    ambient-1

    Yes, please! Effective piece of writing. Thank you!

  • JenniferB replied

    I’ll keep you in mind… Thanks. :-)

  • Matt Penfold

    Matt Penfold

    You really are a cunning linguist ;-)

  • JenniferB replied

    Very clever Mr Penfold, I see you’re on a roll, LOL

  • KiwiAna

    KiwiAna

    Beautifully crafted. I loved being pleasured by your words.

  • JenniferB replied

    It was a pleasure to pleasure you. :-)

    Oh, and hi from another kiwi.

  • Phil Threlfall

    Phil Threlfall

    Well…. you have

  • JenniferB replied

    I have? I hope it felt good. :-)

  • KiwiAna

    KiwiAna

    Woot! another Kiwi!

  • JenniferB replied

    Sure am! :-D

  • martinilogic

    martinilogic

    don’t skip any periods….. hey, great work….. nice concept

  • JenniferB replied

    lol, I wont martin, and thanks. :)

  • Jess Andrews

    Jess Andrews

    wow, what a piece…left me a lil hot under the collar to be honest with you :-p

  • JenniferB replied

    honesty is fine with me, I’m glad you got something out of it. thanks. ;-)

  • sandraellen

    sandraellen

    Lovely…..........words and what we can do with them.

    This is wonderful Jennifer….......sandra :)

  • JenniferB replied

    Thank you Sandra, it was fun to write. :-)

  • grarbaleg

    grarbaleg

    will devour you
    and swallow
    you whole

    So fabulous Jen

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks grarbaleg. :-)

  • Outdoors2

    Outdoors2

    Oh you metaphoric whore You…xxx….;-)

  • JenniferB replied

    hahaha! I just felt like having a little fun with letters and language today. :-P

  • Leon  Walker

    Leon Walker

    Work it baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • JenniferB replied

    It’s all play. :-) xox

  • Louise. C. Thomas

    Louise. C. Thomas

    Sexy sexy dirt dirt dirt!!! And sooo pretty, I love it. I want to do rude things to it! :)))

  • JenniferB replied

    Lol, thanks loulou, rude things can be fun. :-)

  • Dwayne Boyd

    Dwayne Boyd

    This makes me want to dangle a participle…

  • JenniferB replied

    Lol… Thanks Dwayen. :-)

  • Swingthetrapeze

    Swingthetrapeze

    omg, that was awkwardly amazing.

  • JenniferB replied

    Lol… Thanks. :-)

  • Outdoors2

    Outdoors2

    I just felt like having a little fun with letters and language today.

    Really good to see you writing again Jen, regardless it’s something to get those juices flowing and patching the words together…..;-)

  • JenniferB replied

    Oh I’m still trying to warm myself up and get back into it. ;-)

  • woof

    woof

    mmmmmmm, love it!!! words can be so sexy when you use them the right way!!!

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks, yep… words can be sexy and fun. ;-)

  • lolowe

    lolowe

    I will never think of the alphabet in quite the same way… ;}
    You make the ordinary seem so wonderous.

  • JenniferB replied

    Aww… Thanks lolowe, it’s always a great feeling to see you dropping by. :-)

  • mstrace

    mstrace

    YOWZA! This was some ride...and I enjoyed every letter slash word slash language slash stroke of it.

    I’m getting back in line – to ride it again.

  • JenniferB replied

    hahaha… ride on by any time mstrace. ;-)

  • joshuapie

    joshuapie

    wow! As the poem writes I’ve just been fucked by your sexy words …
    Thankyou…

  • JenniferB replied

    Lol… You’re welcome Joshua, I had fun writing it. :-)

  • lazydaze

    lazydaze

    LOLLLLLLLL sooo well written !!! awsome…love it ! :))

  • JenniferB replied

    Hahaha! You make me smile, glad you liked it. :-) xox

  • lazydaze

    lazydaze

    ur smiling?? hahaha GOOD !!! :-)xox

  • JenniferB replied

    Yep… Sure am, see ---> :-)

    xox

  • Druidstorm

    Druidstorm

    “Your words are acumen for the sexual mind!” Please again in Latin and break the taboo of the soul! You write like the Goddess speaks! PERFECTION!!!...)o(

  • JenniferB replied

    Oh I can’t speak in Latin, but I’m orally proficient in other ways. ;-)

  • Sinéad Costello

    Sinéad Costello

    omg this is brilliant!

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks Sinead, I was trying to draw the analogy with cyber sex, I think it kinda worked. :-)

  • Druidstorm

    Druidstorm

    “I bet you are friend!” Cheers for the thought!!!...)o(

  • JenniferB replied

    you’re welcome. :-) xox

  • MistressZombie

    MistressZombie

    Delicious! I think that I am now pregnant.

  • JenniferB replied

    LOL… Impregnated with words, now there’s and idea for another poem… Thanks MZ. :-)

  • linaji

    linaji

    GooD God.. this is an amazing write…cause I do this every day and did not really know how to put my tongue ‘all’ over it along with my fingers doing the walking and… well…. wheww.. completion at last!!!
    You are incredible.

  • JenniferB replied

    I think we all enjoy a little play on words every now and again, thanks linaji. :-)

  • MistressZombie

    MistressZombie

    Glad to be of service madam.

  • H M Bascom

    H M Bascom

    I want to fuck you with words…

    I think you just did. :-) Seductive, erotic writing.

  • JenniferB replied

    Thanks Helen, ‘twas my intention to tease with words. :-)

  • JDNarts

    JDNarts

    A perfect bit of aural sex; think I need a cigarette now… ;)

  • JenniferB replied

    Hahaha! I’ll take the necessity for a cigarette as a compliment. :-)

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    Top NOTCH

    wow

    this is worthy of my favorites ;)

    thank you

  • JenniferB replied

    Thanks Shoaib, I love reading your poetry too. :-)

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    thanks… i like to make love to people with my words because i believe in releasing all of me deep inside you

  • JenniferB replied

    Haha, you should try writing an erotic poem, something tells me that you’d be very good at it. ;-)

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    haha, awww thats sweet of you, but i dont write really erotic stuff
    I’m not saying I can’t i just choose not to

    but that means so much cumming from you
    it feels good

  • JenniferB replied

    Hey… When you get a sexy, erotic moment, just pen it…You might be surprised at the outcome. :-)

  • Vellu

    Vellu

    You naughty, naughty girl Jennifer. This is amazing writing. I wish I could have been so aroused reading Shakespeare in year 12 Enlish Lit., I may have passed.
    You are a very talented woman.

  • JenniferB replied

    Lol… I’m glad you got something out of it, thanks Vellu. :-)

  • Kirrill D'Kainn

    Kirrill D'Kainn

    To J.B.

    ( Please open your bubble mail ) ... !

    Kirrill D’Kainn.

  • JenniferB replied

    I have nothing there from you Kirrill.

  • Kirrill D'Kainn

    Kirrill D'Kainn

    My apologies … in my EXCITEMENT – I have pressed some wrong button … !

    Please try now.

    Kirrill D’Kainn.

  • JenniferB replied

    Gratefully received, thank you. :-)

  • TheWanderingBoo

    TheWanderingBoo

    erotically beautiful…words to stimulate and tease the senses…

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks Thewanderingboo, it was fun to write. :-)

  • Gretchen O'Donald
  • JenniferB replied

    thanks. :)

  • TheArtistMario

    TheArtistMario

    My god…. how have I overlooked this! I have been so drawn into your visual art that I have not ventured the halls of the mansion… I will be in this bedroom for some time

  • JenniferB replied

    lol… you’re welcome to stay in my bedroom any time. Thanks. ;-)

  • Peter Evans

    Peter Evans

    Awesome Jennifer and I’d be honoured to give you an exclamation mark :-)

  • JenniferB replied

    heehee… twas a little teasing and pleasing with words, thanks Peter, exclamation mark gladly accepted. :-)

  • KristineNora

    KristineNora

    you is that not enough

  • JenniferB replied

    hu??? okay…

  • Mark Wolter

    Mark Wolter

    Absolutely amazing

  • JenniferB replied

    Thanks Mark, Language and words can be fun to play with. :-)

  • CORA D. MITCHELL

    CORA D. MITCHELL

    amazing!!!

  • JenniferB replied

    Thanks Cora, I was feeling pretty horny when I wrote it, as you can probably tell. :-)

  • Rex Inkpen

    Rex Inkpen

    it’s all been said… phew..! well played.

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks Rex, it was fun to write. :-)

  • Tracey Mac

    Tracey Mac

    Lordy….............open a window in here!!! How fucking hot is it?
    That almost got me reaching for the v….............oh never mind….....jesus…...........love your dictionary babe…......can you do a thesaurus next?? ;)

  • JenniferB replied

    hahahaha! Thanks for the laugh Tracey! :-)

  • Earhart Chappel Inc.   IPA

    Earhart Chappe...

    omg! fab!

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks Earhart, gotta love the power and seduction of words. ;-)

  • Tracey Mac

    Tracey Mac

    Well I love your words…...........I’ve never dreamt of using the alphabet that way…..........
    I’m printing this out and gonna share it with my Rabbit LMFAO!!!!
    (delete this when you’re done hahaha)

  • JenniferB replied

    Hahaha! Do you really want me to delete it? Sometimes the comments are the most entertaining part of a post. :-)

  • Tracey Mac

    Tracey Mac

    Did you watch? Hell no….....leave it then PMSL!!!
    They’ll probably have a surge in sales now hahahaha…....
    (they got my vote!!)

  • JenniferB replied

    Yep! That’d be the most stimulating rabbit that I’ve seen in a while! LOL :-)

  • jacqleen

    jacqleen

    Hey U…..I had read this when you first had written it…..and I Faved it THEN….......but I just noticed more people just had discoverd it…......and you know what I STILL LOVE IT …..........your words are way way way TOOO HOTTTT !!!! xo a FAV again…...............! :)

  • JenniferB replied

    Lol… Thanks jacqleen! I was having a joke with someone about cybersex once and this poem was the result of that conversation, words can be such fun! ;-)

  • hillbill

    hillbill

    Brilliant peice, even though it`s a visual, it seduces the minds eyes but i must say
    ” i`m all ears”
    well done
    Hillbill

  • JenniferB replied

    Awww… Thanks heaps for your kind words hillbill :-)

  • zabcoloma

    zabcoloma

    so sexy and erotic, great!

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks so much zabcoloma! :-)

  • thndermnky

    thndermnky

    Well, this made my morning. Off to a cold shower

  • JenniferB replied

    Hahaha! Thanks thndermnky, enjoy your shower! ;-)

  • Impassioned

    Impassioned

    Wow! love this ;)

  • JenniferB replied

    Thanks impassioned! :-)

  • Paul Rees-Jones

    Paul Rees-Jones

    ...and whew…that was a great read…I think I am going to read that again, but slower.
    : { )}

  • JenniferB replied

    lol… thanks Paul, it was fun writing this one. :-P

  • Erography

    Erography

    This is delicious. Not much poetry out there in this world revolving around “word fucks”. Beautiful poem. Wonderfully written.

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks so much Erography! :-)

  • jimofozz

    jimofozz

    Finger licking good your words paint a thousand pictures

  • JenniferB replied

    Lol… Thanks jimofozz! :-)

  • jim marshal

    jim marshal

    I think the Arabic alphabet has 29 letters, should we convert just for those extra 3? lol

    Seriously, that was one of the best things I’ve read on here, intelligent witty and hot. Loved it!! “Fuck me with words”.... a woman after my own heart lol

  • JenniferB replied

    hahaha… well out here in the crazy land of cyberspace, words, images and energy are all we really have… So we may as well make the most of them! Thanks Jim, I love your work too! ;-)

  • poeticsoul

    poeticsoul

    wow i see all the above love this one got i guess i’ll just add my name to da pot
    what more can be said u have said it all this got me….... i’ll leave that to the imagination lol can’t wait 4 part 2

  • JenniferB replied

    i never thought about doing a part 2, but it’s a good idea, I might give it a try some time! Thanks poeticsoul, I appreciate you dropping by. :-)

  • Selkie

    Selkie

    Shit…talk about hot!

  • JenniferB replied

    lol… thanks Selkie, did you take a look at the erotic poem in the video linked on the right? Now THAT’S hot!!! :-)

  • poeticsoul

    poeticsoul

    yeah no problem i thought i may hint at it that way lol we would love a part 2

  • JenniferB replied

    lol thanks! I’ll give it a go some time. :-)

  • Selkie

    Selkie

    Dios fucking Mio, lol…that is hot. Yay for erotic poetry :)

  • JenniferB replied

    Ha! ‘twas the inspiration for this piece, I might try to write more in this vein some time. :)

  • Selkie

    Selkie

    Fun, innit? I have a lot in this vein…probably too much, lol…:)

  • JenniferB replied

    You do? I’ve just added you to my watchlist so I can take a look at it as soon as I have time! :)

  • Selkie

    Selkie

    Just added you too :). Yeah, in fact i wrote another yesterday, i’m about to put it up. Must be Spring or something eh? Lol…

  • JenniferB replied

    Ah… It’s cold and Winter is about to hit us in the southern hemisphere here, which might account some for my current writer’s block. Yep… Spring will always do it! :-)

  • XavierMordant

    XavierMordant

    What I thought was a tease of a title ended up being perfection. You should taken on numbers next.

  • JenniferB replied

    Ha! Now there’s a thought! Thanks Xavier. :-)

  • 4242

    4242

    I don’t get it,
    can chicks actually orgasm?

  • JenniferB replied

    hahahaha! That’s most probably why you ‘don’t get it’ 4242. :-P

  • 4242

    4242

    Love you Jen.
    Some things never change…

  • JenniferB replied

    ;-P

    xox

  • MrHill

    MrHill

    the magic of words…....fine job…

  • JenniferB replied

    Thanks MrHill! :)
    Sorry about the late reply, somehow I missed seeing your comment! :
    )

  • Delphine de Noire

    Delphine de Noire

    MMM…Enchanting…

    A very sensual lesson in grammar…

    Mx

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks Medusa! :-)

  • BiographyofRed8

    BiographyofRed8

    well I think everyone has summed up what my response was going to be! So, I thought this was so sexy especially seeing writers are.. the most sexy people on the planet.. brilliant and cleverly written!!

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks Biography red! And I agree, writers are sexy, sensual creatures aren’t they? :-)

  • DarKarsean

    DarKarsean

    mmmmmmmmmmmm – keep talking

  • JenniferB replied

    lol… I can’t… my mouth’s too full! ;-)

  • Tron

    Tron

    Love this so much! Had to come back and read it again…Thank you!

  • JenniferB replied

    Wow! Thanks Mark, I really appreciate your supportive comments. :-)

  • EDGYONE

    EDGYONE

    DAMN,IF YOUR THIS SEXY WITH WORDS ,MY IMAGINATION RUNS WILD,

  • JenniferB replied

    haha! Be careful with that imagination Edgyone… You could be opening a whole new box of trouble!!!! :P
    Thanks! :
    )

  • MichaelBr

    MichaelBr

    Absolutely wonderfuck and hot

  • JenniferB replied

    heehee, great word that! wonderfuck…Thanks Michael. :-)

  • fixxxer

    fixxxer

    Man!
    I wanna do to you, what the august wind does to the cherry trees ;)

  • JenniferB replied

    hahaha! I’m afraid my cherry was both popped and blown a long time ago! : -P

  • fixxxer

    fixxxer

    If not cherries, raspberries will have to do! :P

  • JenniferB replied

    I cum in many flavours… :-P

  • fixxxer

    fixxxer

    seems like u have already laid down for me :P

  • JenniferB replied

    oh… I’ve laid down and a variety of other positions for many. ;-)

  • fixxxer

    fixxxer

    U need a shooter not a saint :)

  • JenniferB replied

    I have both. :-)

  • fixxxer

    fixxxer

    Seems like a slide. Can’t stop commenting! :)

  • JenniferB replied

    oh, I have this compulsive obsession, I have to get in the last word… : -P

  • fixxxer

    fixxxer

    Okay, then lets take this to my page :P

  • JenniferB replied

    any particular reason why?

  • fixxxer

    fixxxer

    You wanted the last words to be yours? Be my guest :)

  • JenniferB replied

    nooooooooo! the last words on my comment script! :)

  • botticcelli

    botticcelli

    A+ ...writting exercise …

  • JenniferB replied

    Thanks so much Rafael. :)

  • madvlad

    madvlad

    so? read any good books lately?hahahaha lord—this reminds me of last friday-in the tub

  • JenniferB replied

    hahaha! I wont even begin to try to visualise what went on in that tub madvlad. ;-)

  • sketchesofcoop

    sketchesofcoop

    This is F**kin awesome! I can’t begin to describe the thoughts running through my head right now, but im sure you can imagine having wrote this. Just fantastic!!!

  • JenniferB replied

    Thanks sketchesofcoop! It was my first attempt at writing something sexy and erotic and was a lot of fun, I must try it again some time. :-)

  • candycat1

    candycat1

    Anticipate, beautiful, chant, devour, excite, feel, give, hold, intimate, juxtaposition, kindle, lust, moments, need, open, pure, queen, reveal, soul, transcend, unending, virile, wanton, x-rated (bit lame there), yearn, zealot.
    To have, to want , to need, to give, to take, all of these words are within me and yet pale in comparison to your words.

    Absolutely beautiful.

  • JenniferB replied

    wow… Your comment itself read so lyrical and poetical! I haven’t been able to write for ages, I must psyche myself back into that state of mind some time. Thanks Cat. :)

  • rubyjo

    rubyjo

    oh my, its as if you knew about this thing i have about words… this pretty much, ummmm, does it. love it.

  • JenniferB replied

    words are both sexual and sacred… in cyberspace, they’re all that we have… :-)

  • CLiPiCs

    CLiPiCs

    Jesus Jen

    that was HARD to read ! !

    Love ‘N’ Laughter Kriss

  • JenniferB replied

    Hahaha! Thanks Kriss, hope Life’s treating you well… :-)

  • CLiPiCs

    CLiPiCs

    it was certainly treating me pretty nicely while reading this babe

    Love ‘N’ Laughter Kriss

  • JenniferB replied

    hahaha! Now be careful Kriss… Or I might be tempted to tease out all of the juicy details… ;-P

  • CLiPiCs

    CLiPiCs

    wanna start at A ?

    LOL

    Love ‘N’ Laughter Kriss

  • CLiPiCs

    CLiPiCs

    O my goodness Teee Heee

    Love ‘N’ Laughter Kriss

  • JenniferB replied

    ;-P

  • Trijpmaker

    Trijpmaker

    interesting..

  • JenniferB replied

    ‘Interesting’ was the last thing on my mind when I wrote this…

  • Kendra Taber

    Kendra Taber

    DANG YOU GOT ME ALL HOT AND BOTHERED!lol LOVED THIS..IT SIZZLIN HOT!

  • JenniferB replied

    Thanks Kendra, yep, I felt pretty hot when I wrote it too! ;-)

  • Kristin  Reynolds

    Kristin Reynolds

    JUST. Fucking. BRILLIANT! damn, girl, that was HOT! amazing. not enough letters to say how much i love this!!! Kristin

  • JenniferB replied

    Thanks Kristin, it kind of came out orgasmically. :-)

  • Kristin  Reynolds

    Kristin Reynolds

    HA! kinf of came out orgasmically, love the word play…well…that’s kind of the fucking point, right? lol cheers, K

  • JenniferB replied

    hahaha! Well I guess it helps to have an incurably dirty mind too! :-)

  • Kristin  Reynolds

    Kristin Reynolds

    hehehe, um, yeah, that helps in alot of different ways. ;) I’m watchin you, girl! Love, K

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks! I’m keeping my eye on you too! ;-)

  • lilgem4u

    lilgem4u

    You are the WOMAN!

  • JenniferB replied

    This was the last poem I wrote before I came down with what feels like a permanent bout of writer’s block! Thanks lilgem4u. :)

  • joedonovan

    joedonovan

    sounds really fun :)

  • JenniferB replied

    a little foreplay with wordplay… is never a bad thing. :-)

  • joedonovan

    joedonovan

    no its not
    :)

  • JenniferB replied

    Ha! Gotcha! Made you smile! :-P

  • joedonovan

    joedonovan

    u did it again also

  • JenniferB replied

    wow! twice in one day!!! I’m gonna go for a multiple orgasm… I mean Smile… ;-)

  • joedonovan

    joedonovan

    that doesnt sound to bad

    ;)

  • JenniferB replied

    Yay!!! I did it! :-))
    pop open the champaign and we’ll drink a toast to it. :)

  • joedonovan

    joedonovan

    i like taquila better or a nice wine maybe

  • JenniferB replied

    tequila is nice as long as you don’t eat the worm… ;-)

  • April Mansilla

    April Mansilla

    I typed in sex and this beautifulness came up..I love it Miss B!

  • JenniferB replied

    Really? hahaha! I wont ask what it was you were intending to find… ;-)
    Thanks April.

  • April Mansilla

    April Mansilla

    sex of course ;) !!! and boy did I find it haha

  • JenniferB replied

    Lol…try searching for Kama Sutra. ;-)

  • April Mansilla

    April Mansilla

    I already have the book ;)

  • Mudsoldat

    Mudsoldat

    Shit…nah you said it all mate..MS

  • JenniferB replied

    Thanks Mudsoldat, I want get back to writing non-rhyming stuff again some time too.

  • funkyfacestudio

    funkyfacestudio

    I have read this so many times….....I can’t remember if I ever faved it. It’s such a wonderfully creative and erotic piece ! Love it Jen !

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks funkyface, it must have milked the last drop of creative juice out of me cos I haven’t written anything since! ;-)

  • funkyfacestudio

    funkyfacestudio

    I’m sure you will come up with something ;)

  • chugginrail

    chugginrail

    fab!!

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks chugginrail! :)

  • Satyriasis73

    Satyriasis73

    standing ovation… if i could actually stand after reading this.. =)

  • JenniferB replied

    hahaha! thanks satyriasis, now that’s a very hot visual you’ve given me… ;-)

  • masque

    masque

    very, very good/bad.

  • JenniferB replied

    ha! I know what you mean… thanks masque. ;-)

  • * LSA *

    * LSA *

    “carve every letter with my fingernails…” My spine tingled w/ every scratch. And no, no pause. Sexy and fun, love it.

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks MsLSA, I’ve been meaning to try to write more of this kind of poetry, only I’ve been creating pictures about it instead, I guess it’s lazier and easier. :)

  • Jaimie24

    Jaimie24

    I really like this…it’s so strong…hard….to read @ points lol! It make’s a story up in your own mind as you read…....it makes me think of about 8 different encounters as i follow the such mind shaking words.

    I can think like this but writing like is a complete tallent, well done. :-)

  • JenniferB replied

    It’s been the last, explosive, orgasmic release of words I’ve been able to write in a long time!!! Must have been one hell of a good night! hahaha thanks muchly Jaimie. :)

  • Sammyss3

    Sammyss3

    V. Hot, and v. Loved. Nice 1. Ss3

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks mr Ss3! glad this stirred a little something inside you. ;-)

  • Sammyss3

    Sammyss3

    Female, but still gd none the less. xox

  • JenniferB replied

    oops! sorry, I dont even know why I typed the word mr there! Bad habit of mine I think, but yes, gender doesn’t make a difference at all. :-)) xox

  • cathrinedp

    cathrinedp

    damn damn damn… How I wish that I was the one that wrote this. Damn. This is so good, so naked, so hot, and yet, above all…..so pure

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks cathrine, when the itch to write scratches me again I’ll have ago at writing another one along the same lines. :)

  • Goldenspirit

    Goldenspirit

    Seems i took a while to find this but well worth the wait. Terrific. :))

  • JenniferB replied

    I think I must have blown what little creative juices I had left in me with this one! I haven’t written since! Lol… thanks again Goldenspirit. :)

  • Goldenspirit

    Goldenspirit

    Well i hope something tickles your fancy and your creative juices flow freely once again. Must be time for another wordgasm. ;))

  • JenniferB replied

    well spring is coming to NZ, so hopefully with it, will come some inspiration to write again. :)
    wordgasm… I like that! :-D

  • trwoody

    trwoody

    Hot Damn, I thought I had so much fun with sounds , and words, and phrases. Never thought about the seductive power. But yes, writing poetry sometimes becomes like making love. A sensual adventure, mind arousing with messages, innuendos, intentions, and suggestions. Building in intensity to the logical culmination of the piece. That was brilliant

  • JenniferB replied

    Oh I missed this wonderful comment somehow, thanks so much trwoody, I love your description of my poem. :-)

  • TrishMarrs

    TrishMarrs

    OMGoodness! What a wonderful way with words you possess. Words are my all time favorite artistic venue but I do not believe I will attain the level you have presented here. No matter. I will savor these words of yours and let them slowly melt into my mind over and over again. Absolutely marvelous work, dear. Expressive, creative, descriptive, emotive. It flows so beautifully within the form. Delicious.

  • JenniferB replied

    Oh I have much more passion for words than images, I guess because with poetry and words you can interpret things as you desire and form your own imagery! Thanks so much Trish, I’ve already read one beautiful poem of yours, and I definitely intend to get around to reading many more! :-)

  • whiterabbit79

    whiterabbit79

    H-O-L-Y FUCKING SHIT!!! That was AMAZING, Awe inspiring, utterly… breathtaking. KEEP IT UP!! I will read more! BTW- You’ve got talent! And you broke my writer’s block!

  • JenniferB replied

    Ooh, sorry I missed your comment whitrabbit! Love your passion and enthusiasm! Lol… Now I need a cure for my writer’s block! haha!

  • Christie  Moses

    Christie Moses

    Wooooo that is HOT stuff. I think I forgot to breathe all the way through. DAMN xoxo

  • JenniferB replied

    I’d had writer’s block for ages when I wrote this, it was like one final explosion! haha! I haven’t written anything since… Thanks Christie, I love your poetry too. :) xox

  • MarathonMan

    MarathonMan

    I have a dictionary in hand and the door’s locked… from the inside…!! Have never taken such pleasure from mere words….... back in 5 mins…. ok ok, 2 actually…...

  • JenniferB replied

    hahaha! You make me laugh MarathonMan, I hope you packed as much into that 2 mins as possible! ;-)

  • MarathonMan

    MarathonMan

    I didn’t even get past the ‘A’ section…. specifically…
    ‘Abuse’ : To cause damage or harm.

    It was then I hurt myself…. off to the doctor now…!!! :-)

  • JenniferB replied

    oh noooooooooo… don’t hurt yourself, all actions to and for yourself should be pleasurable! ;-)

  • MarathonMan

    MarathonMan

    No pain, No gain…!! :-)

  • Lawford

    Lawford

    What a wonderful weaving of wordy sex. A real tongue twister so to speak.

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks lawford, a little word-play every now and again can be fun! ;-)

  • aaeiinnn

    aaeiinnn

    well personally i liked the ref to finger nails - lol but each to their own huh…
    some years back at a regular poetry reading night there was a plethora of ‘fuck’ and no real talent in the order of words .. i wrote the following and it gave most of the younger folk a kick up the backside and they started to produce a greater variety of words in their poems

    the F word

    fornication
    oscilation
    rumination
    nubile nation
    isolation
    consternation
    altercation
    titillation
    implication
    on
    consideration
    the word has eleven letters
    not ten
    so
    i said to my fella
    come on
    let’s do it again

    annie

  • JenniferB replied

    ha! great poem! :-)
    I’ve never read any of my work at a poetry reading, a lot of my older work contained the word ‘fuck’, but I dont believe it’s gratitious or anything as it was said in context of the feeling and content of the poetry, well a couple of editors published it here in NZ, so it couldn’t have been that bad. :)

  • aaeiinnn

    aaeiinnn

    it’s not an offensive word in itself but over used by some people
    the word ‘nice’ is similarly done to death
    sure there are others – but what/which?

  • JenniferB replied

    probably more noticeable over the internet because ‘words’ are all we have to communicate with, sometimes I just couldn’t give a shit about being articulate or searching for a thesaurus inside of my head.

  • PeteStreet

    PeteStreet

    You had me at the title.

  • JenniferB replied

    mmmm…. I wish…. ;-P

  • ieneke  jansen

    ieneke jansen

    Ahhhhhh….ahem (clears her throat) totally speechless!!!
    May I say Miss Jennifer that I do believe that there is nothing that you are not capable of!!!
    People dream about being able to write like you do…keep it up > in any format on any subject. It don’t matter girl :P
    WOW

  • JenniferB replied

    I couldn’t think of anything else to write about! ;-)
    thanks ieneke.

  • Jason  Sinner

    Jason Sinner

    :0 heeeeeelllllllooooooo oh my dear damn.

  • JenniferB replied

    haha! I hope that response was one of pleasure and not one of pain… or maybe a little of each, whatever the case may be? :)

  • Jason  Sinner

    Jason Sinner

    Pleasure my dear…. awsomely sensual write…..need water now so much water…cold cold
    water.

  • JenniferB replied

    you make water sound stimYOUlating… ;-)

  • nickowen

    nickowen

    not sure about being fucked but I am totally seduced

    a poet
    a real poet

  • JenniferB replied

    thanks nickowen, I need to find my voice for words again some time, writing is a great ‘release’... pun intended! ;-)

  • Trenchtownrock

    Trenchtownrock 19 days ago

    Tremendous write.

  • JenniferB replied 19 days ago

    Thanks Trenchtownrock. I hid this one at the back because it was attracting too many pervs! haha! Oh! Not that you’re a perv or anything! :)

  • Trenchtownrock

    Trenchtownrock 19 days ago

    Well, I just dug the writing….one love.

  • JenniferB replied 19 days ago

    thanks for that. :-)

  • ianez

    ianez 19 days ago

    well now. how do i follow all those comments?!! lets see….... i’ve been fucked with words before, i know exactly how you feel. my lascivious pen sometimes liberates me jen. thank you for this one! i love it.

  • JenniferB replied 19 days ago

    words can take you to the dizzy heights of breathless exctasy, or plunge you down into the darkest of bottomleess pits… the power in the written form of expression is so often underestimated. ;-)

  • JenniferB replied 19 days ago

    excuse the crap spelling… my fingers are sticky… ;-P

  • wildwomenlove

    wildwomenlove 19 days ago

    man this is so cool. so many horny people in the same room. this is an orgy! loving it…
    wow this poem is amazing, long, slow, deliberate, HOT, HEAVY, SATIATED, this is one DELIBERATE, PREMEDITATED FUCK. no wonder you haven’t written since, you’re exhausted! I love it, the whole thing from conception, title, to ending. you’ll be back, there’s too much in these words for you to lay sleeping. you’ll be back. and I’ll be waiting. big love x

  • wildwomenlove

    wildwomenlove 19 days ago

    PS thanks for bilingual, it is fantastic x

  • JenniferB replied 19 days ago

    hahaha! thanks wildwomenlove, yep, redbubble is an orgy of restrained, explosive energy just waiting to blow… ;-)

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest 9 days ago

    Loved this Jen…clever and hitting my writers spot just perfectly!!
    Bring on all those slow and then deeper,faster verbs and delishkiss, juicy ,wet adjectives….I am now yearning for a full frontal dissertation to really complete the joy of some probing prose ….. ;o)

  • JenniferB replied 9 days ago

    Ah… a little light, lusty fun with words and the English Language, I’ve never tried to write anything since this piece, so maybe I wore myself out with it! :-)

  • Mick Yates

    Mick Yates 5 days ago

    I love this – creative, sexy, with a purpose ..

  • JenniferB replied 5 days ago

    Awww thanks so much Mick, and thanks for buying my poetry book! Unfortunately this poem isn’t in it, but I’m planning of writing a book of erotic poetry, and when I do, I’ll sign a copy and send you the first one as a gift. :)

  • Michael Scholl

    Michael Scholl 3 days ago

    Again!!! AGAIN!!!!
    Wonderful!

  • JenniferB replied 3 days ago

    haha! I’m not sure if this one completely wore me out or not, though I’d love to go for a multiple… ;-)
    Thanks Michael.

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