My Cathedral, My Addiction

JenLand
Author: JenLand
Word Count: 117
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My Cathedral, My Addiction

Ode to mountains, clean air, endorphins…........ :o)

These mountains are my cathedral

God is in the sky

Goddess is in the ground

Spirit speaks to me in the trickling streams and roaring rivers

And the thorns on the thistles that cut my skin

The sisters are my counsel

These aspen trees that listen to my fears

My pain and torment

They clear my head, balance my emotions

And the answers come

The air they clean is my elixir

Transforming poisons and toxins within and without

Pushing my body in these elements

To sweat and pant, run and slide

Makes me high

I sparkle like snowflakes in the sunshine

Endorphins are my drug, my addiction

My balancing chemicals

I cannot truly live without these things

  • aspectsoftmk

    aspectsoftmk

    the smokies are my backyard and playground…i feel your words…beautifully written…:)

  • JenLand replied

    Thanks! You do understand don’t you?! One needs the soothing balm of nature, often. :o)

  • Judi Taylor

    Judi Taylor

    You are on fire, girl!!! WOW! This is thrilling.

  • JenLand replied

    Why thank you Judi! Hmmmm, I wonder why I’m so creative lately? ;o)

  • Von McKnelly

    Von McKnelly

    The wind is the breath of mountains and you have heard it’s whispers in these words.

  • JenLand replied

    Thank you Von! Very nice way to put it…... :o)

  • H M Bascom

    H M Bascom

    What a beautiful poem!

  • JenLand replied

    Thank you very much Helen! It means a lot coming from a fine writer such as yourself! :o)

  • syd baker

    syd baker

    Ohhh, how absolutely true, I’ve felt especially that higher and higher altitudes place you closer to God, ever since my first intro to the Rockies and ever since!!

  • JenLand replied

    I’m glad this resonates with you Syd – let’s all get high!! In the Rockies that is!! :o)

  • Scott Bricker

    Scott Bricker

    extraordinarily beautiful and intimately insightful, Jen…just received the print of ‘Eight Miles High” today (and the rest!) (beautiful!); now I have this amazing piece…now all I need is…....;)
    wish I was there…..

  • JenLand replied

    Awww! Glad you like it all!!

  • Scott Bricker

    Scott Bricker

    “I sparkle like snowflakes in the sunshine”...
    mmmm…yes…

  • JenLand replied

    :o)

  • john sunderland

    john sunderland

    Takes us there. Thank-you.

  • JenLand replied

    You are welcome and thank you!!

  • Jordan Busson

    Jordan Busson

    Incredible writing. What a beautiful ode to the natural world. I can entirely relate to this beautifully written piece.

  • JenLand replied

    Thank you very much! I’ve taken a quick look at your portfolio and am very intrigued…...can’t wait to have time to look more deeply into your wonderful work!

  • Mark Ramstead

    Mark Ramstead

    I just posted Cathedral Spires… ; )

  • JenLand replied

    Heh heh, very cool Mark! Thanks for stopping by. :o)

  • JenLand replied

    I suspect you know about my ‘addiction’. :o)

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