I am liquid
soft and malleable
fully encompassing
every part of you
even that
which is hidden
you are stone
solid and strong
resilient
against my assault
your words
and your passion
entice my own
each flowing
like a river
amongst the
bed of rocks
you lay before me
allowing my current
to play among
those places
deep
beneath the surface
in pools of lust
we will bask
in torrents of bliss
we will drown
and together
we will be
the perfect
combination
The Perfect Combination
Sometimes, even things that seem to have nothing in common, can work well together.
deliriousgirl, 3 months ago
in pools of lust
we will bask
in torrents of bliss
we will drown
OH JFC! I’mmmmm mellllting again!!!!!!!!!
jcmontgomery in reply to deliriousgirl’s comment, 3 months ago
Into a pool of lust?? Hmm….better not waste a drop of that stuff…its as precious as gold ya know!
Gayla Drummond, 3 months ago
I’ll be back. Going for a cold shower. Ahem. =)
jcmontgomery in reply to Gayla Drummond’s comment, 3 months ago
I guess people like poems about…uh…rivers. Hmmm. LOL
barnsy, 3 months ago
well done jc! really good again!
jcmontgomery in reply to barnsy’s comment, 3 months ago
Thanks hon. xox
JenniferB, 3 months ago
soft, creamy, dreamy, flowing, orgasmic…
gotta love those contrasts! ;-)
jcmontgomery in reply to JenniferB’s comment, 3 months ago
Hmmm…oh yeah….hard and soft, fast and slow, wet and dr..uh…hmm…no, not that one…at least never with me….wink!!
Paul Rees-Jones, 3 months ago
Yes rivers are wonderful…the powerful thrusts of water on to the hard stone. Pounding and pounding and pounding until….oh NVM.
jcmontgomery in reply to Paul Rees-Jones’s comment, 3 months ago
I guess you make a lot of trips to Niagra Falls, huh? Not far from Toronto as you know. I loved it when I was there. Spent hours and hours watching the water pour over the edge only to crash continually upon the hardness below.
I guess that explains all those honeymooners…..
Paul Rees-Jones, 3 months ago
Actually i am only an hour from Niagra…which means i am nice and close to wine tours…Hee hee
jcmontgomery, 3 months ago
Oh yeah…I nearly forgot about that. I stopped at some of them on the way up from Toronto. I was impressed. Just think, if I ever come visit, you can get me drunk and take me to the river…uh falls…uh…oh dear
Timothy Goodwin, 3 months ago
Very passionate!! Exemplary work!! ^V~
jcmontgomery in reply to Timothy Goodwin’s comment, 3 months ago
[hugs] Thanks Tim.
Talkingwatermelon, 3 months ago
Pretty words and images. It flows like a river – warm and wet. It also draws an unspoken metaphor – when water freezes, stone shatters. Hell hath no fury…
WanderingAuthor, 3 months ago
Yes, a cold shower is required after reading this. :-)
jcmontgomery in reply to Talkingwatermelon’s comment, 3 months ago
like water scorned? Always a unique, but accurate point of view.
I like the fact you can picture a warm river. Where I live, it is primarily run off from the mountains feeding our valley and Lake Tahoe. Cold doesn’t begin to describe it. Needless to say, the stones around here are usually prepared for the onslaught…usually….LOL
jcmontgomery in reply to WanderingAuthor’s comment, 3 months ago
A lovely compliment. I’ll start the fire to make sure you have something to re-warm yourself when you return. Oh my, will that defeat the purpose? So sorry….
LittleHelen, 3 months ago
Oooh JC…this is really quite wonderful! Very well versed ;)
jcmontgomery in reply to LittleHelen’s comment, 3 months ago
Thank You Helen. Muah!
Yasemin Sumner, 3 months ago
This really does flow in the most wonderful sensual way.
slickjesus, 3 months ago
wet, flowery, like it.
jcmontgomery in reply to Yasemin Sumner’s comment, 3 months ago
I live near a beautiful river and hike by it a few times a week. Sometimes I just stand on a bridge and let my mind wander along with the water. Somehow this poem came to me on one of those walks.
jcmontgomery in reply to slickjesus’s comment, 3 months ago
Thanks Slick. ‘Flowery’ and ‘Wet’. I like it. Gives me good visuals.
Nicole Ryan, 3 months ago
beautiful flow ~ so evocative !!
Miri, 3 months ago
oh JC, just sensuously wonderful, great imagery
jcmontgomery in reply to Nicole Ryan’s comment, 3 months ago
I love water. I do. Rivers, lakes…I guess that comes from being born and raised next to the ocean. It just brings out so many emotions when I think of it…and it equates so well to..well…uh….you know.
jcmontgomery in reply to Miri’s comment, 3 months ago
Thanks Bex. ‘sensuously wonderful’ – I like that.
silverdollar, about 1 month ago
Delightful erotica, so sensual.
jcmontgomery in reply to silverdollar’s comment, about 1 month ago
I live near a river and am forever lost in thought, staring at its rapids and swirling eddies. To me, it is always a sensual experience….so I thought I would share. I am glad you like this. Thanks.
silverdollar, about 1 month ago
Interesting- I write by the Sea!