Match Met

jcmontgomery
Author: jcmontgomery
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Gaelan? I’m sensing a…..no….NO! Gaelan, get out. Get out now!

Before Gaelan could answer the room went dark. Jumping from his chair he raced around to where Devlin had been just moments before. Reaching out to grab him by the collar, Gaelan instead felt his hands go numb. It was only because of his quick reflexes that he was able to prevent them from shattering into irreparable shards.

“Damn you Katil. I needed him.”

“Ah my friend, but I needed him more.”

Several seconds passed before the emergency lights finally turned on. It was then that Gaelan got a full view of what was left of his former employer.

“Didn’t they feed you over at MercCo?”

“Not even a morsel. And let me tell you, the V.P. of Procurements looked pretty tasty.”

Katil shot quick glance around the room.

“She’s not here. She sensed you coming.”

“I guessed as much. Oh, she’s a clever one. And quite the looker I hear. I had hoped she wouldn’t make this easy. Hmm, all the better, as I really do enjoy the hunt as much as the capture.”

“Then why…”

Gaelan’s peripheral vision began narrowing. The room grew dark again, but this time more slowly. Looking at the emergency lights, Gaelan realized that they were not dimming as much as they were being absorbed. As the shadows began to encompass his mind, Gaelan felt a coldness sweep over him causing him to shiver involuntarily. He couldn’t think. Slumping into a nearby chair he struggled to maintain consciousness.

Gaelan? Gaelan. Answer me!

“Answer her Gaelan. Call her to you. Trust me when I say that you two are worth more alive than dead. Call her Gaelan. Don’t make me hunt her down. If you do, I promise, I will terminate you both.”

“Not so fast Katil. I’m sure whatever they’ve offered you is not enough. Especially for a man of your unique talents.”

Esmi, no!

“How would you know little one, and what makes you think there is anything you have that I could possibly value more than my own life.”

So. They know his weakness. That explains it.

Explains what exactly?

Why they couldn’t turn him. He’d already done that himself. But they have something else – something worth more to him than his oath.

Stepping out into the light, Esmirée revealed herself and what she had to offer. Even Gaelan’s breath was taken away by her presence. Looking into Katil’s eyes he saw a glimmer of hope, as well as a few other emotions he’d rather be left unaware of, considering it was his own sister causing them.

Warmth slowly crept back into Gaelan’s body. But his mind was still numb. He found it difficult to maintain contact with Esmirée as well as read the Shade assassin standing before her.

“Release him Katil. I… we ...need his abilities, especially if we are to succeed.”

“I haven’t yet agreed to this ‘plan’ of yours. Besides, what stops me from taking what I want, and still collecting payment?”

The hunger in Katil’s eyes was overwhelming. It was all Esmirée could do to control her own emotions and keep her mind still long enough to reason with a Shadow wraith on the brink of frenzy. Looking over to Gaelan, she noticed color returning to his cheeks.

Now’s our chance. Whatever happens, follow along. Our lives depend upon Katil believing every word I say.

“I know about Kupani.”

Hunger instantly turned to pain as Katil looked away trying to hide his eyes, but it was too late, Esmirée saw her arrow had hit its mark.

“What…what do you know? What can you know?”

“I know you are like ones and that she was taken less than a week before you were. It’s obvious why you decided to accept the contract, as well as your enslavement. Since both of you are forged from the same shard, her termination means your own.”

Gaelan starred at his sister, struggling not to register his shock at this revelation; it was all he could do to control his emotions. Usually he was able to block his mind at will, but Katil had not fully released him, so it remained weak, making it impossible to keep him from maintaining a wall between him and a very unstable Shade assassin.

“Release Gaelan and join with us. Together we can free her – and you – from bondage.”

Sensing the time was right; Esmirée attempted something she had never been able to do before. Somehow, without understanding why, she knew it would work.

Katil, we are the superior beings, remember? Are we not meant to be more than these human’s puppets? We were once a proud and united race. But now, we are no more than slaves for men to abuse at will; to be tossed aside like rotting garbage when our services are no longer needed. And for what? Money? Profit? Whose? Not mine. Not yours. They say we work for the greater good, but all we are to them is some kind of weapon: only used to destroy, never to protect. I’m tired of having my strings yanked and pulled in every direction. I want my life back. And I swear to the gods that made me, I will never be anyone’s plaything ever again!

There was no way of knowing if her message had been received – or how well. It was a dangerous gamble, as it had taken most of her concentration and strength in order to reach his mind. Katil was silent in more ways than one. Neither Esmirée nor Gaelan could read him. Not until he met her gaze could she see he had made his decision. Lowering her head, she did something Gaelan thought he would never live to see. Slowly, and without ever looking up, Esmirée knelt before the Shadow wraith her hands raised, palms up, offering.

Esmi, you can’t.

It’s our only hope.

No! There has to be another way!

Trust me. I know what I’m doing.

“You know what you are offering is permanent. There is no turning back once I begin.”

Esmirée could only nod. The trembling in her hands was barely perceptible as Katil grasped them in his own. Pulling her up into his arms, He looked down upon the Soul wraith with a mixture of emotions. Never before had anyone offered themselves so willingly; not like this.

“Look at me little one, and accept your fate.”

Raising her head, she met his eyes and knew at that point, there was no turning back. Lowering his face, he hesitated briefly before touching his lips to hers. Gently, he parted them with his tongue, and waited for her submission.

They remained there, in that position, lips barely touching, their breaths becoming longer and deeper. Darkness enveloped Esmirée’s every sense. Soon, nothing existed but the power of his mind in hers. Thoughts raced, entwined, and brought about a hunger she had never experienced before. Observing from his chair, Gaelan’s face betrayed a horror he could never have imagined. Unable to look away, he watched his beloved Esmi disappear into Katil’s embrace.

The merging had begun.
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© 2008 J.C. Montgomery

Match Met

Shards of Hope: Installment 2


If you are new to the series, here is what has been posted so far:

Cairo Scene One: Tracked
Installment 1: Gone Rogue
Installment 2: Match Met
Installment 3: Like Ones
Installment 4: Revelations
Installment 5: Discovered
Final: Scene One: The Reckoning

Match Met belongs to the following groups:

A Novel Idea, Blood Red - All things vampiric and Writers' Market
  • Miri

    Miri, 2 months ago

    omg….this is soooo good…..i don’t want it to end like that!!! pretty please?!
    you’ve started something here jc LOL!

  • jcmontgomery

    jcmontgomery in reply to Miri’s comment, 2 months ago

    LOL…the end? Oh no, I promise….just the second of, geez, I have no idea. Most of this was actually written with the first installment, but I didn’t like it so I just spent the last several hours revamping a few things.

    I am soooo glad you liked it! Means I am heading in the right direction. Trust me, the revolution has only begun…muhahaha!

  • Summayyah Sadiq-Ojibara

    Summayyah Sadi..., 2 months ago

    You wicked woman! Your evil laughter in MIri’s reply managed to shake off the shudders…brrrrrr! Gosh you have indeed started a revolution here, you had better know that you can finish what you started! I read through very fast, it was like I was possessed….! i just had to finish it!

    Heeeeeelllllp Whats jc done to me?

    I was alright before I met her, now I am craving stories of revolution and species that speak into minds…. OMG!

  • Summayyah Sadiq-Ojibara

    Summayyah Sadi..., 2 months ago

    Brilliant piece, I really think you have something great happening here jc…it picks off beautifull from where you left off, its got suspense, excitement, gives you the story and then leaves you with little bits and pieces of infomation you want resolved. I also think you are bring each piece of the whole its own climax, kind of like a sci-fi/fantasy/horror serial or novel with chapters…I could go on…

  • jcmontgomery

    jcmontgomery in reply to Summayyah Sadiq-Ojibara’s comment, 2 months ago

    Hey! It’s all Paul’s fault….he’s the one who challenged me to look into my ‘darker’ side.

    Don’t worry, its a good revolution. It will be to free those enslaved because of fear and greed. Its just that those to be freed are themselved feared and seen as evil. Sigh Such is modern life…not so much good vs. evil, as having to choose between the lesser of two evils…or at least that is my take.

    Don’t worry Summayyah, as you can see from my recently posted poetry, the “White” JC is still stronger than the “Black” JC….for now…hehe

    So glad to see you. My heart dances with joy.

  • jcmontgomery

    jcmontgomery in reply to Summayyah Sadiq-Ojibara’s comment, 2 months ago

    I have always liked chapters to be like stories all their own, except the endings of each would have a cliff hanger so that you could hardly wait to start the next one to see what happened. Gee, I guess I just described a serial huh? Oh silly me!

    I’m kind of excited. Thanks Summayyah…you are just the boost I need…as always and ever, you make good points, thank you.

  • Summayyah Sadiq-Ojibara

    Summayyah Sadi..., 2 months ago

    That is a relief to hear…that white JC is very much around…wouldn’t like to be in the same room with the other half…:)

    seriously though jc I started following this story out of curiousity, love and respect for your work, now I am drawn inspite of myself and very powerfully too by the unusual storyline, skill and style and there is a moral ultimately even if its a case of choosing the lesser of two evils….look forward to the next chapter/episode

    just remember when your name appears in the lights to sqeeze one summayyah’s name in somewhere!

  • Summayyah Sadiq-Ojibara

    Summayyah Sadi..., 2 months ago

    Go ahead, enjoy it, get excited, if you are writing such brilliant piece with a calm mind, we better prepare for an explosion in RB when the juices get pumping…

  • sssshuknowwho

    sssshuknowwho, 2 months ago

    Oh wow! I can only add to what is said before. This is just great! :-)

  • Louise Kuskovski

    Louise Kuskovski, 2 months ago

    JC,

    This is a very exciting piece. It carries a lot of energy with it and keeps the reader attached. Even so, I got a bit muddled with the characters. Perhaps because I haven’t read previous entries for this work. Also, when the point of view switched, I lost my bearing as a reader. Though I continued to be swept away with the pacing of the story, I wasn’t always sure who was who/what was happening. This may or may not be an issue for you, it is something I have experienced with this genre in the past…so it could very easily just be me…

    Louise

  • Gayla Drummond

    Gayla Drummond, 2 months ago

    You’re doing awesomely with this, JC! I want more details about the merging thing, and definitely a part three ASAP! =)

  • jcmontgomery

    jcmontgomery in reply to Louise Kuskovski’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thanks Louise – great comments!!! And very helpful, that is why love the Bubble. Yes, POV is becoming my bete noir here. But somehow it limits what I can convey. Thus I really have to work out my dialog and transitions so that the reader doesn’t get lost. Since these are basically “first drafts”, I hope to get these issues resolved when I go back over and fine tune.

    I don’t write in a linear fashion, hence the reader being introduced to a character who hasn’t been ‘properly introduced’ and explained. Future installments will/should provide a backstory and help with that.

    Truth be told, this is a genre that is fairly new to me too. As you can see from the majority of my writings, I am a poet and an observer of life, and at times a bit of a philosopher.

    But I wanted to expand and stretch my abilities and have fun in the process. I want to explore and see what is lurking in the dark corners of the storyteller that has apparently taken residence in my mind.

    I value comments such as yours, truly. None of us can grow and learn without this kind of feedback.

  • jcmontgomery

    jcmontgomery in reply to Gayla Drummond’s comment, 2 months ago

    Hmmm, details about the merging thing. As you can see the mechanics are rather, uh, hot. But actually the concept is not complicated, but involved. To keep this comment section short, I will Bmail you with some info to show you how whacked out I’ve really gotten over this, as every single time I talk about the damn thing, I go off on these tangents…I swear, I’m possessed!!!

    Well, well, looks like I have another installment to come up with – and a name for all this. Oh man, a name. I hate that part.

    Oh damn. I need an intervention…that’s all there is to it…

  • WoodyWood

    WoodyWood, 2 months ago

    Very cool.

  • jcmontgomery

    jcmontgomery in reply to WoodyWood’s comment, 2 months ago

    I’m glad you like it.

  • WanderingAuthor

    WanderingAuthor, 13 days ago

    This is excellent and compelling.

  • jcmontgomery

    jcmontgomery in reply to WanderingAuthor’s comment, 13 days ago

    Thanks!

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