What You Are

Sandra Smith, 7 months ago

Beautiful words!!!

Wendy Stivers, 7 months ago

Love this.

kdhorn, 7 months ago

Awesome, great feeling!

Jboo09 in reply to Wendy Stivers’s comment, 7 months ago

thank you for loving it :)

Ben Ruskin, 7 months ago

“You’re a book of a thousand pages
over every word I’ll pour
until at night I drift to sleep
but wake up needing more”

enough said..i absolutely loved this, it flows so well..

Jboo09, 7 months ago

So glad you like it! Thanks for reading and commenting on my work, I really appreciate it!

Jboo09 in reply to Ben Ruskin’s comment, 7 months ago

meant to hit reply to your comment Ben, the message above is to you!

Rella, 7 months ago

You are really talented! No need to talk yourself down on your profile page…...I love how this ends with the ‘trap’ verse, it’s such an effective conclusion :)

Jboo09 in reply to Rella’s comment, 7 months ago

Well thank you very much for the encouragement, and I’m glad you like the ending :)

Shanna S., 7 months ago

This poem is great. I love the form and it flows together so nicely. Don’t ever underestimate your creativity you have great potential. You are a very talented writer and I enjoyed this poem.

Jboo09 in reply to Shanna S.’s comment, 7 months ago

Well thank you so much! the compliment really means a lot to me, thank you for reading and commenting!

coffeetea, 7 months ago

without note, it is still a seeping song!

Jboo09 in reply to coffeetea’s comment, 7 months ago

thank you very much for reading this… it’s my favorite thing I’ve ever written and it means a lot to me that other people love it!

MicahKB, 7 months ago

Now this is awesome, Jboo09.

Excellent read. Sweet stuff.

girlinthestars, 7 months ago

so powerful – so very lovely~*

tonilouise, 7 months ago

You write with such beauty..Adore your words…

Jboo09 in reply to tonilouise’s comment, 7 months ago

Thanks so much, I appreciate the encouragment!

J.K. York, 7 months ago

“I may be the ship that sunk deep on your ocean floor” is fantastic. love the personification of the ocean. a perennial force of nature in a person. well done.

Jboo09 in reply to J.K. York’s comment, 7 months ago

Thank you so much!! That’s my favorite line too :)

Symmetry44, 7 months ago

Excellent poem pretty lady.

botticcelli, 7 months ago

wonderful poem….powerful

Jboo09 in reply to botticcelli’s comment, 6 months ago

thanks for reading, glad you think so :)

normajean, 6 months ago

I had to read this through a haze of tears welling up. I don’t know why, maybe because we are sisters your words make so much sense.

amarica, 6 months ago

And it is often a trap, but sweet and luscious to the soul, the mind the inner recesses of the mind. And when it is over it tears the soul asunder and leaves the pouring rain to drench your spirit until you love again.

lolowe, 6 months ago

Oh wow, your rhymes are beautiful and well written.

Jboo09 in reply to lolowe’s comment, 6 months ago

Thank you so much!!! Appreciate the read and comments!!! ;)

greeneyedlady, 5 months ago

“I may be the ship that sunk deep on your ocean floor…” beautiful! This one resonates with me because I’ve felt this way and you have put it into such perfect words. I’m favoriting this one!

lianne, 5 months ago

Jenni – once again you have outdone yourself – the flow of this piece coupled with its deep longing and sensitivity is just simply beautiful. Such talent is rare – I prize just knowing you!

Jacqueline Bar..., 5 months ago

very beautiful words.

stephfine, 4 months ago

You are awesome with your words! well done!

April Mansilla, 4 months ago

wow such beauty and flow in your words!