You astonish me
Tug on my loose ends and you
Unravel me
How I breathed without you once
Simply perplexes me
And I am terrified of you
My dear
Because I wanted you
Just as soon as our eyes met
And when you wanted me
It seemed that things were suddenly
So clear
But what I mean, you see,
When I say you terrify me
Is you have my heart
You can break it
Tear it
Make it bleed
And I will grieve
If you are not the one God made for me.
Dave Legere
Powerful piece/words. I think we’ve all felt it, and when it gets felt in return then life works.
Good job. NIce flow with a concise thought process.
d
lianne
And when you are so very sure that he is the one God meant for you and it still doesn’t work, then your grief may be palpable. Oh yes, love does so make us vulnerable, come undone and I’ve not seen that expressed any better anywhere Jenni – this is just a lovely, wonderful piece.
lolowe
Really sweet and wonderful words. I can feel the heartfelt emotion in this