The Day I Gave Up

JayW
Author: JayW
Word Count: 98
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The Day I Gave Up

You Smiled And Tore Me Apart.

The Day I Gave Up belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical

Your Always On Your Phone
You Tell Me Your True
But Yet You Leave Me All Alone

Will You Realise
Your About To Lose
Coz You Won’t Try

If You Wanted Someone Else
Why Are You Here
Leaving My By Myself

Was It Everyone Else
Who Wanted You
All By Yourself
Or Was It Another
Who Wanted You Too

You Talk About The Future
Wanting Me
But This Is Torture

This Time Tomorrow
I’ll Be Gone Forever
No More Sorrow

Tell Myself I Dont Miss You
And Feel So Much Better
Now That Your Gone Forever

  • TheWanderingBoo

    TheWanderingBoo

    great writing

  • JayW replied

    Thanx :)

  • Snoboardnlife

    Snoboardnlife

    Wow Jay your words are very powerful

  • JayW replied

    He Cant Have Everyone I Guess :)

  • Snoboardnlife

    Snoboardnlife

    The way I look at it, if it was destiny, then it’ll happen, if not let it go, and keep searching

  • JayW replied

    So True.. The Creepy Thing Is He Has Been A Friend Of Mine For About 8 Years Up Until We Got Together… =/

  • Snoboardnlife

    Snoboardnlife

    Never hook up with good friends! It’ll kill the friendship

  • JayW replied

    Yea I Thought About That… Even Talked It Through With Him. And He Said That He Liked Me When He First Met Me (I Liked Him Too) And Now He’s Talking About Me Movng In With Him And How He Wants to Marry Me… Its So Confusing

  • Snoboardnlife

    Snoboardnlife

    Oh so your still together. Well my GF and I, knew oneanother for 2 years when we first hooked up. Same situation, except I don’t play games, the day after we kissed, I opened my eyes, and called her immediately, then a few weeks later I told her I wasn’t interested in seeing anyone else!

  • lazydaze

    lazydaze

    kick him 2 tha curb baby….nice writing :)

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