My Heart sees Colour

Jaybe
Author: Jaybe
Word Count: 90
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My Heart sees Colour

For many, many years I had very little colour in my life. Even my wardrobe was a sad mix of black, blue, white and grey…....lol
Colour is cool….....I like it…......

My Heart sees Colour belongs to the following groups:

! ♥♥All About Hearts♥♥ !, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical and Live, Love, Dream:

A thousand yellow butterflies fluttering simultaneously in the pit of my stomach…...
An ocean of poppies in a field of red, raising their faces to the midday sun….....
A rainbow arching through fluffy clouds in a sky soooo blue…......
A raging ocean with waves crashing onto a golden beach…...
A forest full of evergreens, tall and strong…....
A moon shining bright amongst the white, twinkling stars….....
A sunset that sets the night on fire, turning the sky a deep shade of orange…...

My heart sees colours – the colours of you…......

  • butchart

    butchart

    clour is VERY cool….. and it looks damn good on you my friend….. keep shining….......... peace and light…........b

  • Jaybe replied

    Aaawww I was in a sloppy mood….....thankyou…..

  • aspectsoftmk

    aspectsoftmk

    when i read these words…...over and again and again….they bring a peaceful easy feeling and a smile that is not silent…..what a beautiful feeling….strong writing…i love this….

  • Jaybe replied

    Peaceful, easy feeling….hmm….there’s a song about that – I just know there is….I’ll find it…..lol
    Oh, and thankyou…....

  • Jaybe replied

    The Eagles…lol…knew I’d find it…..

  • carolinewood

    carolinewood

    colour is good, i need to use it more in my art – paint it or wear it! nice lil poem : )

  • Jaybe replied

    Me too – thanks hun. ;-)

  • dogpriest

    dogpriest

    very nice jaybe, have you gone all soft again! lol

    dogpriest

  • Jaybe replied

    Lol – it’s always there…...

  • dogpriest

    dogpriest

    Reputation!! god we’re failing this!!lol ; )

    dogpriest

  • deliriousgirl

    deliriousgirl

    My heart sees colours – the colours of you……...

    Ohhhh so damn beautiful it makes my heart want to cry!!!

  • Jaybe replied

    LOL – bless…...;-)

  • linaji

    linaji

    You are rolling in the words from the heart.. just beautiful

  • Jaybe replied

    Why thankyou…...

  • Jan Landers

    Jan Landers

    color is life to me….love how you created a brilliant visual with words, my friend…..

  • Jaybe replied

    Thanks Jan ;-)

  • Maureen Bloesch

    Maureen Bloesch

    WOW, how cool is that:>))

  • Jaybe replied

    Thankyou Maureen ;-)

  • dimarie

    dimarie

    sorry hon i missed this one….
    i feel like i can relate to this so much, for years my darkness was accompanied by a black wardrobe lol, but when i met my soul mate, he filled my world with colour, and it started filtering down to my being and these days i am quite colourful!
    its amazing what the heart can see.
    love your writing btw, you have great style!

  • Jaybe replied

    I’m actually wearing a dusky red t-shirt today…..says it all…..
    ;-)

  • dimarie

    dimarie

    today? well i have bright green socks on…does that count? lol..

  • Jaybe replied

    absolutely…

  • trish b

    trish b

    beautiful Jaybe – getting the world focussed in colour can be such a challenge, well done and thank you

  • Jaybe replied

    Thank YOU…and nice to see you back…;-)

  • Debbie Sandersfeld

    Debbie Sanders...

    Congratulations on the feature in All About Hearts

  • Jaybe replied

    Thanks so much Debbie…..that verse is quite special for me so this is a great honour. x

  • Debbie Sandersfeld

    Debbie Sanders...

    Featured Work in “All About Hearts”

  • Corina Daniela Obertas

    Corina Daniela...

    Beautiful poem! Congratulations on being featured in All About Hearts group!

  • autumnwind

    autumnwind

    Incredible imagery of feeling with a surprisingly beautiful last line. New to the site, nice to meet you, Shar

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