Missing You....Not
We all have a distant past….fortunately this is now part of mine.
Missing You....Not belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, PhilosophicalSimple things remind me of you, each and every day.
I try so hard to forget your face but in my mind it stays.
A vision of you standing next to me,
I can feel your presence but I can’t see.
My mind is scarred by the very words you said,
Conversations tattooed inside my head.
The feeling of your hands still touching my skin.
The heart you captured and fought to win.
The vision of power that you held over me.
The presence of control that stopped me being free.
The words that hurt and caused so much misery.
The ‘conversations’ that were the death of me.
The feeling of threat that hovered all around me.
The heart that wasn’t able to rescue me.
You stifled my creativity, crushed my humour.
The ‘really nice person’ was merely a vicious rumour.
My self-esteem left rotting on the floor,
And still you demanded more….
My mind escaped on a holiday somewhere.
Packed all of it’s memories, worries and cares.
Flew off on a plane to god knows where.
Left me alone, naked and bare.
And then it returned, wholesome and rich.
Determined to rid me of this control freak bitch.
Took me away to a place where I could be
Creative, complete, happy and FREE.
Clinton Tyree KM@
Good for you!
:-)
Jaybe replied
Indeed….this vent was very therapeutic. lol
Abeona
wow
Jaybe replied
;-)
bamagirl38
Awesome!!!!!!!!! I love reading your writing !!! :)
Bonita
Jaybe replied
Thanks Bonita. That’s nice to know, honestly. ;-)
Ed Moore
Very well written…good job!
Jaybe replied
Thanks Ed – this one makes me smile…I’m at peace. ;-)
Ed Moore
Good for you, Jaybe. I’m glad you escaped. So now, let the sun light your trail to more excellent adventures. And remember that any long journey starts with a single step, and then another, and so on.
Jaybe replied
I’ve taken quite a few steps Ed but I’m still travelling. Thankyou my friend.
Tom Broderick IPA
very cool bitch was a good word. tom
Jaybe replied
Ha. I could think of worse.
Anthony R. Pla...
So glad you’re free. Here’s to freedom and happiness :)
Jaybe replied
I raise a glass to that my friend. Thankyou.
aspectsoftmk
your words touch the my core…i love the way you use words…and venting ..yes feels so good….
Jaybe replied
Thanks Terri. We all need to vent sometimes….;-)
Judylee
I hear your pain… great description!
Jaybe replied
Thankyou…
Jan Landers
feel better now??? :-) so glad you moved on from that space and that person, jaybe…good for you!!!
Jaybe replied
I do feel better now, but you’ll see that for yourself. lol
Christopher Bi...
very powerful
Jaybe replied
It could have been worse, I tamed it down a little. lol
hills121
So proud of you in everything you do,well done keep up the good work.
Christopher Bi...
i would love to read the not tamed down version, more fire the better I say.
Jaybe replied
Come back tomorrow night, I’ll do it.
Christopher Bi...
great~ i really look forward to it.
Karen Cougan
wonderful writing there, lots of people will relate, well done
xkc
Jaybe replied
Thankyou Karen
Care
I can relate to this so much…I’ve just stopped crying…and fortunately for me too…it’s in the past…now
Jaybe replied
Well done for getting where you are today Care….thanks for reading
Rheenie
Wow I know how you feel. amazingly written
Jaybe replied
Thanks Rheenie