100 Caramel Apples

jastoffer
Author: jastoffer
Word Count: 365
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100 Caramel Apples

Do you believe in ghosts?

100 Caramel Apples belongs to the following groups:

Short stories - Spherical Scriptings

We were sitting out on the front porch in the swinging chair I forced you to buy last summer. You hated it at first, but now it was you who suggested we sit outside and dole out candy to the town’s children instead of sitting inside and waiting for the doorbell to ring.
This year’s special prize from the Mortimer family: homemade caramel apples that took me almost a lifetime to prepare. Our quota for children is usually only 50, in a good night, but you told me to make “100, just in case”; just in case you got into them before tonight.
And so we sit on the swing waiting for the children to make the long walk up to our old Victorian. We sit and watch and listen to the sounds of the laughter, the screaming (more in delight than actual fear) and we see the bobbing of flashlights as reluctant parents or big siblings take their innocent ghost-believing brood to reap the rewards for dressing up as a witch, vampire, or ghoul.
You put your arm around me and we snuggle under our blanket, it’s cold outside but the warmth of us together on the swing is warmer than any radiator in any house. A sigh of contentment escapes my lips as we watch and listen to tonight’s festivities.
We’ve been married for over 60 years. For over half a century we’ve been giving the town’s children candy. For over half a century we’ve heard the phrase of “trick or treat!” on our porch, we’ve seen the little ghoulies and have given their greedy little hands a treat or two.
But this year no one comes. And we sit and wait, but no one comes.
If you were a child looking up at our old Victorian, where you see darkness in the windows, we see lights, where you see the door boarded up, we see the open and inviting entrance to our home. Where you see the broken down swing hanging from only one of it’s chains, there we sit, on the swing that we bought only last summer, snuggling for warmth with a basket of one hundred caramel apples.

  • Empress

    Empress

    Awwwwww.

  • Damian

    Damian

    Yes, I’ll second Kate’s Awww :)
    Nicely done, I liked the way you went with this.

  • ChainmailChick

    ChainmailChick

    I third that Awww. Lovely.

  • Enivea

    Enivea

    This took my breath away….......!

  • jastoffer

    jastoffer

    wow guys,

    you all have no idea how much it means to me to get such rave reviews

    this is the topper to my day!

  • Banalheed

    Banalheed

    Can’t argue with this as a the winning choice. Certainly got a chilling “ahh” factor indeed.

  • nancyames

    nancyames

    And the prize for the very sweetest ghosts goes to you… a really memorableand excellent story.

  • Kelsey Williams

    Kelsey Williams

    I fourth that awww!! So sweet, so sad, so smooth.

  • Amacintyre

    Amacintyre

    I agree so sweet so sad. congrats

  • bellmusker

    bellmusker

    From the title to the very last line, this is beautiful and evocative….congrats on the win, it’s very well deserved.

  • ToxtethOGrady

    ToxtethOGrady

    great little read – very sad & touching

  • Miri

    Miri

    i’ll have to give you another awww ;)
    lovely story, sad but beautifully done

  • gypsycaster

    gypsycaster

    Sniff sniff…man. That’s good.

  • xxfaithxx

    xxfaithxx

    touching and well done :)

  • Cathie Brooker

    Cathie Brooker

    Sweet & haunting.

  • Holly Ringland

    Holly Ringland

    congratulations on your big win! this was so short, sweet and perfect – you captured so much from opening to close. beautiful sentiment, well done you :)

  • Enivea

    Enivea

    Yippee!! Congrats on your win in Sugar High!!!

  • Jeannette Sheehy

    Jeannette Sheehy

    Congratulations you your Sugar High win – beautiful story!! :)

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL...

    congrats

  • jastoffer

    jastoffer

    thanks everyone

  • BuddyOne

    BuddyOne

    Well done, a talent for feeling.

  • Holly Ringland

    Holly Ringland

    i just love this… the imagery is so ripe, sugary and delicious and the chilly undercurrent is creepy… but somehow warming at the same time. great work.

  • jastoffer replied

    Well thanks very much, I try :)

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