LIFE
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CHORES TO DO
KIDS TO FEED
NOT ENOUGH MONEY
TO MAKE ENDS MEET
HER ONCE BEAUTIFUL FACE
NOW FROWNS WITH THE WORRY
FEAR , DISAPPOINTMENT
OF THE HAND LIFE HAS DEALT HER
HUSBAND LONG GONE
BUT SHE HAS HER CHILDREN
AND SHE MUST CARRY ON
THEN JUST WHEN SHE
FEELS ALL IS LOST
ONE OF HER BROOD
COMES , SNUGGLES UP
GIVES HER A GENTLE KISS
SHE LOOKS AT THIS LITTLE
GIFT FROM GOD , WHO HAS
WITH THAT SIMPLE ACT ,JUST
GIVEN HER THE WILL TO CARRY ON
REALISING, SHE IS TRULY BLESSED
AND RICH WITH THEIR LOVE.
Sally Omar
Absolutely Beautiful, Jane!!!! Love it!!! xoxoxo
janeymac replied
Thank you Sally I have noticed that things are tough for so many , but the love of a child is worth more than all the gold :) Jane xxxxxxxxx
Christie Moses
So beautiful Jane. Those little angels are a true blesssing and can bring the dark to light again. xxx
janeymac replied
I was thinking of my nieces and nephews when I wrote this as they are treasures to me ..we don’t have children …but Iam blessed to have lots of family …
I’m so pleased you like this and I know your little one is a blessing to you , thank you my sweet friend xxxx
dawndavies
beautiful jane, and so moving well done,dawnx
janeymac replied
thanks very much Dawn xx
MichaelTravis
Beautiful mind you have there janey.I so enjoy it.
MMMMMMMMMMMWA! :)
janeymac replied
Michael thank you , such a kind thing to say appreciate it veery much my friend xxxxxxxxx
franticflagwave
Very nice Jane, this seems to be the mantra for so many today. my children are grown but still no stranger to daily struggles…................Barbara
janeymac replied
thanks franticflagwave , so many do struggle and manage somehow , some just hit the wall and that is so sad ....Jane
PapasGirl
absolutely beautiful writing…been there, done that
janeymac replied
PapasGirl thank you , Jane
Michael McCasland
Beautifully felt!
janeymac replied
thank you very much Mike ! Jane
TheWanderingBoo
incredibly beautiful…it reminded me of a couple of days ago, i got home tired after a bad day at work and my 3 year old daughter came up to me and gave me a hug and said ‘Daddy I love you very much’, it put everything into perspective; children are truly a blessing
janeymac replied
That’s so beautiful Simon , I don’t have kids , but they just melt my heart with their innocent ways . thank you so much Jane
Erhan OZBIYIK
And besides all,
Love is the key,
To the new born day
With the clouds,
Dark in the sky or
Shine, through to window
Then your face,
In your bedroom,
Right your eyes;
Sleeping silent..
Besides,
Life is not lived
Before the past,
Inside of a teardrop
In an ocean…
Besides;
Life is a vision,
Simple, mean with knowledge
As much as heart,
Or blue in the sky of
Heaven,
Inside of you…
Besides,
It is the key;
Love
Of yourself,
Inside, deep, mean…
November5, 2009
Erhan OZBIYIK
Dedicated for wonderful soul JaneyMac !!
Great Hugs :)
janeymac
GREAT HUGS TO YOU ERHAN MY FRIEND ......JANE