WE BELONG
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AS THEY NEARED MY DOOR
IN EXCITED ANTICIPATION ,
I’D STAND THERE BEFORE YOU
YOU’D GATHER ME UP
IN ARMS SO STRONG AND
I’D SCREAM IN DELIGHT , AS YOU
KISSED ME EAGERLY , YOUR HAIR ,
TANTILISING , MY
SKIN SO FAIR
ALL NIGHT WE LOVED.
I LOVED YOU THEN
I LOVE YOU NOW
NO LONGER DO I HEAR YOUR
VOICE OR FOOTSTEPS
I LONG FOR YOUR EMBRACE
WHERE ARE YOU MY LOVE ?
YOU KNOW , WE BELONG
COME HOME, HOLD ME ONCE MORE !
janeymac
Trenchtownrock
The ending had me Jane…I felt the love throughout but the ending of the poem really expressed longing..good work.
janeymac replied
doesn’t the ending fit Chris ? I try to imagine these as though it were me but , I’m happily marrried and he is hear …..so I was trying to achieve building up the fun times and express feelings when one partner leaves and the one left behind only has memories of a beautiful love to hang on to ….and I think this is how I would feel but I wouldn’t giveup easily ....thanks my friend Jane
MichaelTravis
Very well done sweetheart.I like your writing very much.Keep it up hon.
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMWA! LUV YA! :)
janeymac replied
luv ya too !!! :)) Iam so honoured that you like my work thank you so much Michael xxxxxxxxxx
MichaelTravis
OOOOOPS! Great title also. XXX :)
janeymac replied
:)) ta xxxxxxxxx
naturelover
Beautiful writing once again Jane- always enjoyable!! x
janeymac replied
so glad you like it Pauline and enjoy it thank you :))
Matt Roberts
Good.
janeymac replied
many thanks Matt :)
dawndavies
fabulous!!!
janeymac replied
thanks Dawn xx
Shoaib .
nice work janey :)))
janeymac replied
Shoaib thank you my friend xx
Sally Omar
Absolutely Awesome!!!!!!!!! xoxoxoxo
janeymac replied
Sally thank you so much hugs Jane xx
warmsoul
Beautiful writing
janeymac replied
many thanks warmsoul :))
Michael McCasland
Janey, this is so beautiful written. Excellent work!
janeymac replied
Michael thank you so much !!!! Iam really glad you like it and great to hear from you :)) Jane
TheWanderingBoo
incredibly beautiful
janeymac replied
thanks very much :)
Jason Sinner 28 days ago
so very lovely and moving, makes me smile :)
janeymac replied 27 days ago
thank you Jason , so happy you like it :)
Jane
Jason Sinner 28 days ago
sorry wasn’t done… makes me sad too you need a hug (hug)
janeymac replied 27 days ago
aww thanks you are a sweetheart Jason :) your hug is appreciated my friend .......Jane :)