HIM
all relationships have problems that we need to work on , nurture them , the good times far outweigh the bad .
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SHE GOES OVER AND OVER
WHAT JUST HAPPENED
CHEEKS STILL DAMP
FROM THE BITTER TEARS SHE
SHED THIS DAY FOR HIM
WORDS THAT CUT LIKE A KNIFE
DEEP INTO HER GENTLE HEART
MISERABLE NOW , IS SHE
YET ..SHE FORGIVES AND
HAS NOTHING BUT LOVE FOR HIM
AS SHE THINKS OF HIM AND
SMILES
janeymac
jillijude1
beautiful angle HUGs xxxx
janeymac replied
thanks Jilli ......hugs jane xxxx
Horndog
Another great piece of writing.
janeymac replied
thanks so much , appreciate your comment Horndog !
Trenchtownrock
The title say a whole to me..the absorbing of this person in the life of the speaker…this is also shown with how quickly forgiveness comes eventhough the hurt may linger.
janeymac replied
thank you so much Chris that is what Iam trying to get across, we argued , and things get said inthe heat of the moment…but you know that this person , would never set out intentionally to hurt , and our friendship is such that we talked it through , eventually ....can’t give up on him because of silly misunderstanding …our friendship is too precious …..Jane :)
raymondoantonio
AND HOPEFULLY HE’LL WRITE SOMETHING WONDERFUL FOR YOU JANEY!!! X
janeymac replied
thanks Ray , he’s fine all is ok cheers Jane x
gerrardt
whoever it is, he is lucky to have you as a ‘friend’ as I think you’re a great person (from what i know)..but anyway—great poem. Have a great weekend and Halloween.
janeymac replied
thanks Jim , you’re not so bad yourself (from what I know) :)
my friend and I ,are both lucky to have one another , this will pass . silly misunderstanding :))
YES HALLOWEEN !!!!!!!!!! love it have a good one ! Jane x