Real

Just no need to speak
When two kindred flames do meet
Not too late for love
When it is finally real
Words could never be enough

I have walked with you in hallucinogenic strawberry fields in the sacred summer seasons blowing kisses in silent agreement. You have stood with me amongst the cold ruins and traced my angry palms, comforting me and pressing my fingerprints deep into your warm heart and I have become young again, glowing with want and renewed in appeal. Our dreams have boldly cancelled old debts as we speak newness into being in our own silent love language.

Your purple roses
Have brightly enchanted me
Scented seduction
I finger the pearls you wrote
Those sacred words of deep soul

I have followed the petals of the purple roses that lie on the ground where you have been. I stand enchanted at what your hand has created and seduced by the pearls that have arced through the hushed air one by one and landed in an intricately laced book of sacred soul words. I long for the head that will lie dreamily close to mine, lips upon my neck, as we drift into sleep and travel to where nothing matters except this free feeling, this oneness of being.

© Jane Solomon
2009

  • H M Bascom

    H M Bascom

    Such a beautiful writing. where nothing matters except this free feeling, this oneness of being Excellent!

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Thank you so much Helen. Deeply appreciated. xxx

  • skinnyman

    skinnyman

    So beautiful Jane…sweet and tender..a meeting of a soulmate :) x

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Yes. Thank you so much Peter. xxx

  • Michael Degenhardt

    Michael Degenh...

    Jane, wow, your descriptive word choices always amaze me, as they take me, the reader, to where the words exist, the setting and accompanies me with the feelings that you so eloquently express. Your imagery is amazing and the writing just fantastic. Michael

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Thank you so much Michael. I will try not to let that go to my head. ;-) xxx

  • Anthea  Slade

    Anthea Slade

    Oh dear Jane this is really beautiful. You have captured with grace the coming together of souls, hearts, minds when love is real. A deeply satisfying read that touched my heart. xx

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Thank you Anthea. I am so pleased this touched you. xxx

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    sigh golly gosh how divinely beautiful this piece is…

    love xoxox

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Means a lot that you are here. Thanks Lisa. xxx

  • JRGarland

    JRGarland

    Beautiful write dear Jane. To find a love as this is the balm. Well done.

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Aw thanks JR my dear friend….thank you so much. xxx

  • Naylor

    Naylor

    Stunningly Gorgeous ((((((((((HUG))))))))))))
    I love the romance that drips off from your words … makes me smile …. To have such love in ones life is such a dream but its out there :)

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Thanks Celena darling. xxx

  • Trenchtownrock

    Trenchtownrock

    This is gorgeous writing Jane..so beautifully done.

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Ah, thanks Chris….you are such a honey. xxx

  • lupa

    lupa

    Jane…this is just incredible..”our dreams have boldly cancelled old debts…” your words just resonate in my bones this morning….wise souls and the ability to trust new love…xxx

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Oh Lupa…..you so got the message….the ability to believe in and trust new love….no room for what went before! Thank you my friend. xxx

  • valentina63

    valentina63

    Sweet tender romance in your beautifully crafted words Jane … sounds like spring is in your heart ….......lucky you :) ...lovely .:)xxoo

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Thanks Tina. My feet have left the ground…..hahaha!! xxx

  • Charma Chircop

    Charma Chircop

    What a beautiful heart dripping in sweet verses of passion and love-A fav—Charma

  • JaneSolomon replied

    ;-) thanks Charma. xxx

  • liliana

    liliana

    This expresses so beautifully and tenderly the love connection between twin souls….which is indeed a knowing beyond words. Another wonderful piece Jane xx

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Thank you Lili….it is indeed a knowing beyond words. xxx

  • Robin Monroe

    Robin Monroe

    this is beautiful:)

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Thank you so much Robin!! xxx

  • Del Millar

    Del Millar

    oh how beautiful Jane, says much that is deep true and tender oxo

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Ah Del…..your words always mean so much to me. Thank you. xxx

  • ShadowDancer

    ShadowDancer

    gosh jane, the whole last paragraph left me completely breathless

  • JaneSolomon replied

    That makes me feel so happy. Thanks beautiful! xxx

  • Pooh

    Pooh

    Tell me, my sweet … dreams or reality

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Oh real, real for sure…. thanks sweetie. xxx

  • awdigitaldreams

    awdigitaldreams

    jane love am not doing well with words right now but straight to the faves… xoxox

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Aw…thank you my sweetheart. Sending you big hugs and special love. xxx

  • cosimopiro

    cosimopiro

    Like watching a feather float on a warm summers breeze. Beautifully penned Jane.

  • JaneSolomon replied

    I love feathers. I pick them up all the time. I really do think they have meaning. Thank you Cos….your comments are always so uplifting. xxx

  • MichaelTravis

    MichaelTravis

    Beautiful,Beautiful reading I always enjoy.Excellent stuff my friend.
    MMMMMMMMMMMMMMWA! :)

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Thank you so much Michael. xx

  • Scott  d'Almeida

    Scott d'Almeida

    great words

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Thank you Scott! xx

  • andy tetlow

    andy tetlow

    oh wow…epic….i lost myself in your words…wonderful…

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Thank you so much Andy….what a wonderful comment. xx

  • linaji

    linaji

    Gosh Jane!!! love this one… it is like how I am feeling your my twin at glorious moments!!!

  • JaneSolomon replied

    So glad you felt this….as deeply it was intended. Much love. xx

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww jane
    this is MAGIC !!! i m stunned to silence
    :)

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Somehow I knew you would connect to this one Shoaib. Much love. xx

  • Tracey Mac

    Tracey Mac

    Your words always have the amazing ability to make me swoon Jane
    This is just so dreamy and pure love in the clouds…....xoxox

  • JaneSolomon replied 29 days ago

    Thank you sweetheart. I would say that the feeling is mutual. xxx

  • raymondoantonio

    raymondoantonio 29 days ago

    BELLISSIMO!! XO

  • JaneSolomon replied 29 days ago

    Thank you so much Ray! xxx

  • hsien-ku

    hsien-ku 28 days ago

    really lovely! hallucinogenic strawberry fields, oh my!

  • JaneSolomon replied 27 days ago

    ;-) thank you Judith. xx

  • tracyxkeema

    tracyxkeema 23 days ago

    i think this is marvelous and reading all these comments i’m not the only one, very descriptive, tender and delicate piece of writing, wonderful x

  • JaneSolomon replied 23 days ago

    Oh thank you so much Tracy. xxx

  • tone37

    tone37 22 days ago

    love it, love it, just love it…............
    wonderful writing.

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