"Balloon" Tanka & Prose 18/18
Inspired by the beautiful artwork of Lorenzo Castello. Thank you Lorenzo!
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"Balloon" Tanka & Prose 18/18 belongs to the following groups:
! ♥♥♥Love Is (Join us!)♥♥♥ !, All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Live, Love, Dream: May you have a Blessed Christmas Season and Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom!See the voyeur moon
High, high up from our balloon
Champagne in crystal
The night world explodes for us
Oh to feel so invincible
We lifted off in our beautiful red balloon in a bouncing gale of bubbly laughter. Even our shadow was bursting with glee and the moon had never glowed as brightly as it did that eve. There was triumphant joy in the air as we sealed our love with one long incredible earth-shattering-diamond-of-a-night-kiss that made ecstatic history. We whispered our heart vows to one another, witnessed by the wind which carried our words to every corner of the globe. The magical clink of crystal…..nothing could ever match it. “To love,” we said, as we exploded with passionate laughter and the night mimicked us in a bright temporal display of orgasmic fireworks. We were invincible. We were together. We were in love.
© Jane Solomon 2009
Del Millar
heavenly Jane.. I can feel this exactly as falling in love, how it glitters
and feels so crystal clear.
Thank you for making my start to my day :) oxo
JaneSolomon replied
I am so happy you enjoyed this Del! I love happy endings. xx
Lisa Jewell
Glorious imagery, so full of love and acceptance, I felt buoyant reading your beautiful words.
You’ve created such a masterful series.
Congratulations Jane,
Absolutely remarkable. xxx
JaneSolomon replied
I am delighted that you enjoyed these Lisa….means the world to me. xx
lianne
What a perfectly beautiful and romantic conclusion to this series Jane – every single one a masterpiece of its own, but as a body of work – just incomparable. So many exquisite images in this there is just no way to single out one. Brava Jane – brilliantly done!
JaneSolomon replied
Thank you so much Lianne. I deeply appreciate your support. xx
H M Bascom
Fabulous, fun and enjoyable read.
JaneSolomon replied
Thanks so much Helen. xx
erich biemer
wonderful again but sad a little too for the end of the series….
namaste
JaneSolomon replied
Guess so Erich. But with so much inspiration around….xx
kevinmawson
This is Awseome, orgasmic fireworks! very cool Jane!Nothing better than being up in a balloon!
km.
JaneSolomon replied
Thanks Kevin. I have never been in a balloon. This is all imagination! xx
raymondoantonio
MORE PERFECTION!! BELLISSIMO!!! XO
JaneSolomon replied
Thank you Ray! And for all your support. xx
sandra22
Jane….simply gorgeous (and this tanka and prose too :))
love sandra x
JaneSolomon replied
Glad you enjoyed Sandra, xx
TheWanderingBoo
beautifully divine
JaneSolomon replied
Thank you so much Boo. I really enjoyed writing it. xx
Robin Monroe
aaww..this is so romantic and divine…so beautiful:)
JaneSolomon replied
Thank you so much Robin. xx
Assef Al-Jundi
ecstatic under a “voyeur moon”...
enjoyed~
JaneSolomon replied
Thank you so much Assef. xx
JRGarland
I love your work. I’m going to come here more often. Well done.
JaneSolomon replied
Thank you so much JR. xx
RikkiWoods
How I wish I could write like this. Divine!
JaneSolomon replied
How sweet. Your writing is more than wonderful! Thank you Rikki. xx
Antanas
great work