"Scythe" Tanka and Prose 8/18

JaneSolomon
Author: JaneSolomon
Word Count: 228
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"Scythe" Tanka and Prose 8/18

Inspired by the beautiful artwork of Lorenzo Castello. Thank you for the inspiration Lorenzo!
Art
music

"Scythe" Tanka and Prose 8/18 belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Live, Love, Dream: and Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom!

Come and watch the scythe
Slashing through a paper night
Book and butterfly
Ace clubs a diamond heart
Would Vincent paint this dark night?

There were secrets hanging in the sky that night. He galloped in on a stray nightmare and watched from a distance. There was a somber moodiness, a sultry silence which hung in space. Stars moved away and kept their distance. She was as fragile as rice paper and holding tightly to her mysteries. Even lost kites and a lone butterfly floated in to watch the scythe slash through the planet and sky in a declaration of deadly war. The dreams in her soul jangled as the future tumbled out of the gash in a rush of blue blood, and finally, she submitted. The lights went out and there were fires fighting to light long dead hearts. Vincent sighed and wondered if he should paint this dark night. Then the sky bled music. The book fanned open and the pages swayed together as it was all written (even the most monstrous lies) and somewhere out there it all came to pass. So it was written, so it was done and the music played on. War, the father of death and lies. Peace the memory of living water and the breath of trees and new born babies. How much longer? If only….

© Jane Solomon 2009

  • erich biemer

    erich biemer

    pure magic…...

  • JaneSolomon replied

    thank you Erich. xx

  • eon  .

    eon .

    deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep indeed

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Hope you liked it Steve. xx

  • raymondoantonio

    raymondoantonio

    ...THE SKY BLED MUSIC…GOLD!! SOLID GOLD!! BELLISSIMO JANE!! XO

  • JaneSolomon replied

    Thank you Ray. You are always such a wonderful support. xx

  • TheWanderingBoo

    TheWanderingBoo

    wonderful writing

  • JaneSolomon replied

    thank you so much Simon. xx

  • Robin Monroe

    Robin Monroe

    beautiful:)

  • JaneSolomon replied

    thank you Robin! xx

  • autumnwind

    autumnwind

    wow! you can certainly tell how inspired you are by this amazing art. such wonders flowing from your pen! too beautiful!!! xoxoxo

  • Rhenastarr

    Rhenastarr

    Just incredible!

  • Coronus

    Coronus

    utterly entrancing!
    Before you I seriously did not know what a tanka was!
    And what a gorgeous poet to be introduced to this poetic style by!
    so thank you!

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  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    Congrats Jane…..for this beautiful tanka verse. I too like Jono had not heard before and it really is a beautiful format of verse… Your execution of this is really remarkable…Being as most of my work is free writing I am awe and inspired by this… I do try format sometimes and really enjoy it…. I have no idea if I could do this….well when I have the pleasure of reading yours…I feel complete I guess..XXX

  • Symmetry45

    Symmetry45

    Geez this is pisser good my dear. You MUST read a lot to be able to write like this.

  • lianne

    lianne

    Oh my gosh Jane – every one of these is better than the last! This is so remarkably fantastic – and such a beautiful interpretation of the art from which you take your inspiration. Just awesome!

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    sigh
    sublime writing Jane,
    I’m totally dizzy after reading.

    what a brilliant and beautiful mind you have x x x

  • cosimopiro

    cosimopiro

    You have captivated me and taken me on a wonderful journey with your writing. Don’t ever stop the music.

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