Rapt
Rapt belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E] and Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom!Imagination
My heart joy rapt around thee
Burgeoning passion
Longing fills the universe
Paradise between your sighs
We dreamed of flying through a silent stellar sky, swept up into the sacred night as we voyaged to our secret garden. He spilt his silky seed like an intricate Persian carpet and I received his design like a ripe pomegranate in a hanging garden. Cleansed by the ocean we gazed upon each other like a never ending story written on hand made parchment. I know thee. Wrapped in linguistics and fused in deep kisses, I was the ancient African cave and he the eternal licking flame. Naked, we danced and finger-painted passion in broad strokes on solid granite walls. Forever.
I give all to thee
A garden sweetly open
Combination burns
I receive thee like the tide
Our love becomes an ocean
© Jane Solomon 2009
erich biemer
wow////WOW…....
JaneSolomon replied
Glad you like it erich! xx
eon .
Sea of Tranquility MMM ” – ))
JaneSolomon replied
Hi Steve. Kinda. Sometimes gets stormy. xx
Anthea Slade
Wow Jane this possesses such powerful and exquisite sensuality and passion. What a pleasure to read and imbibe after a long day at work. You are such a beautiful poet. I love every magical word my dearest friend. Anthea xx
JaneSolomon replied
Thank you Anthea….I am so happy that you like this. xxx
Pooh
“Spilt his silky seed”, “African cave and eternal lickin flame” U 1 hot mumma, what grand word pictures, this either stumps me, or dammit girl, I can feel another one coming on, your a wordsmitth’s muse ….. awwww, shit, the steaks, burning
JaneSolomon replied
hahaha!!! thanks Pooh! xx
awdigitaldreams
love the rhythm and meter jane:) xoxox
JaneSolomon replied
thanks sweetheart. xx
raymondoantonio
YOU DO ROMANTIC/EROTIC SO WELL JANE!! XX
JaneSolomon replied
thank you Ray! XX
Trenchtownrock
This is a soft ride through a sea of loving..nice sailing my friend..
JaneSolomon replied
thank you big time ttr. xxx
billfox256
“His presence is enchantment,
You beg him not to go;
Old volumes shake their vellum heads
and tantalize, just so.”
Emily Dickinson
Terrific!!!!, Bill
JaneSolomon replied
gorgeous!! thanks Bill! xx
Wendy Slee
how incredibly passionately beautiful…....
JaneSolomon replied
thank you so much Wendy! xx
ArcadiaTempest
Lovemaking that would stop the world me thinks! You have the passion dripping in this sublime verse…I thought the flow of this verse was like silk XXX
JaneSolomon replied
KarenSue I love hearing from you. Thanks so much for being here. xxx
autumnwind
Ummm….what have you been eating for breakfast lately? : )) This is the diet for me. Wow. Swept away in your words as you wrote of being swept away. Your talent of expression is extremely effective and so beautiful, to say te least. Breathtaking!!! xoxoxo
JaneSolomon replied
Thank you so much Shar what a beautiful comment. xx
autumnwind
that was, to say the least. ms. typo here : ))
JaneSolomon replied
gotcha xx
lianne
Jane – this format is just exquisitely perfect for you. Your sensuous voice resonates here with such erotic and passionate imagery that it is hard to catch one’s breath before the next image overwhelms one with its beauty. Extraordinary and stunning!
JaneSolomon replied
Lianne, thank you so much, your comment means the world to me. xxx
Charma Chircop
Our love becomes an ocean…beautiful deep love.. excellent write—Charma
JaneSolomon replied
Thank you so very much Charma! xx
wingsoffire
Love the intertwining passion of this exciting piece dear Jane!!! An instant fav for me!
JaneSolomon replied
Glad you enjoyed this. Thank you Charlene. xx
TAHill
well done Lady Jane…tah
JaneSolomon replied
thank you so much tah. xxx
Erika .
I receive thee like the tide
_Our love becomes an ocean-....Jane, this is so captivating. Just love your writing! xxx
JaneSolomon replied
Erika, thank you so much sweetheart, I do appreciate it. xxx
Ushna Sardar
JaneSolomon replied
Ushna, I am thrilled!! Thank you so much!! xxx
lupa
“We danced and finger painted passion…” i LOVE this Jane…just beautiful..
JaneSolomon replied
Thank you so much lupa xx
James Watson
Congratulations !
JaneSolomon replied
Thank you James! xx