Legacy

ANOTHER WONDERFUL VOYAGE OF DISCOVERY!! BELLISSIMO JANE!! XX

Fate with wings, always close by…...I agree with Jen, such a gorgeous flow to this. Amazing how sometimes words just put themselves down of their own free will….......
Really like this one Jane xxx

I’m always a sucker for a sailing metaphor. Your writing has a natural flow as the trade winds of thought push you in the jet stream of imagination

Reap what you sow, if only life really was like that…

Lovely poem Jane.

You really do have a wonderful way with words … they dance across the screen/paper … weaving intricate patterns and fabulous images … I particularly like “She flounces in with yesterday” ... it seems she/fate may have the personality of a teenager!?? ;o))

The wind blows a ‘No Blame’ song
I carefully log my thought patterns
A round house kick in paradise
I’ve had them from the shadows
Thinking can be dangerous…......these lines really stuck out to me in this very cool piece…love your way of stating things…good work.

You kick ass Lady Jane :) Seriously, your voice is so strong. I am always drawn to your honesty and your open soul. LOVE this, especially the last four lines. xoxo

an ode to the power of choice is what it feels like to me…...

soul searching write (aren’t they all I guess). your words always move me and this one makes me pause and causes me to feel I need to do a bit of slowing down and a lot more, well, contemplating my choices of late I guess. Awesome write sweet Jane. xoxoxo

Your words in the side panel say so much in themselves. Such a beautiful piece you have written Jane about our choices in thought and deed. x

A beautifully written piece as always.

beautiful.I’m feeling a little seasick lately.Not enough dancing I suppose :-) x

Meaningful writing from a beautihul heart.

liberating.. we can choose.. exquisite read and write my darlingxxx

Sweet, sweet karma. You either love her, or hate the ghosts.
beautiful written truth, Jane. :) love, K xo

Extraordinary Jane – and so totally freeing as well as responsible for our own choices. Wonderfully well written!

“If I can stop one heart from breaking,
I shall not live in vain;
If I can ease one life the aching,
Or cool one pain,
Or help one fainting robin
Unto his nest again,
I shall not live in vain.”
Emily Dickinson

Terrific writing!!!!, Bill

Lovely piece. I really like “I sift my thoughts like castor sugar” : )

meaningful and honest…beautiful piece of writing…

so gorgeous! Wow! And congratulaltions on having this featured in the featured writing section.
many, many kudos to you and your brilliant mind and soul.

Jane, you are a powerful, strong, and lovely woman who always gives so much with your writing, I always enjoy reading your truths, and they are beautiful dear friend!

excellent read Jane! wouldn’t you join Core? :)

Some call her ‘Fate’ but she is real
And beautifully will she deliver
Her arrival at times a little late
And just as forgetfulness sets in
She flounces in with yesterday
And I will have to dance again

magiccccccccccccccccccccccc
lol thats all i can say
i suck at comments but
i love your writing darling !

This is absolutely stunning. Such vision and emotion. Very nice indeed.

I enjoyed this Jane :) and you do create your own reality.

beautiful ethereal quality to this, quite powerful x

Jane…..I would like to be a crew mate on your ship. You inspire just when I need it.. To risk the waters of the storm to reach a safe port….that kinda passage is not for the faint hearted. The writing has your beauti-eloquence to it…. ( new word had to be made me thinks…) XXX

well done..a lovely write….tah

this is like a wonderful flowing bumpy ride. and when it’s over it feels so full of love

wonderfully worded poetry, Jane…

Dancing with hate….really emotive

beautiful righting