HIS BODY, HIS HEART, HIS MIND, AND HIS SOUL...

Author: JaneAParis
Word Count: 179
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Body…
-His body would be my other half,
...when we unite making me whole
-His eyes would look right through me,
...right into my soul
-His smile would be with me all day,
...at night he would want me to play

Heart…
-His heart would be sweet and patient,
...making me feel forever complaisant
-His heart would be full of feelings that were real,
...that would be his appeal
-His love would be deep,
...belonging to me forever to keep

Mind…
-His thoughts would touch my mind,
...and his intelligence would attract me in kind
-His common sense and smartness would remind
...me to see the world without blinds
-His intellect would give him the ability to see that mutual respect,
...makes our love complete and perfect

Soul…
-His soul would be my mate, whereon
...we are forever intertwined, connected, and drawn
-His soul would be compassionate because,
...he would love me despite my flaws
-His soul would be my find,
...enticing me to relax, unwind, and reach peace of mind

JANE Á PARIS

HIS BODY, HIS HEART, HIS MIND, AND HIS SOUL...

The attributes of my ideal mate…my dream man. His body, his heart, his mind, and his soul. My always and forever love. Through eternity and beyond…

Written for Oh Love, Oh Mind Competition: “BCLW” Number 3) bcl13

HIS BODY, HIS HEART, HIS MIND, AND HIS SOUL... belongs to the following groups:

Art Inspired by Dreams, Bits and Pieces , Blue Room, Boredom Competitions on the 24/7, Bubblettes, Cards: Best of Your Best, Everyday Life, Happy Haven, The Sensual Word, The Two Of Us and WMG

KEITH R. WILL..., 6 months ago

as if you’re longing for love that’s one of a kind
Hilton Briscoe, 6 months ago

DAMN! I AINT GONNA WIN NOW! you best mention me in your interview! lmao
JaneAParis in reply to Hilton Briscoe’s comment, 6 months ago

You are so sweet. But I know how you write, damned good. Thanks for the compliment. You made my day. Smiles from Jane.
plyle, 5 months ago

WOW!! Honestly, I should have seen a lot more comments for how absolutely amazing this is Jane. Comparatively you make me look like a schoolboy, and I appreciate the lesson!!

Just lovely lovely work!!!
JaneAParis in reply to plyle’s comment, 5 months ago

Oh you are so sweet. Thanks for reading and sharing. Smiles from Jane:-)
TeriLee, 5 months ago

This is amazing…..so beautiflly written….great work!
JaneAParis in reply to TeriLee’s comment, 5 months ago

Thank you so much for your kind comments! Smiles from Jane:-)
Aurora Pintore, 5 months ago

Congratulation Jane, this is an amazing poem, I love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kate Purdy, 5 months ago

Congratulations, Jane. Beautifully innocent, but realistic; dreams DO come true!